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YoungKD33 VS. vinman (vote)
lets go rules are:
no hate no d/r no bite no crew u spit first 10 - 20 lines igght |
ok lets get it poppin
My lyrics are like KNIVES to VINMAN so you can SEE i'm RIPPIN THIS DUDE TA SHREDS/ Damn since line ~OnE~ VINMANS been DEAD/ This DUDES a BITCH got him like MUHAMUD ALI...ALL SHOOK UP/ Before you can LOOK UP you'll get STUCK UP like RICH WHITE GIRLS that must SUCK/ Got the .45 with the PEARL HANDLE...tryna leave ya body like DA BAND all DISMANTLED/ OH...thought you were to HOT TA HANDLE..? bitch please i blow out ya FLOW with ease like the WIND TO A CANDLE/ PUCHLINES i got AMPLE so lets AMPLIFY THE HEAT/ YOU couldn't PAVE ya way to a WIN if built the ROAD to the STREET/ KD crazy flow undescrite every line i'll tingle ya spine and make you BOW TO DEFEET/(Defeat) Your only DREAMING OF VICTORY like spitin in ya SLEEP/ thats it 10 lines drop 10 back without feeding off my verse... |
i like yo verse it was tight for a newb fina spit
check it yo rhmyes was boring and made the crowd go BOO MY FLOW IS SO FAST AnD MADE YO BODy SPIN TOO im comin at this nigga and im spittin this shit fast we only in the first round and i dont think he will last he say that i dream of victory and that i rap on the street but im pucnhing this nigga from his head to feet my flow is like a chemical its deadly and its sting before even stared he was scared to get in the ring(mat) im spittin and he shaking making his whole body turn but as sooin as my flow touches its gona both sting and burn im tired of weak ass niggas that think they can win before we even start im have this nigga pinned got this bitch breathless he cant even use his tounge because my flow was so daedly it blew out his damn lungs its only the seventh bar and this bitch is already dead hes at the end of his mark like a broken pencil lead this nigga say that his flow is the deadliest ever seen yea the FUCK RIGHT ONLY TO THE PREMATURE RETARDED TEENS i shoot yo ass up all they could find were the bits you was crumbled in the corner like the golden cracker RITS |
damn...you had to use all 20 lines to try and top my ten...shyt i thought we could keep it fair but whatever...uppin for explained votes...if you vote isn't explained it won't count...uppin
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ok...stop sleepin...uppin for votes on this bullshyt...
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all right all right youngkd33- some of ur shit was kinda whack best line-OH...thought you were to HOT TA HANDLE..? bitch please i blow out ya FLOW with ease like the WIND TO A CANDLE u had pretty good punches overall but a ruined flow vinman- u kept a nice flow goin and u got some good punches in , this was a close match but if young diddnt mess up his flow he would of got vote- Vinman
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o shit this wasnt a free post i didnt kno it was 100 posts
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^^^its aight....so its still 0 - 0 uppin for more votes...
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YO WHATS UP VINMAN HAD DIS CUZ OF HIS PUNCHES AND FLOWZ
YOUNG U HAD SOME GOOD FLOWZ MAN WORK ON YO PUNCHES AND STRUTURE VINMAN BEST LINE:he say that i dream of victory and that i rap on the street but im pucnhing this nigga from his head to feet my flow is like a chemical its deadly and its sting before even stared he was scared to get in the ring(mat) im spittin and he shaking making his whole body turn but as sooin as my flow touches its gona both sting and burn im tired of weak ass niggas that think they can win before we even start im have this nigga pinned NICE HOMIE I LIKED WORST LINE:check it yo rhmyes was boring and made the crowd go BOO MY FLOW IS SO FAST AnD MADE YO BODy SPIN TOO YOUNG BEST LINE:My lyrics are like KNIVES to VINMAN so you can SEE i'm RIPPIN THIS DUDE TA SHREDS/ Damn since line ~OnE~ VINMANS been DEAD/ This DUDES a BITCH got him like MUHAMUD ALI...ALL SHOOK UP WORST LINE:OH...thought you were to HOT TA HANDLE..? bitch please i blow out ya FLOW with ease like the WIND TO A CANDLE/ PLAYED VOTE=VINMAN |
eww wtf i htinkg young took this easily he had sick shit n better punches multis n flow..better structure and his opener was much better than vinmans boo..LOL good battle though vinman even though u spit 20 lines u culdnt beat his 10 and thats not even fair so i cut it 10 10 n yung won...
vote:yung |
Young - Good spit man, your punches was hott.. and your flow was nice and solid.
Best Line - My lyrics are like KNIVES to VINMAN so you can SEE i'm RIPPIN THIS DUDE TA SHREDS/ Damn since line ~OnE~ VINMANS been DEAD/ Worst Line - This DUDES a BITCH got him like MUHAMUD ALI...ALL SHOOK UP/ Before you can LOOK UP you'll get STUCK UP like RICH WHITE GIRLS that must SUCK/ VINMAN - iight spit man, rhymes was simple.. but your who was hot.. and your punches were landin. Best Line - this nigga say that his flow is the deadliest ever seen yea the FUCK RIGHT ONLY TO THE PREMATURE RETARDED TEENS Worst Line - check it yo rhmyes was boring and made the crowd go BOO MY FLOW IS SO FAST AnD MADE YO BODy SPIN TOO (BOOOO) OVERALL - Close battle, But I am given the win to Young he had 10 less lines, and he had better flow.. and punches were hott.. He woulda ripped em if he went 20 lines too, but ah well.. VINMAN.. your shit was good to.. but your rhymes are to simple.. work on more wordplay and creativity. VOTE - Young RETURN THE FAV http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123911 |
i hate to say this but i really had 9 lines i jus spaced it out if u put it together and not spaced out i only have 9 lines well sorry if u think i had 20
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Uppin On Thius Shit
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Uppin For Votes Lets Go People
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i think vinman took this shit nice and easy he had some good punches and good flow young you really need to elevate some of both of your lines were played but vinmans shit was better but for some emcees tryin to get good this was a good battle that could have gone any way but vinman won this shit buy his punches and flows
ma vote goes to vinman |
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dawg can you count you spit 20 lines...each line had on rhyme to match it...you dropped 20 lines to my 10 lines...but whatever you just don't know what your talkin about...no matter i didn't even drop my best....uppin on this bullshyt battle... |
uppin for some damn votes come on nigga wake up
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ok.......young-Nice spit
aight.....strcture needs more work though similies was ok so was mets.....Work on a few more things vinman......I think ya took this by a tinty becuz he was close up on ya.....Structure was better then your....But the similies and metas are alright Work on balance though and complexity v/vinman Return the favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124400 |
uppin for votes
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Vinman his cam so hard in dis i was hott good glow young elevate dats all i gotta say
but vinman yo rhymes was simple elevate on yo vocab man but otha wise dis was an ok battle v/vinman |
vinman beat this nigga wit his good punches and word play you both need to elevate though but this is a very good battle and i enjoyed it but the punches were weak in both battles but vinmans were better so i vote for him
ma vote goes to vinman |
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