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WillS.unyu vs. Boaty
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spit by tonight no cheatin bullshit spit 1 hour after you check in |
Aight, lets do this
Its your first battle dog, how do you feel? Ill have you cryin like K-Ci and JoJo, "TELL ME ITS REAL!" Battlin you is like talkin to a wall It wont say anything back cause its too scared to talk at all Youre not worth a good spit, hell you aint worth my time Your rhymes aint shit and you dont seem to mind I just noticed something, im rhymin on you first Dam youre a pussy, that makes rhymin on you even worse Alright now, ill end this so you can breathe again Now youre porbably like salt&peppa "whatta man!" |
Aight man, you can reply anytime now...
You said spit within an hour of checkin in... |
WEAK..you win
i say that you won..i like you avatar and your abs, they look tasty can i have a bite, i guess yoiu can call me a biter. 10/10 n you sucked all over this aint a lolly ... pop hoe 0/10 return the favor, it is a hot battle of mines http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124208 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
i forgot about this bullshit
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that mean youre gonna spit or not B? If not then im gonna get the win. Dont go out like that man
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With a verse likes yours,you should've have hoped I no-showed..
This Kid Sucks,No wonder he throw Low Blows............ You was wack from birth,Meaning you was born scarred.... So watch me Smash this Pussy,Like an Overweight Porn Star!... You wack as fuck....and your rhymes are NOT sick!. So fuck you,and that guy who was quick to hope on your dick. (toxic) Boaty thinks he's urban..but doesnt know the meaning of a dollar So I'll smash his neck bone...just to prove he isnt Blue Collar* So, this is the closer,this newbie just merked this oldie I guess I made Alliyah happy,because I just rocked the Boat-y *to be Blue Collar means to be a working man. uppin this shit for some votes |
uppin this shit for some votes.
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you sound a little worried there, I never said you couldnt spit again. Calm the fuck down
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Return the favor or i aint votin on yur battles no more
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...7006post1297006 Aight this battle was hella one sided LOL WILL won this that closer had me DyINN!!!!!!!!! Boaty ur spit wasnt garbage i think Will was just better in this battle u just need to work on wordplay and structure and come harder with punches WILL ur spit was koo the best line u had was the last closing lines but ur structure was wack and wordplay could be worked on along with throwing in some multis V=WillS.unyu KEEP ELEVATING RETURN THE FAVOR http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...7006post1297006 |
boaty-had some clever lines, but wasnt feelin the flow as much
will-u took this one i could flow that shit easily and had funnier punchlines vote=will Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Will what happed you started of with tight flows and solid punches then four lines in you went flat, no good punches and you lost yoru flow?? Boaty nice punches the whole way through, I though he'd have it with his momentum at the beg' but then he fell off so you take this one, cause of better punches and flow.
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We need some votes on this, uppin......................
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Boaty-8/10
Will-7.5/10-u had some good punches but just not enough ....just a lil more since u did it quickly Vote=Boaty Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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and the winner is
i think the winner is Sinsu or whatever....he had better punchlines and very creative
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Excuse me i spelled his name wronf his name is S.unyu
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aight, im not against the fact that he voted against me, im against the fact that he voted against me and we JUST HAPPEN to be in a battle together that Im up 2-0 nothin on him.....
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this was a good battle i like this one but i'ma hand this to boaty cause his shit was too nice
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but don't have beef wit me just cause i voted for him aight man
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Dam, 2 votes got DQd...uppin..........................
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Wil S.unyu u need yo rhyme better Scared and Porn Star
With a verse likes yours,you should've have hoped I no-showed.. This Kid Sucks,No wonder he throw Low Blows............ ^^^ NO! 2/10 You was wack from birth,Meaning you was born scarred.... So watch me Smash this Pussy,Like an Overweight Porn Star!... Scarred Or Scared? u Reali did not rhyme 4/10 You wack as fuck....and your rhymes are NOT sick!. So fuck you,and that guy who was quick to hope on your dick. (toxic) Hope on ur did ** Correction HOP ** 5/10 Boaty thinks he's urban..but doesnt know the meaning of a dollar So I'll smash his neck bone...just to prove he isnt Blue Collar* ^^^ Decent 6/10 ^^^ So, this is the closer,this newbie just merked this oldie I guess I made Alliyah happy,because I just rocked the Boat-y Very Bad Finisher.. ^^3/10 Break Down Will S.unyu Flow 5/10 Rhymes 4/10 Structure 3/10 Punches 5/10 37/90 Boaty Its your first battle dog, how do you feel? Ill have you cryin like K-Ci and JoJo, "TELL ME ITS REAL!" Nice Opener Decent ^^^ 6/10 Battlin you is like talkin to a wall It wont say anything back cause its too scared to talk at all 5/10 Youre not worth a good spit, hell you aint worth my time Your rhymes aint shit and you dont seem to mind No!!! 2/10 I just noticed something, im rhymin on you first Dam youre a pussy, that makes rhymin on you even worse Decent 6/10 Alright now, ill end this so you can breathe again Now youre porbably like salt&peppa "whatta man!" Nice Finisher 6/10 Break Down Boaty Flow 6/10 Rhymes 6/10 Structure 4/10 Punches 4/10 44/90 V/ BOATY |
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WTF Kid? are you fuckin dumb or retarded? you MUST cant read you had the dumbest break down of verse I have ever fuckin seen first of all did you even understand my fuckin opener I said he suck thats why he throw low blows you dont fuckin get it? *SUCK* and *LOW BLOWS*?M and can you even read my second bar? I didnt type scared I typed scarred so where in hell did you get scared from? you damn wack ass rb relaunched newbie scarred and star rhymes you poor waste of sperm and how the hell are you going to make a correction to my verse when your correction was wrong to the word was *dick* not did you idiot and you gave the wackest punch in my verse the highest score? and how the hell did I have a bad closer? did you understand that??!! Alliyah made a song called rock the boat this kid name is boaty?? fuck you and your vote lets get some real fuckin votes thats not from idiots liked Mixxed Mc wasnt he the kid that got banned for biting? I think he was dont fuckin vote on my battles anymore if you're going to be an idiot! |
boaty yours was alrite...had good punch lines...made sense but will had much funnier lines....i liked his better...so my vote goes to will
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Dam, anotha DQ. Uppin.................................
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Dam this is going on way too long.....................
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Lets Get Some Votes...................................
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BoAtY
Flow 6/10 Rhymes 6/10 Structure 6/10 Punches 6/10 Overall 24/40 Will S.Unyu Flow 7/10 Rhymes 6/10 Structure 6/10 Punches 6/10 Overall 25/40 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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boaty - u had alot of stretched lines and that fucked up ur flow....punches werent even okay....bad verse....no wordplay....basic lines....elevate ya game....use better and more compelx meta's....egt ur personals up.....bad verse
will - killed his verse....u had complex rhymes....better meta's and punches....easily took this....much better wordplay....and ur flow was better....everything was better....easy win... vote - will |
Dam, that wasnt even contstructive.lol. dude straight dissed me
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