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SevenThird Vs.Iceberg
Checkin in, ill spit in a minute hope your ready!
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Checkin in-- my verse will be up in the next hour.
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Yo 12 Lines of MC meltin Fire
Normally I just laugh, I don't Prefer to Fight-Herbs/ But Im bout to play like "Titanic" and Slam this "Iceberg"// Seven Thirds Nasty at this- writin rhymes is my passion/ I saw this kids pic and it said "Gay" in the caption// This kid is wack- If he wins then he's a cheater/ Meltin Icebergs like 90 degrees with this "heater"// Just Go Home now- Ya punches'll never "Hit-This"/ Givin 2 different meanings when I say your "Diss-Missed"// (the diss missed, and dismissed) Your better off if you dont even post a verse-in-this/ Ya punches "skip" the mark more than church services// A shitload of Nightmares is all "SevenThir-D"(7:30) Gave-You/ Cuz I'm Past ya "bedtime"- like "adult shows on Cable"// |
Seven must have sex in circles the way he fucken-around
This bitch is going no-where-fast like plants stuck in the ground! Seven Ill? You play with blocks where you locate your wordplay Like demolishin skate parks cuz I'll break Seven's vert-abrae! Ok bitch now calculate and figure I'm hot your bars get more snickers than Don Knotts I'll scissor this bitch into a chop shop remove hands n seconds as if I took apart clocks Seven is dumb,his brain is the size of a grain of sand This bitch meets defeat all the time,he’s still tryna to shake it's hand! So you better make a run for it like collen clensing pills All of your rhymes is ass, and bitch crack kills |
uppin for votes... will return the favor just post a link.
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Can we get some votes in here please uppin this biatch
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Uppin For Votes Still...................................
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chea chea dis was a nice lil battle yall g0t popin 0ff nah mean....
Seven came like 55% iller den Iceberg kuz of the multis and nice punches along wit creativity....both emcess had a nice flow and good structure...but this line basickally got Seven my vote: A shitload of Nightmares is all "SevenThir-D"(7:30) Gave-You/ Cuz I'm Past ya "bedtime"- like "adult shows on Cable"//-----Seven nicelt worded lol and funny v/Seven |
Uppin--- Still need VOTES PPL...........................
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sEVEN tHIRD WON HIS. HE WAS THE ONLY ONE WITH ANY REAL PUNCHES, AND SOME OF THEM WERE PRETTY NICE MAN, GOOD WORK.
vote - seven third/ |
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SevenThird- Opening was average. I liked some punces in this rhyme, the church services line and the Dissmissed lines were really creative. The flow and vocab went well with the rhyme. Good Job.
Iceberg: Yo... you won this battle for one reason. Your vocab and flow were average and so was your opening and closing. In fact the closing was horrible in my view, you should've came way harder then saying "crack kills". But the reason Im voting for you is because your punches were stronger than his and thats what you really have to pay attention to. Keep Spittin Fam. Vote: Iceberg http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124472 (PLEASE VOTE ON THIS BATTLE I WAS IN SINCE I TOOK TIME TO VOTE ON YOUR BATLLE, THANK YOU) |
uppin for votes again.........................................
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HOLY FUCK...
this battle was da bomb ass pussy i havent seen so much wordplay in a newb battle or well two guys new to rb... hot shit yo ok this is how it goes... ice berg your verse was bomb till about the middle where your struc fucked up it kinda lost me... but seven third stayed good all the way threw and the wordplay... dissed missed... hot shit and the seventhir D.. one that as ill too.. so for made wordplay and ill struc my vote goes to seven third yo hit up my battle ... link is in da sig |
Uppin one more time
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yo......seventhird this ones yours. yo lines aws happening from the begginig to end
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IceBerg-Nice spit........You came hard with it which means you took this
really by a lil though......you had everything uncluding similies and metaphores......just work on a few things and ya will be there...... Seven-Came kind of weak....Work on something structure was ok but work on some thing.....balace was good but some was weak and some was hard.....But keep elevatin and work on alot of things v/Iceberg |
Still uppin for votes..............................
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Damn this was a tight battle very close battle. both of yall came correct hard hitting punches smooth flow, very creative. However, Sevens opener with the iceburg was killer that was pretty tight. Burgs' sex in circles was nice as well but didn't have teh creativity. The Dissmiss line was nice very creatie, overall that why I'm give'n this one to Seven cause his punches were a bit more creaitve thats why his punches hit harder. All in all this was a close battle I'd think that it was going to go down to the wire.
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Iceberg your word play was nice you punches were better sometimes than others. the line "I'll scissor this bitch into a chop shop remove hands n seconds as if I took apart clocks" was a bit too long.
Seven - Good shit man. you did a nice <A TITLE="Click for more information about job" STYLE="text-decoration: none; border-bottom: medium solid green;" HREF="http://search.targetwords.com/u.search?x=5977|1||||job|AA1VDw">job</A> on your punches your opener and closer was a little better than Ice's. Good use of word play Vote : seven $MOKESKREEN vs GENERAL HOOD |
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