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Aight, Here Go A Lil Verse. Peep It, And Give Some Feedback...


Listen,
I Remember Back In the Day When I Was Sharp-And-Nice Before The Scars-And-Fights...
And On The Darkest-Nights I Was In My Glory Strapped Under Them Apartment-Lights...
I Been On Trains, Cars-And-Bikes And Seen The Inside Of Dumpsters, Drawers-And-Pipes...
Of Course I've Tasted-Flesh And Sent Plenty To The Gates-Of-Death Without Any Wasted-Breath...
Man, I Spent Months Stuck In Basements-Wet When I'm The Mu'fucka Who Creates-Respect...
It's Me Who's Bold-And-Ruthless, But These Days Everyone Sleepin And Tryin To Own-The-New-Shit...
What Am I Now? Old-And-Useless, Fuck All Yall Doubters Leave Me Alone-And-Use-Fists...
I Was Told-I-Aint-Choose-This So I Roam-Wit-To-Clips, And If Ya Think I'll Fold-I-Got-News-Bitch...
The Kid Still Accurate And Able-To-Aim, Wit Me A Cat Could Take Over And Strangle-The-Game...
I Aint Never Scared I'll Mangle-A-Gang And Bang-Up-Them-Thangz, In Fact I'm Labeled-Insane...
But Still I'm Real-And-True, Tell Me Though, How Would You Feel If Some Two Bit Hustler Was Dealin-You...
And People Only Use Ya For A Meal-Or-Two, And Then Ya Get Thrown In A Sewer, What The Fuck! I Got Feelins-Too...


Leave Ya Thoughts...

It's Me Who's Bold-And-Ruthless, But These Days Everyone Sleepin And Tryin To Own-The-New-Shit...
What Am I Now? Old-And-Useless, Fuck All Yall Doubters Leave Me Alone-And-Use-Fists...

fire!

ncie oen ur good my friend good flo good words using dis to reflect a truth

that was some hot stuff man keep doin your thang!

On the real, it's aight. I just wanna know what beat this shit is on...

Thanx For The Feedback Yall, I Appreciate It...

@EVER I Aint Spit It To A Beat Yet, It's Just Some Shit I Wrote...

Keep The Feedback Comin...

nyce flow...nyce wordplay...nyce concept very ill....multis....everything was on point stay up

got return the favor 1 pa

Yeah, hot shit dawg. Feelin it all dat way.

Good Lookin...

Uppin...

sik shit dawg sik shit

hot shyt dawg...fiya all around

Good Lookin Out On The Feedback Yall...

Keep It Comin...

was alright but stop using -'s and bold
it will help, and is better then ur current
structure, nice lines tho. keep itup
just stop using those gay ass -s and bolding it.

^^Fuckk all dat shit Action... It's good to have dat shit for da simple minded muthafuckkaz won't notice da punches, multis, and w/p shit unless u make it obvious for em... There are lil 12, 13, 14 yr old kids voting on battles and readin these verses ya know.

^^Word, That's The Only Reason I Do It... Cuz If You Don't Somehow Put Emphasis On Certain Words Mufuckas Aint Gon Get It.

nice wordplay and flow hot piece man keep droppin them

Thanx Fam...

Uppin For More Feedback...

that was sum ill rhymin' son...hardcore shit...i liked it...nuthin' but love...peace

Thas dope man.. flow was sick..
Keep droppin..

Thanx Yall... Uppin...

Stop Sleepin And Peep This People...

Up...........

Uppin This For Feedback...

C'mon yall stop sleepin on this. It's the illest verse in the open mic right now.. lol. Fa real tho open ya eyes peep this and drop some feedback. One.