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R.A.M 05-15-04 10:46 AM

RAM Vs. White Craca
 
Rules:
10 lines max(let's keep this short)
No biting(that's been goin on a lot lately)

Voters rules:
None of dat vote for me i'll vote for you or return da favor bullshit.
Drop a vote or not.

White Craca 05-15-04 10:48 AM

spit 30 min. after we checkin or what

R.A.M 05-15-04 11:18 AM

I sell weed but you could take this L for free,
You winning,
Yeah right i'm still waitin for hell to freeze...

Listen homie you got a better chance at winnin tha lottery,
You hungry for a win because your skills are poverty,
Named yourself white craca can't see past tha obvious?
I saw your other battle who told you to try to rap?
You like dirt bikes so be a junior Jerry Mcgrath,
Sorry that you had to be da next to feel da RAM wrath,
But you accepted columbine craca fuckin psychopath.

(Whoa this is kinda weak but fuck it)

R.A.M 05-15-04 11:20 AM

spit dat when ever you ready duke i'll be back thru when I get another free minuteI'm off it now. 1

R.A.M 05-15-04 11:21 AM

Oh yeah I forgot voters if you don't got 30 posts you can't vote here.

White Craca 05-15-04 11:45 AM

ill post when i get back ight

GKillaz05 05-15-04 11:46 AM

good spit R.A.M. I will hit this up once White posts hit shit up... can you hit up my battle wit popa while you wait for cracka to post somethin?.. thx man

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123911

R.A.M 05-15-04 12:34 PM

Yo where you at duke?
I'm runnin around makin playz and you stil ain't posted.
Come on homie.

White Craca 05-15-04 05:03 PM

checkin in

White Craca 05-15-04 05:35 PM

check it

whats R.A.M. stand for? raped in the ass by me/
the shits so bad they cant even show it on tv?/
My flow knocks you down leaving only the debris/
Now ill really show u whos the elite emcee/
now all u fellas let me give u a treat/
let me show how this will be an easy defeat/
he cant compete with me im bringing the heat/
im emitting flames and bringing the pain/
noone can stop this burnin train/
i call the cops u goin mentally insane because uve just been slain/


lets see votes for this peple come on

White Craca 05-15-04 07:31 PM

uppin for votes

?uest Logic 05-15-04 08:22 PM

WEAK..you win
i say that you won..i like you avatar and your abs, they look tasty
can i have a bite, i guess yoiu can call me a biter. 10/10

n you sucked all over this aint a lolly ... pop hoe 0/10

return the favor, it is a hot battle of mines
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124208

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GKillaz05 05-15-04 09:16 PM

White - Good spit man, your flow was good and so was your punches.

Best Line - whats R.A.M. stand for? raped in the ass by me/
the shits so bad they cant even show it on tv?/

Worst Line - My flow knocks you down leaving only the debris/
Now ill really show u whos the elite emcee/

RAM - iight spit man, I was likin your flow... punches were iight.

Best Line - You like dirt bikes so be a junior Jerry Mcgrath,
Sorry that you had to be da next to feel da RAM wrath,
But you accepted columbine craca fuckin psychopath.

Worst Line - I saw your other battle who told you to try to rap?

OVERALL - Close battle... but I gotta give this to.. White, he gots a better flow.. and I liked his punches more. Raw you can do better man, yourd flow was iight but you lacked punches. Work on that MAN, harden up them punc5hes.

VOTE - White

RETURN THE FAV
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123911

macKa 05-15-04 09:22 PM

That shit was weak. Craca, if it took u that long to write that vers,e then u might as well just give up now. those verses were seriously about 10 second jobs for real. but w/e. umm, as far as who won....damn, this is hard, i couldn't see anything resembling a punch in either verse, except for craca's first line, but that seemed like he was dissin himself as well, sayin that h ewanted to rape RAM in the ass. but w/e, since that was the closest thing to a punch, the battle goes to him

vote -white craca.

White Craca 05-16-04 07:50 AM

uppin for votes come on

R.A.M 05-16-04 10:08 AM

Don't forget voters no return da favor votes.
Vote for da verse you like.

DA BOY GENIUS 05-16-04 11:11 AM

R.A.M.: Opening was good. Closing was average. Flow and Vocab was average. Im not into that dirtbike shit but i think dudes name is Jeremy Macgrath, not Jerry, lol. But its all gravy though. Decent Spit Homie.

