t-storm vs maz
 

house rulez
8-12 linez
u spit first

gud luk................ :cussing:

check it

now u know my friend i aint worried,
my eyes blurried while smoking ur boots, ur burried.
my homie it's time u retire, am gettin higher,
spitin-fire while explaing how many people i inspire,
give me da mic- ill clock bak n sock it,
clip da words i spread while holin 5 g's in my pocket,
bitch just let me rok it,
now u know i'll make u pass out,
smashed out, ripped n classed out.
now met me relax dis bitch is torn,
i feel da votes, u cant go on, i feel good,
am ready t-storm.

i know not dat good but hellll homes it's al guud

good luck m8,
spit it

ok
 

that woz sum weak ass shit...from a weak ass bitch/
hell u stink worse than ma fukin arm-pits/
u im gona kill..coz im 2 bizare n ill,u wudnt b hot cookin unda a grill/
cats b screaming ma shits poppin..urs need 2 b stoppin/
rappin like u disabled...go on n start tha hoppin/
u gona b amazed at tha way at got u out-phased/
stepin against me?...ya lost in ma lyrical maze/
ur style makes me laugh...bitch give up tha herbal/
my style wins me this battle...concentate on ya verbal/

yo some sick shit homes
but it's votes up now

yo tihs battle was aight both could of did better so imma break it down
T-storm ur verse didnt seem like a battle verse i dont think there was any personals towards maz u had ok multies and ur flow was some what ok u need to elevate and try to hit harder wit ur punches
MAZ ur verse was ok but not great u had some decent punches but could of still hit harder ur flow ok too just need to work on it a lil more and i think u tried a lil more than him.....i think both u need to elevate ....u guys need write pesonals..dig up dirt look at their profil,sig whatever to use against them in a battle but imma give this to maz his too me sounded like a battle verese compared to t storm

ok
 

guess i shoulda tried...thats wot u get 4 bein 2 cocky

nice
all guud

yo ive gotta give dis 2 ma man maz his structure was better n it flowed better t-storm you had some good punches but maz came off the better man

vote: maz

yo hit my battle up the link in is the sig... peace

I'm goin wit T storm only because he actually had punches in his verse. Maz had zero. This battle was weak as shit fellaz. The only good line in da whole battle came from T another reason he got my vote.
Only good line:
"Your style makes me laugh..bitch give up the herbal/
my style won me this battle concentrate on your verbal"

vote=Tstorm
yall swing thru here and check this
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124378

I've got to give this to t-storm. To me i feel like he came harder and was more personal in my opinion. I dunno if this was maz's 1st battle but it seemed kinda basic and self gloryfied at first and had kinda weak punches.

V/T-Storm

simple
 

t-storm took this, both verses were pretty weak but t-storms had some punches, a couple nice ones the verbal and the, nah well the rest was punches at least. maz you need some work on that man

T Storm Gets Thiz 1 Wit Better Flow,Punches and Complexity...lough he Could Come More Complex

Maz Had Good Flow But Has To Come Wit More Complex Punches...If he Want To Win Battles

Vote=t-Storm

Damn, not a very entertaining battle. A lot maz's lines didn't even make sense...
my eyes blurried while smoking ur boots, ur burried.
...Wha??????

T-storm made sense so he gets my vote...

VOTE=T-STORM

well, my vote is going to T-storm...and here's why

MAZ: your verse flowed nicely...but it felt like a free style..it's a tad too simple for a battle verse in my opinion...good rhyming tho...up metas/wordplay/harder punches


T-Your verse wasn't that hard hitting. BUt, it did at least feel like a battle verse. Up complexity with your wordplay.


Vote: T

yo both verses were aiight, tstorm took it though because maz juz pumped himself up tha whole verse. he had no punches and ended up having quite a weak verse. t storm juz had to diss him once to win this battle so yeah...

vote = t storm

hit up ma battle wid n honest vote ya'll
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125237