lyrical KILLAH VS XxToXiCXxVeRbZ
 

This Is The Rulez
No Crew Votes
No Dick Ridin Votes
No Hatin Votes
both drop within 30
10-15 Lines
No Feedin
got 30 mins to spitt after check in
^ if u dont ur going to be d/q

and yo who going to shut dat nfamous up yo he talkin bout yo crew and shit

ayy i know yall aint done spittin but i need some votes up in this battle and ill be happy to return favors heres the link

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124119

check in....

aight but who spittin 1st

o my god read the rulez it says u check in the we both drop within 30 mins unless u wanna spitt first?

Man Just Spit

O And No Feeding

ayo...check this.....check it.....

Toxic ain't got a bling, I'm V.I.P at Jacob the Jeweller.../
This bitch could spit nitrogen, still wouldn't be cooler.../
Toxic?, just another newb. ta devour and add ta my list.../
Bitch couldn't get a head in battle if I gave him tha tip of my dick.../
Call me T-Mac cuz i'll preform magic and leave Toxic black and blue.../
Toxic couldn't pull ya weight in battle takin three bottles of stacker 2.../
Hey Rapbattles notta a bathroom so take ur shitty flows elsewhere.../
Toxic like an innocent man on deathrow-i know this battles not FAIR.../
Toxic I could write yo'r battle for you, and u still wouldn't win.../
U should be banned 4 bein wack, listen up mods and admin.../
Toxic never gets pussy ask around, peeps tell u its true.../
Matter fact I bet "Stevie Wonder" "see's" more pussy then you.../
Toxic there aint no killin me i know for a fact you feelin me.../
But yo punches are weak like misscarriages no solid delivery.../


just for ppl that our mentally ill stevie wonder is blind o yea toxic u got 30mins to drop or d/q

holla atcha boy!!!!!!!

come back with attack after attack/ each one harder and faster than the last/ hope you like history, i smack you back to the past/ you get cut from the cast/ you're nothing but an extra, i'm a star/ you're about same sex relationships you chill at gay bars/ your intelligence is so low you won't go far/ i'm destined for greatness you're stuck in the dark/ you're stuck in park and even if you weren't, you car still wouldn't start/ i'll leave you like the tin man when i rip out your heart/ you got one up on the cowardly lion to go against me you've got courage/ but i'll leave you like goldilocks staring at your porridge/ you're the scarecrow,so open up your fridge/ there's your brain workin like always- frozen bizzitch/ talk all you want about the blazin words you got/ you could have a 120 degree temp, and you still wouldn't be HOT/ U CANT GET WIT DA TOXIC

Good Battle Boyz, I cant vote though since.. Lyrical is in my crew, but yo Toxic.. wanna hit up my battle wit Cue man?... and if you have the one wit Popa Doc.. I will return the fav.. thx man,

Here Is One Of THe Links
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123755

Uppin For Some Votes

upping for some damn votes plz explain well and honest

Toxic?, just another newb. ta devour and add ta my list.../
Bitch couldn't get a head in battle if I gave him tha tip of my dick.../
Call me T-Mac cuz i'll preform magic and leave Toxic black and blue.../
Toxic couldn't pull ya weight in battle takin three bottles of stacker 2.../
This was probly my favorite part from Lyrical Killas verse... It flowed really well and I liked the stacker 2 punchline. I think the whole verse was tight though good job....it gets an 8 out of 10

you're nothing but an extra, i'm a star/ you're about same sex relationships you chill at gay bars
This was Toxics best bar cuz the punchline hit well and you had good wordplay in it....
i'll leave you like the tin man when i rip out your heart/ you got one up on the cowardly lion to go against me you've got courage/ but i'll leave you like goldilocks staring at your porridge/-- Went you went of on this wordplay punchline tangent I thought you were gonna take the battle...but the way it ends I think somethings just not right otherwise this punch would have really snapped and set up for a solid ending... All in all I give Toxics Verse a 7.99- Cuz you would have won this battle if your punches were structured just a little differently.- Vote- Lyrical killa




please return http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124310

Erm I think this was pretty much one sided in my opinion i dint enjoy vebrs verse really he ahd a few punches and flow in some lines but some where off like the gay bar line kinda played also anyway i think lyrical killah was on this really with his flow he had ok creativty but his vocab wasnt all that i think you need to work on your wordplay but im going with LK

