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Black Magik vs. GKillaz05
1. 10 lines min and max 2. All votes must be explain 3. No crew hate or dickride votes 4. You set the due date It could be tonite if you wanna 5. No biting recyling 6. First to 5, 3-0 is Ko - 4-1 is TKo |
Check in, where ya at Gkillaz05 and what type of name i s that
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I am here, Checkin in.. will spit soon, and hate on my name?.. lol, I could care less.. lets see these skills..
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iight man, are you spittin for or blind spit or me or what?..
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[i]Set the due date but I'm done lets set the due date for Tonight
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just spit now man, dont need a due date.. will have mine up in 10-15 mins.. how about you?..
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it doesnt matter I'm finished with my verse
Here goes I KNOW YOU AINT GOOD, plus you''l never wioll be able to get yours FLOWS UNDERSTOOD, Cause Blacks the tpyes you ((SHOVE JACKETS DOWN YA THROAT)) makin your THROW UP YA HOOD)), This BOYS WORTHLESS and you prevoius battle arent helpig you get sick like TOY NURSES, And you couldnt be (( LYRICAL DESTRUCTION)) if you deSTROY VERSES, What I've WROTE IT HECKTIK, you'd denied my talent after I already have TOLD I"M VET BITCh, And the type to ((CONNECT YA FEET TO YA HEADS)) like YOGA STRETCHES, I've already had warned you that I'm oblious not the correct ONE TO TEST KID, Cause like POWERFUL TOILETS, I'll easily CRUSH YOUR BEST SHIT, I'll DISPOSE THIS VET, and pentrate knives iinto his spleen and INCLOSE HIS CHEST, Cause I'm like (( GETTING FLAHSED BY REAPERS)) I'll leave him EXPOSED TO DEATH, Explanation His crew is Lyrical Destructions, and Lyrics are in verses I written this in like 4 minutes your done kid |
Black Magik Take Back Your Whack Newb Jacket You Cant Hack It...
That Verse Was Just Horible And Only Shitty Newbs Use Brackets... Im Dropin My Shit On You Like You Was The Crapper That Can Seat To... I Dont Even Need To Try Because Even My Rapper Can Beat You... Sayin Your The Greatest Wit Your Whack Flow Thats Unbelievable... Beatin Me Aint As Easy And Wit Your Whack Flow It Aint Achievable... Im Smokin A Guy From Youngs-Town He's Turnin My Lungs-Brown... Got Brackets Around His Verse And Name Soundin Like A Clown... Goin To Drown You In The Ocean, GKillaz Dont Show Any Emotion... Once My Crew See's How Badly I Merked You I Gun Get A Promotion... |
iight peeps.. time for some votes, HONEST and EXPLAINED
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That was a funny style battle cuz on one hand you had Black magik wit sick punchlines but his flow was hard to flow wit. Than you had gkilla who had koo flow but lacked raw punchllines... To me its more about the punchlines so ill go wit Black Magik
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1-0 uppin and this was only written in bout 10 min or less
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UPPIN for votes man... lets get this battle ova wit
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Gkillaz05-Best Line
Sayin Your The Greatest Wit Your Whack Flow Thats Unbelievable... Beatin Me Aint As Easy And Wit Your Whack Flow It Aint Achievable... Worst Line- Goin To Drown You In The Ocean, GKillaz Dont Show Any Emotion... Once My Crew See's How Badly I Merked You I Gun Get A Promotion Black MagiK Best Line- This BOYS WORTHLESS and you prevoius battle arent helpig you get sick like TOY NURSES, And you couldnt be (( LYRICAL DESTRUCTION)) if you deSTROY VERSES, Worst Line- KNOW YOU AINT GOOD, plus you''l never wioll be able to get yours FLOWS UNDERSTOOD, Cause Blacks the tpyes you ((SHOVE JACKETS DOWN YA THROAT)) makin your THROW UP YA HOOD)), Black Ya Structure Was Horrible.....But I Liked YOur Verse Much Respect G-Killaz Nice Structure And Punches..... V\GKillaz05 |
Gkillaz05-Best Line
Sayin Your The Greatest Wit Your Whack Flow Thats Unbelievable... Beatin Me Aint As Easy And Wit Your Whack Flow It Aint Achievable... Worst Line- Goin To Drown You In The Ocean, GKillaz Dont Show Any Emotion... Once My Crew See's How Badly I Merked You I Gun Get A Promotion Magic best line-Like mic said This BOYS WORTHLESS and you prevoius battle arent helpig you get sick like TOY NURSES, And you couldnt be (( LYRICAL DESTRUCTION)) if you deSTROY VERSES, Worst Line- KNOW YOU AINT GOOD, plus you''l never wioll be able to get yours FLOWS UNDERSTOOD, Cause Blacks the tpyes you ((SHOVE JACKETS DOWN YA THROAT)) makin your THROW UP YA HOOD)), You structur was hard but your punches was alright not good balance work on similies and fillers.........Gkillaz got this by a stronger murkin.....Simply he had everyting includin similies metaphores balance......Also complexity.... But you came a kEYwORD=FEW stuff but work on stuff......Keep elevatin ya hott v/gkillaz |
*Coughs = Dickrides* anways
I kno te strutcure was horrible but how did he have punches over me its 2-0 uppin because they ddnt vote |
UPPIN for some more votes 2-0 ... keep em comin peeps.. will return the fav
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Uppin this threaD AND COME SOMEONE VOTE PLEASE
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first let me say i was feelin both participants in this battle
Black: Your flow was a little hard to follow wit tha way you wrote it and all and some of the words you used but your punches were raw and uncut like pure cocaine. Hot 2 death my nigga. Hottest line: "Shove jackets down your throat makin you throw up your hood" Worst line: "This boys worthless and your previous battles aren't helping you get sick like toy nurses" I wasn't really feelin dat but it's cool. Gkillaz: I done seen you spit some real sick shit this battle wasn't up there wit those but it was good. Your verse was the exact opposite of your opponents. Flow was tight but you lacked in da punchline field homie. Hottest line: "I'm smokin a guy from youngs town he's turnin my lungs brown" Worst line: "I'm droppin my shit on you like you was the crapper that can seat to" I ain't understand dat line doggy. But like I said it was a good battle. vote=black magick swing thru here and peep this http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...78&page=2&pp=15 |
thx for the honest vote.. keep em comin peeps..
