G:Deuce vs. Mike12Ikeda
 

rulez: should be obvious...
no crew votes, d/r, hate
10-20 lines
CHECK IN and you got 1 HOUR max. to spit ya best verse.....
keystyle...no prewritten shit....peace...may the best emcee win

fa sho, checkity check my nigga, let the best mc win, fa sho

gonna go eat dinner in between but im checking in.................................

fa sho, same here........................................

okay hmm while you guys go and eat lets have a word from our sponsers lol this is gonna be a great battle

hmmm....dont count on it ive fallen off a bit....

Every voter thinks a win for Mike12Ikeda is just-a-wish
But I got a “shot” if Los Angeles could-be-saved-by-“Fish”

Even deaf people wouldn't wanna “hear” G. Duece spit every-word
Damn straight you from “the Underworld” cause you should never-be-heard

You ain’t the king, you the “queen” of this ring, have you heard-of-Sable?//
G: Duece is one emcee that I’ll hurt-n-disable
If you ever get a contract, I will burn-the-label
You need a DJ in this battle to come and “turn”-the-“tables”….

Only way you’d find a win is if you take-my-spits
Don’t like poo for dinner, but I’ll bake-ya-shit
And rape-ya-bitch, I like her body, so I will take-her-tit, and shake-the-clit….

Your rhymes are like Nike shoes, you don’t know what’s “inside-the-threads”
Your rhythms-dead, make your computer screen turn crimson-red
After I punish-and-torture you like Iraqi POWs
You will never take home a W even though you rap all serious
Get this emcee a tampon cause I made this pussy bleed like he was having-his-period….

damn wish i coulda come harder....but meh....good luck...feel like u got this already!

gduece drop ya verse i thought u check ed in already...peace yo

Ight lets do dis...

Let me hit you wit that word usage first….

Breath take when I spiritualize, these lyrical lines
Speaking tumors wit words that reduce brain size
Nose bleed by venom lines like a lyrical handstand
I fill my bars to his lungs, making lyrical hand fans (like them church fans)

Come wit it nigga….

Words relaxin, I lay back, my lines divide and rip rhymes to fractions
I’ll "roll the credits", cause Mike’s lines are "missing all the action".
Mike reminds me of “Cosby”, he spits “pudding”, his words are just not “hard” hittin
My lines melt out his eye sockets and have him seeing nothing but “jello” vision
I’m stitching up his rap cause my verbs left too many holes in his mind
Mark an “X” on that spot, but your wackness made “files” hard to find (X-Files –read it again)
I could spit through your mind, break down my rhymes to teach you how to use it
Move down your spind, quick stopping your heart, now that’s acoustic
I will merk Mike's ass this first time, and leave his carcus under lead ground (Bullets)
And have his mind scattered than them pics of DP (Disaster Piece) in webcam
You say your rhymes bring clips and gaps in black pens
Nigga Please, I think you need to reload your raps man

16 lines, 8 bars....Quick right

uppin for votes for dis.......................................good drop Mike

Yo I think this was a decent battle here

Mike:
I like the verse with the DJ "turnin tables"- Unfortunately it was your strongest punchline in this one... I can obviously see you get all the concepts but in this battle I don't think you implemented them to apex ability.

G Deuce: While I think you had alot more punchlines in your verse none of them were really that strong... However I think the metaphors you used in this helped you edge out the narrow Victory. I give Mike a 6.49 Out of 10 and Ima give GDeuce a 6.50 Vote GDeuce.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124310

uppin for more votes for dis...................................

this wasnt that great of a battle but here is the break down

g:duce
best line=Words relaxin, I lay back, my lines divide and rip rhymes to fractions
I’ll "roll the credits", cause Mike’s lines are "missing all the action".
--nice multi

worst line=Breath take when I spiritualize, these lyrical lines
Speaking tumors wit words that reduce brain size
--wack nuff said..

mike
best line=Even deaf people wouldn't wanna “hear” G. Duece spit every-word
Damn straight you from “the Underworld” cause you should never-be-heard
--shit that line might have won u the battle ahha^

worst line=Only way you’d find a win is if you take-my-spits
Don’t like poo for dinner, but I’ll bake-ya-shit
--no comment


iight think mike came alot harder in this battle i liked his flow and some of his punches expecillay that uunderworld line damn that line was funny so thats y i mike gets my vote
nuff said...

Mike12Ikeda: ok.......well the verse wasn't that bad you needed to
throw more punches in the rhymes cuz battles to me revolve mostly
on punches.......multis aren't important. your flow was good only one line stretched. the vocab was a bit basic...it was creative in a way by mentioning celebs & dat kind of shit... the effectiveness wasn't that good I would say only this line was effective:

"If you ever get a contract, I will burn-the-label
You need a DJ in this battle to come and “turn”-the-“tables"

G:Deuce well the verse was a lil above Mike12Ikeda's....punches way more
than Mike12Ikeda and as I said b4 battles revolve around punches.... flow
was good..... vocab well you said bigger words than him but vocab ain't that
important either.... creativity well you mentioned shows not many people
do that & effectiveness was half decent most effective line in my opinion
would be:

"I’m stitching up his rap cause my verbs left too many holes in his mind
Mark an “X” on that spot, but your wackness made “files” hard to find"

Punches: G:Deuce
Flow: tie
Creativity: tie
Vocab: G:Deuce
Effectiveness: G:Deuce

honest vote......

goes to: G:Deuce

word of wisdom: up the punches a lot more & make it more
effective like more personals...........