White Craca: Your opening was a good punch. But this was the only punch I was feeling. Actually you didnt have any more punches in your verse and this is what hurt you. You should've came as nice as you did in your opening line and you would've took this battle. Vocab and Flow were average. I'm giving this to R.A.M. because i think he had the better punch in this one.

Vote: R.A.M.

White Craca 05-16-04 11:42 AM

uppin come on ill return tha favor and vote on ur battle not picking u or shit just whoerver is better come on

Metaskriptz 05-16-04 12:24 PM

craca-good spit I liked it some was hott

Best Line - whats R.A.M. stand for? raped in the ass by me/
the shits so bad they cant even show it on tv?/

Worst Line - My flow knocks you down leaving only the debris/
Now ill really show u whos the elite emcee/

RAM-you was alright but close battle for the both

Best Line - You like dirt bikes so be a junior Jerry Mcgrath,
Sorry that you had to be da next to feel da RAM wrath,
But you accepted columbine craca fuckin psychopath.

Worst Line - I saw your other battle who told you to try to rap?

OVERALL=White did take this becuz he did come harder
flow was better....both only need to work on a few things
and ya will be there
v/white

KillaCamFlow 05-16-04 12:38 PM

R.A.M some good punched but i think White beat u this 1 he had some O.k lines i seen some better battles then this from u R.A.M so i vote

KillaCamFlow 05-16-04 12:41 PM

Vote:White

lyrical distruction 05-16-04 12:42 PM

Ram had more flowing and word play techniques, he had a consistant flow unlike cracka, u really were a crackhead on dat rap battle wern't you. You just got merked and ram had better punchlines and u had little ones that did ryme but not flow very well

vote ram

-SwizZ- 05-16-04 01:27 PM

RAM-LikeTHat Shit Dawg.....You Had Good Personals And Flow.....No BARS OF YOURS WERE FORCED....

White-Like Ya Flow To But U OLY GOT ONE PERSONAL WHIHC AS THE RAM LINE Keep ELEVATIN YO!!!!

V\RAM For Personals

R.A.M 05-16-04 02:47 PM

2 more votes either way and it's thru let's get it done folks

FiNal FiNale 05-16-04 03:18 PM

Man this is a hard Decision. Both seem hard to fuccin reed man. this battle was very damn close.

Ram Best Line:Listen homie you got a better chance at winnin tha lottery//
You hungry for a win because your skills are poverty//
Ram: Flow was aight. but 1 punchline,-- white could of took that and ate it, 1 fuccin punch and u stopped punching!!!

White u da same dude---whats R.A.M. stand for? raped in the ass by me/
1 line and u stopped punching u gotta stay on ya toes and "move ya feet"

Its hard to Choose But My V/= CRaca cuz of Flow(both was hard to read)

Lil Nae2 05-16-04 03:44 PM

dis battle was ok white cam harder with his punch it sounded betta den da otha cat ram elevate even doe dis battle was weak yall needs some votes and white his verse was betta den ram only cause of one punch he had said

v/white

White Craca 05-16-04 06:12 PM

uppin for votes

White Craca 05-16-04 09:52 PM

uppin this shit up for votes poeple come on i aint sleeping on the job so u shouldnt lol

FiNal FiNale 05-17-04 08:21 AM

Cnat Vote Cuz I Only Have Under 30 Post I'll Vote When I Can Get 30!!

R.A.M 05-17-04 11:52 AM

This battle been open tto long folks let's get it voted up please

delinquent_zero 05-17-04 12:06 PM

erm both emcee were weak, seems like your both beginners in tha rap ting. but imma give my vote 2 white craca becoz he flow was betta and had betta punches i.e 'whats R.A.M. stand for? raped in the ass by me'

Da Vinci 05-17-04 01:28 PM

White Craca ya started off hot but then stopped throwing punches near the middle, in a short 10 line battle that will kill ya. R.A.M nice punches the whole way through you both had nice flow and good structure. Wordplay was nice as well and so was the complexity but WhiteCraca cause RAM through more punches he takes the vic.

boaty 05-17-04 06:18 PM

Ill take RAM in this one cause I liked his punches better but still a good battle

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Da MaGiCiAn 7 05-19-04 03:37 AM

Ma vote goes 2 White graca

Flow: white graca
Structure: R.A.M
Punches: white graca

yo bof of u gotta elevate fo rizzle iight lil niggaz ~1~

lyrical distruction 05-19-04 12:01 PM

i think ram won dis because his verse was so much better and had the potentual of creativity unlike cracka, plus his rhymed more. U both did well but ram just had the better punches and came alot stronger with more rithem. Good battle you guys.

vote RAM


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