_MuRdErouS_MiC Vs gavin
 

Alright Check In You Got The RUlez Now Spit

Punk

yo u smoked so much weed u forgot to feed your rabbit for u its a habbit bring your face anywhere near me ill stabbit/
u ure smell i cant tell wot it is it makes me dizz.....E pop a bottle ova ure head to fizz......E/
why u come here ure so dumb here u know the meaning of fear wen u look me in the eye all u think is i cant die soo young boy u ain nothing but cow dung ull get slung over my shoulder wen i knock u out with a boulder ure getting older be braver and bolder ure bitch i told her yo his dick must make u sick why dont u come here and give mine a lik so like and likes till she was outta syliva then i became a muff diva/
enough on ure bith i'll leave u with a stich wen my blade go right through u ull have nothing left to do but die in hole then i will steal ure south pole jumpa.

Good God,That Verse Sucked So Much Like Lesbians On Men.|
And,The Only Way His VErse Can Get A Perfect Score If He Counted 1 to 10.||
Victim Of Whackness,Ill Tell You NowThis Kid Dont Got Game.|
I'll Also Tell You THe ONly Way He WIll Be HEard Is If He Shouted His Name.||
Never Call An Open Battle Until You Check The Tutorials Forum.|
Stupid Asses Verse Even Left Veterans To Complete BoreDom.||
Victim Of No Hope Like The magiCs Winning A Championship Gold.|
Everytime He Raps One Peice Of Gavins Story Unfolds.||
Really,This Kid Can't Rap Even The SikneEs Got Infected.|(ROYAL SICKNESS)
So,I Act Like A Football PLayer Once He Throws A Punch It Gets InTerCeptEd.||
Evenely Matched,Hah Its Like Me VS A Handicapped Citizen.|
Sickning,Even His Whack Verse Needed To Be Pre-Written.||
U,Need Some EleVatin Look At Ya Structure Its Like Blind Men Bein Able 2 See.|
C,I Knock Him To Tennesee,He Asked Kids To Vote For Him But Even They *Disagreed*.||
Kid,In Your Dreams You'll Only Win So JUst Think OF You Gettin Luck.|
Everytime I Throw Punches Gavin You Betta Run And Duck.||
Damn I Merked Him Cuz GaVinS Verse SuCkeD.|||

THere Stop Buggin Me Now


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Just like the Murderous' verse said- Gavins Verse Sucked.... Vote- Murderous.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124241

Wdf Dude....Im Not Voting For Your BAttle Your Vote Is Not Even Explained.....

Sorry bro, guess my vote doesn't count here yet...

Can't vote on either one, they both were whack...


Gavin, go back to husslin...

And Mic, why would lesbians suck dick? Makes no sense...



...2 thumbs down

Yo, gavin, ur verse was pretty weak man. u had like no punches and alot of ur shit didn't make sense. u did havan aight flow tho, but mostly that was coz u said shit that didnt make sense. muderous came with better punches basically. so

vote - Muderous Mic

drop a vote?

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124183

Since it won't let me edit my last post...

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...t=124321&page=3

^ Take your own advice on Spelling ^

Piece isn't spelled Peice
Sickening not Sickning


Two preschool words

PLease Vote On THis.....Poll Vote LOL Will Return Favor

sorry man, wont let me poll vote, idont hav 100 posts.

Gavin ur verse had no meaning it was wack

Murderous Mic was better overall

Break Down

Murderous Mic

Flow 7/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 7/10
Punches 7/10
27/40

Gavin

Flow 5/10
Rhymes 4/10
Structure 3/10
Punches 5/10
17/40

VOTE _MurDerOus_MiC

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Just Drop Link

aight heres how i saw it

gaven u had good punches but the problem was they werent organized i think u should try a better rhyme scheme cause it doesnt flow too well. i liked the line bout stabbin in tha face that was good.

muderous mic ur flow is great the only lije i think didnt make sense was bout the lesbians but it still fit. the way u splled out that message wit ur lines was crazy i liked that. u have good hits i liked it a lot

my vote-murderous mic
but u both did good

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murderous won this because he had better structure, punches and just better verse overall. I thought the other verse didn't flow very well nad have nasy punchlines for murd to be offended or evem take you serious. Murd oe dis quite easerly with his rymes n punches. No hard feelings

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wow
 

yo gavin man, u need to go back to feedin your rabbits and carryin cow dung cause that shit was bad, u forced ur multis to a new extreme not yet seen on this website

other guy- ur shit wasn't great but it killed gavins and the letter scheme thing was a nice touch

absolutely a one sided battle....gavin u had nothing that really interested me...played punches or no punches at all no rhyme schme no structure no flow no multies no wordplay no good vocab your verse was ass...murderous ya verse was nice tho i liked it alot of originality and hott punches good wordplay a couple multies....overall u murked him

vote: murderous

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gavins verse was suppppppppppppppppppppa wack.... sorry i forgot a P in dat supa...Vote goes 2 _murderous_mic

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Alright now that my vote here counts, Ill offer an explained vote...

Gavin your punchlines were weak... Perfect example wtf does feeding a rabbit have to do with being able to write a good rhyme... or the Fizz-E line...Wtf was the punchline? Fizzy? it doesn't pop-- its not a line thats going to make the reader go..Holy Shit that was some cruel shit...Try to work on that and you will improve greatly.

Murderous... I think its really creative the way you did that isht down the left side of your verse... It think you had a couple punchlines here that were pretty nice and you had a more than decent flow so I definately give you the win just cuz I think you have a deeper grasp of this than your opponent does... Good luck to both of you in the future and please vote on this battle if you haven't already and I will return the favor in another of your battles.... Vote: Goes to Murderous http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124935