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.::Re$tricted Vs. DeLeon::.
.::Rules::. No Crew Votes No Hate Votes No D/R'D Votes 10 Bars - 20 Lines Max 5 Votez Winz Spits Due 10 Minutes After Checks .::Checkity Check::. Good Luck ~R~ |
checkin.................
best believe im gonna type fast as hell! |
Aiyo Check It....3....2....1.... :gfy: This Kid's Voice Is Screechy, Busting Windows When This Kid Speaks, Kids Style Lacks Originality and Bleek, His Own Spits Ignore This Geek/ I Drop The Mic and Spit Missles At This Kid Out Of My Gundam Metal, Force Impedin Incredible, Eat This Kid Alive, This Bitch is Sweet and Edible/ Re$tricted Snappin Ya Neck, Making You See Shit In Reverse Vision, Each Punch Cutting Ya Life Short, Decreasing Health With Every Bar Insision/ Stomping You Out, Like Cigarette Butts, Incresing The Well-Being, Once Your Gone From RB, Your D/R Phonies Will Follow, Fast-Fleeing/ Sorry To Break Silence, But Kid You Put The Fucking Crowd To Sleep, Run Around and Weep, My Punches Knocked Your Rib-Cage, Down and Deep/ Got You Lacking Breath Probably Why All Your Spitting Is Hot-Air, R Concaving Ya Skull, Punches Lighting This Kid Up Like A Road-Flare/ I'm Converging The Worlds Rotation, So Your Punches Come Quicker, Re$tricted Purging This Kids Face In, Watchin You Shake and Shiver/ This Kid Flows Like Generic Tampons That Stretched Out Cunts Inhabit, Massacering This Kid With Every Punch That Strikes This Kid and Stabs Him/ You Impersonating Me Kid, But Every Attempt You Try, Seems To Fail, Merking You Is What I Did, Beating Your Ass Like Horny Guyz In Jail/ R Spit Down Ya Throat and Shit Down All Your Arteries and Veins, Ripped Apart Your Carcus, Just To Make Sure No Wackness Remained/ ~R~ |
In Cursive-or-Caps, I got these Tournaments-Wrapped I can Verbally-Bash, cuz ya'll aint Worthy-of-Dap You Worship-my-Rap, I spit it Perfect-Exact But don't Worry-Relax, you need to Work-on-your-Act As I'm Confirmin-the-Math on these Circular-Graphs To learn your Couragless-Staff aint worth a Turd-or-a-Crap Your Verses-all-Lack, you need Terms-to-Enhance You should Rehearse-in-Advance, you aint Deservin-a-Chance So I'm Cursin'-in-Chats, as I Emerge-in-this-Match You rip your Journal-to-Scraps like your bitin -ryhmes in tha past I paid Thirty-in-Cash to fuck your Girl-in-the-Snatch I saw Curves-and-a-Rack once her Skirt-was-Detached She looked Perverted-in-Dance but she was Flirtin-with-Class And Slirpin-my-Sack till I had Burgendy-Slacks Acting Perky-and-Laughed, I showed this Virgin-my-Tats I fucked her Firm-in-the-Crack till I was Further-Intacted But there's no Cure-for-The-Clap, I gave her Germs-and-a-Rash Then passed her to Bernie-Mac and he gave her Hermit-Crabs This shit raised his Thermastat, now you need Nursery-Pads |
.::Aight Let's Get Votes In::. ~R~ |
oh honestly dis was a nice battle both had a nice flow but really no personals but yo had some good flow and punches connected and re$tricted nice vocab and multis
Deleon-your shit was hott but more like a freestyle u have 2 go at yo opponent but u a get it u got some ill shit i give it 2 u nice drop bestline-You Worship-my-Rap, I spit it Perfect-Exact But don't Worry-Relax, you need to Work-on-your-Act stands out worsteline-In Cursive-or-Caps, I got these Tournaments-Wrapped I can Verbally-Bash, cuz ya'll aint Worthy-of-Dap more like u talkin 2 n-e way talk about your opponent overall yo verse gets a 7.5/10 becuz of lack of personals da only thing is wrong doe but u a get nice verse Re$tricted-1 of yo adverage verses good vocab nice punches nice flow bestline-Re$tricted Snappin Ya Neck, Making You See Shit In Reverse Vision, Each Punch Cutting Ya Life Short, Decreasing Health With Every Bar Insision nice worsteline-none overall verse gets a 9/10 had more personals wouldve been closer if deleon had more personals but on and off nice battle winner-re$tricted |
alright now lets get some more votes in here......
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#1----------------Uppin----------------#1 ~R~ |
yeah..gud batle..both nice...but restircted punch was a bit harder...deloen nice verse but res content out done ya...
res...7/10 Not ur best verse to honest.. de..L...6/10 v/res |
Restriced i`ve never seen you use a personal . . .Why is that?
It`s very suspicious i advise you to start using them thats the reason you lost to kingz. |
^^^true..but dat makes him even beter..coz if he is beaten peeps and not evne dissin then....wot will he do to mcs if he did diss em..he wld kill then..
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Uppin this shit for some honest votes....................
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lmao at you. not using personals is a sign for a biter. |
come on now can we get some votes in here..........
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UPPIN for some honest votes in this tight ass battle...........
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Don't Accuse Me Of Shit...That Shit Is All Original..
LOL AT YOUR SAYING NO PERSONALS MEANS BITING LOL... Please Kid Go Jump Off A Cliff and Die...For ReaL.. Fucking Faggot ~R~ |
ok i battled restricted he had personals on me they was weak but he had em but umm
restricted opener was decent had multies punch didnt reall do much to me though and your closer was decent again bout all i gotta say about it and the rest of your verse was lil above average had plenty of mulites but them commas get old my advice is drop the commas but i reall didnt see any personals in that verse punchs where there but didnt like all them what your punchs are gonna do to you lines overall nice verse though deleon your opener was not to good wrong place to put somethin about a tournament and the punch didnt really connect and your closer was..... i dont know how to describe it so ima leave that alone and the rest of your verse i didnt really like this spit sounded like you was more focused on dissin some girl he probably aint even got but the multies was there an some good puncsh in the opening lines just didnt feal it from the girl shit down didnt really say much about him after that you got skills though i see u brah vote restricted |
Restricted-Nice spit........You came hard and weak with it which means you took this
really by a lil though......you had everything uncluding similies and metaphores......just work on a few things and ya will be there...... Deleon-Came aight if ya think about it....Work on something structure was ok but work on some thing.....balace was good but some was weak and some was hard.....But keep elevatin and work on alot of things v/restricted |
Blah @ this battle.. both of you using that tired battle. Fuck metas, multis and dashes if you guys aren't going to even mention your opponent. I mean jesus, just set up a self glorifying battle or something. I suppose in the twisted world of this battle, ~R~ wins for stretched his lines longer and having more multis and wierder lines... or something.
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