^lmfao

mike your opener was nice good wordplay and creative but punch didnt hit that hard though your closer wasnt to good to me either last long was stretched not very creative either not much of anything in it i liked and the rest of your verse was inconsistent it started off tight an fell off bad to me in the middle an never really picked back up first 8 lines where nice the rest where weak to me just work on stayin consitent and not stretchin out ya bars cause it kills the punch most of the time

deuce your opener ummmm tumors make your brain swell so that didnt really make no since to me so not much there but good wordplay an your closer .... decent i guess didt really see much i liked in that either and the rest of your verse had good wordplay and all some good punchs and some not really connected i was fealin less then half of your verse only liked about 6 lines the rest where off to me
Words relaxin, I lay back, my lines divide and rip rhymes to fractions
I’ll "roll the credits", cause Mike’s lines are "missing all the action".
Mike reminds me of “Cosby”, he spits “pudding”, his words are just not “hard” hittin
My lines melt out his eye sockets and have him seeing nothing but “jello” vision
I’m stitching up his rap cause my verbs left too many holes in his mind
Mark an “X” on that spot, but your wackness made “files” hard to find
^ all sick but not enough

vote mike

Multis:mike
Punches:tie
Wordplay:mike
Wordage:duece
Entertaining:lmao MIKE

my vote goes to mike cuz his punches were funny i was laughing reading it that shit...his lines were mostly punches and his vocab was good..Mike i liked ur shit to..u came hard but mikes punches were more entertainined..so Mike gets da vote..alright battle

SB

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break down

Mike12IKEDA:good verse,solid structure,um good flow,tight
best line:You ain’t the king, you the “queen” of this ring, have you heard-of-Sable?//
G: Duece is one emcee that I’ll hurt-n-disable
If you ever get a contract, I will burn-the-label
You need a DJ in this battle to come and “turn”-the-“tables”….
pretty good,good wordplay.structure,good solid flow
worst line:You will never take home a W even though you rap all serious
Get this emcee a tampon cause I made this pussy bleed like he was having-his-period….
loose rhyming,but good
work on: add some punches in your verse and youll be sicker
overall: 7/10

GDEUCE:good verse,but some lines made me shake my head,but pretty average flow,your structure wasnt the very best either.
best line:I’m stitching up his rap cause my verbs left too many holes in his mind
Mark an “X” on that spot, but your wackness made “files” hard to find
not very good,but the best in there
worst line:teach you how to use it
Move down your spind, quick stopping your heart, now that’s acoustic
rough flow,not very good structure
work on:your structure,add some punches,but apart from that fine.
overall:6/10

FINAL VOTE: MIKE12IKEDA

flow-mike
punches-mike
personals-none
structure-mike
creativity-tie
enjoyment-mike

vote/mike

you had a better overall verse.....your flow was going good and your structure was bettr then his......work on your punches and deffinly put personals in your verse even if they are weak it is better then nun

g-you need to elevate......i would expect sumwun with your status to come alot harder and better.......but i guess that i over estamated you....

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uppin for honest, educated votes here................

aight listen...

mike good structure but kinda work on punches i didnt really see any there like and half of the punches are played and arnt really punches at all your flow is mediocare your prolly best thing of this battle was ur structure.... work on everything

deuce not to shabby your flow was hard to follow cuz of structure but once i figured it out you killed it with multies and wordplay, and you came with punches unlike mike thats why

DEUCE GETS MY VOTE

ok i likeed both verses but G really had da punches dat made we wanna stop and say god damn mike u had punches dat connected and it was a pretty nice flow 2 go along both verses stayed consitant threw yo whole drop and both laid down a nice battle

mike-

You ain’t the king, you the “queen” of this ring, have you heard-of-Sable?//
G: Duece is one emcee that I’ll hurt-n-disable
If you ever get a contract, I will burn-the-label
You need a DJ in this battle to come and “turn”-the-“tables”….

^^ nice piece of work all was consitant nice drop

worsteline-none nice way 2 go wit the flow

overall verse gets a 8.7/10

G-duece

bestline-Words relaxin, I lay back, my lines divide and rip rhymes to fractions
I’ll "roll the credits", cause Mike’s lines are "missing all the action".

nice drop descenty throught out the verse

worsteline-none

overall verse gets a 9/10

winner-g-duece

VOTE ON THIS BATTLE YALL OR I AINT VOTIN ON YUR GUYS BATTLES NO MORE
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124941

Aight i think mike came harder with punches and flowed better.... is shit reads like he just rapped of tha dome
i think G u thought too much u should jus kick back and flow , i have the same problem some times and peeps hit me up bout it so just work on that other than that u aight

KEEP Elevatin!

V= Mike

duece i like you rhyme slot. this si a close battle. nice wordplay in the begining. i thought you could have won if you didn't write so much. you did good with the multiples. you lacked hard hittin punches towards the end of your verse. mike you came hard though. you were consistent throughout your verse,nice punches and multiples. i really like your punches, keep it going. sorry duece nice battle dogg.return the fava

vote-mike

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uppin for real educated votes.....................

ok both work on vocab and personals and multis
im gonna give this 2 g duece his punches hit harder his structure was better
good verse from both both could use elevation though