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Votes Needed!
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I KNOW YOU AINT GOOD, plus you''l never wioll be able to get yours FLOWS UNDERSTOOD,
Cause Blacks the tpyes you ((SHOVE JACKETS DOWN YA THROAT)) makin your THROW UP YA HOOD)), nice This BOYS WORTHLESS and you prevoius battle arent helpig you get sick like TOY NURSES, And you couldnt be (( LYRICAL DESTRUCTION)) if you deSTROY VERSES, ok.... What I've WROTE IT HECKTIK, you'd denied my talent after I already have TOLD I"M VET BITCh, meh.... And the type to ((CONNECT YA FEET TO YA HEADS)) like YOGA STRETCHES, ok.... I've already had warned you that I'm oblious not the correct ONE TO TEST KID, Cause like POWERFUL TOILETS, I'll easily CRUSH YOUR BEST SHIT, nice.......... I'll DISPOSE THIS VET, and pentrate knives iinto his spleen and INCLOSE HIS CHEST, Cause I'm like (( GETTING FLAHSED BY REAPERS)) I'll leave him EXPOSED TO DEATH, nice ending nice verse some lines were a little questionable, but nice wordplay, you need more multies...and make sure your verse isnt played out.....its good punches...but you gotta make sure... Black Magik Take Back Your Whack Newb Jacket You Cant Hack It... That Verse Was Just Horible And Only Shitty Newbs Use Brackets...damn!!!!!!!! Im Dropin My Shit On You Like You Was The Crapper That Can Seat To... I Dont Even Need To Try Because Even My Rapper Can Beat You...hahahaha Sayin Your The Greatest Wit Your Whack Flow Thats Unbelievable... Beatin Me Aint As Easy And Wit Your Whack Flow It Aint Achievable...meh....... Im Smokin A Guy From Youngs-Town He's Turnin My Lungs-Brown... Got Brackets Around His Verse And Name Soundin Like A Clown...noooo Goin To Drown You In The Ocean, GKillaz Dont Show Any Emotion... Once My Crew See's How Badly I Merked You I Gun Get A Promotion...ok.............. gkillaz, your openers were hot as hell but then you fell off like a newb.....damn man...if u spit like that the whole time, you woulda won for sure.....but good battle, nice personals, sry man... i give it to the other guy for consistency....peace...no hate |
UPPIN for some more votes, keep the votes comin peeps
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We could go 2-2 tied or 4-2 me your choice
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Uppin this fucking thread people hurry up and vote
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yo black magik took this with his creativity and hard punchlines. this was a good battle though.
yo please vote on my battle and help me finish this bitch off http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125321 |
structure : GKilla
flow:GKilla punches:Black Magik V/ Gkilla05 and why the final...well GKilla05's verse was just more to the point i think, the flow was good |
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Black Magik
yo man ure flow was off man, u had sum fucked up structure cuz u had ure lines stretched like madd which is never gud. u had sum aight punches but sum of ure stuff was played and their wasn't really anything that original that stood out to me. u had a couple of personals but that was it and they didnt even hit that hard. u need to beef up ure punches and work on personals, also fix up ure structure. OVERALL 6/10 GKillaz05 u had a tight flow goin on in ure drop. u had a nice structure kept shit together nuthin stretched like fuck. ure shit flowed hott from beginning to end and i was feelin it a lot more. u had punches in there but you two lacked for creativity and ure lines were pretty basic in places. some were hard hitting, couple of nice personals and u had a few multis in ure drop. just really work on ure wordplay, make it more complex and try and strengthen ure punches. OVERALL 7.5/10 V/ - GKillaz05 |
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aight I have to say that GKillaz05 takes this his flow was tha best
man it was one of the best i've seen & your punches came much harder.....vocab & everything else was better than Magik's verse do a honest vote on my shit the links in my signature |
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