V/LK.

i cant vote on this but nice drop by both of yall
and Toxic you didnt poll your vote on my battle with CJ
heres tha link

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123812

upping for some damn votes plz explain well and honest

Toxic ain't got a bling, I'm V.I.P at Jacob the Jeweller.../
This bitch could spit nitrogen, still wouldn't be cooler.../ nah....not good
Toxic?, just another newb. ta devour and add ta my list.../
Bitch couldn't get a head in battle if I gave him tha tip of my dick.../ pretty good...played out though
Call me T-Mac cuz i'll preform magic and leave Toxic black and blue.../
Toxic couldn't pull ya weight in battle takin three bottles of stacker 2.../ dont get it but t-mac line was HOTT....
Hey Rapbattles notta a bathroom so take ur shitty flows elsewhere.../
Toxic like an innocent man on deathrow-i know this battles not FAIR.../ DAMN..........!!!
Toxic I could write yo'r battle for you, and u still wouldn't win.../that kinda shit dont make sense think about it...
U should be banned 4 bein wack, listen up mods and admin.../
Toxic never gets pussy ask around, peeps tell u its true.../
Matter fact I bet "Stevie Wonder" "see's" more pussy then you.../played out...
Toxic there aint no killin me i know for a fact you feelin me.../
But yo punches are weak like misscarriages no solid delivery.../ nice ending

lyrical killah had nice flow and some hard hitting punches...check the explanation. Not many multies but ok wordplay and some good metaphors....you need multies...shitty opener...

now toxic

come back with attack after attack/ each one harder and faster than the last/weak opener. hope you like history, i smack you back to the past/ you get cut from the cast/wut?!!!! you're nothing but an extra, i'm a star/ you're about same sex relationships you chill at gay bars/ ok... your intelligence is so low you won't go far/ i'm destined for greatness you're stuck in the dark/ you're stuck in park and even if you weren't, you car still wouldn't start/ i'll leave you like the tin man when i rip out your heart/nice.... you got one up on the cowardly lion to go against me you've got courage/ but i'll leave you like goldilocks staring at your porridge/ you're the scarecrow,so open up your fridge/ there's your brain workin like always- frozen bizzitch/ talk all you want about the blazin words you got/ you could have a 120 degree temp, and you still wouldn't be HOT/ U CANT GET WIT DA TOXIC

k this was absolutely a one sided battle....no hate toxic but ur did not hit hard wit punches...a lot of it was forced, and therefore, did not make sense. good try of using multies...not being sarcastic...you have potential, but good luck next time, and do not use fillers...stay on point....

v//Lyrical Killah...murked this toxic, no hate,

u wanted a vote lyrical u got u ugly mutha fucka


WEAK..you win
i say that you won..i like you avatar and your abs, they look tasty
can i have a bite, i guess yoiu can call me a biter. 10/10

n you sucked all over this aint a lolly ... pop hoe 0/10

return the favor, it is a hot battle of mines
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124208

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Toxic-........Man your verse was awack..........No real punches directed towards him.......they didnt even hit...........you didnt have any personals so it that is kinda pointless to get into........structure was weak and your flow was choppy as fuck.......you need to elevate man.........go check out Old Rb......alota centers there that can elevate you


Killah-....you merked this kat............your structure was on point and it gave your flow a good structure and it was good......i liked your flow.......your punches hit on point and stuck..........your personal hit and they was good......you could work on rewording your shit to make it hit harder.............good verse......pc

v/Killah

upping for some damn votes plz explain well and honest

Punches:LK
Multie's:LK
Entertaining:LK
wordplay:tie
Flow:tie

LK basically hand MUCH better punches my fav line from him was:

Toxic?, just another newb. ta devour and add ta my list.../
Bitch couldn't get a head in battle if I gave him tha tip of my dick.../

LMAO he had the best flow to..and personals...good battle
VOTE:LK

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