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-bODy CoUnT- 05-15-04 05:24 PM

dalyricalvillain vs yo yo
 
check in an spit first

-bODy CoUnT- 05-15-04 05:28 PM

a homey ima log back on in like 15 minutes cuz my dad needs to use the phone and we got aol. drop anyway and ill drop as soon as i log back on. aight 1

Yo-YO 05-15-04 05:29 PM

igght kooo dawg im be right here ill put my shit it up first koooooooo

Diagnose 05-15-04 05:30 PM

aight...I bet that DaLyRicaLViLLain will win this...cuz he's representin Da Bay Area...
I put 50 dallors on him....

DaLyRicaLViLLain N Yo-yo...jst so u know...me and my boy Lyrikal Killah is havin a bet of which one of u people are gonna win da battle..we ain't gonna vote in it cuz thats cheating....

NoLost4Rhymes
Bet: 50 Z's
Bet on: DaLyRicaLViLLain
Account Number: 30427

-bODy CoUnT- 05-15-04 05:45 PM

Aight Yo yo my nigga im back now so go ahead and drop your shit so we can get this under way... Jus buss aight... koo

Yo-YO 05-15-04 06:10 PM

Yo IM checkin in!!!!!!!

12345 You Makin Me Nervous Cause Im a Leave yo organs wit a sign that says out of service/
What the fuck bitch what you on what is this this/
This Lip Shit Goin to get you dissmissed/
Full Clips, Unload My hand straight neva miss/
Fuck the computer we can go toe to toe face to face/
123 Im carryin 45's betta stay inside Villian cause it is time for homicide/
I be totin triggers Grave diggers is all I roll in my click/
Villian Know the scheme cause its time for murder shit/
Villian you go to your church to relieve your pain and agony/
You met your destiny cuase fuckin wit me im kill you and itll be the next big tragdy/
I see niggas is bettin so nigga lyrical you just got 50 and you aint got to try to get rich and die tryin!!!!!!!
And Fuck the bay niggas from frisco but he dont im from the chi where i spit like a sports announca/
WHile this nigga gay lookin to get in the club getin rushed by bouncas.....

Diagnose 05-15-04 06:11 PM

hey dawg^^^wut skool u go to in frisko....I go ta westmoor

Yo-YO 05-15-04 06:12 PM

a lil quick some tell me what u think dawg and holla back

-bODy CoUnT- 05-15-04 06:33 PM

Hoe...Chill cuz im a rhymin professional//
Last time i went to church I saw a dude fuckin you in the confessional//
You ate my ass like this stand was concessional//
The fact is you couldn't stand up to CALI less you had a correctional//
Facility runner watchin your back//
Lookin over your shoulder, but Im comin where you see the Attack//
You dont need me to tell you you're whack//
Cuz a hundred RB singin niggas would all say the exact//
He came to me cuz he wanted to spend//
His Whole paycheck on a Rock that can out-weigh a hundred and ten//
Cows growin on the farm round the bend//
And ill be rich cuz you know yo yos keep comin again//
And he took HELLA long jus to rhyme//
Sucka nigga prolly got a lil dick so no wonder he's CHI//
This niggas head lookin up at the sky//
Cuz he wanted to see me, he's better off usin stevies eyes//(stevie wonder)

-bODy CoUnT- 05-15-04 06:37 PM

aight niggas vote on this shit... And to my D.C. homey i go to MISSION.
Drop votes on my shit and ill vote on yours

shamira 05-15-04 06:39 PM

Both of ya shit was ight, but both of u could have done better!!! yo yo, u started off strong, then u fell, also dalyricalvillain u started off strong, but in the middle of the verse u fell, but at the end u got back up. So the reason im voting for dalyricalvillian is, beacause he had a strong begging, and a strong ending!!!!!!!

Diagnose 05-15-04 06:50 PM

ahhhhhhh^^^^Damn...DaLyRicaLViLLain killed you dawg..hahahaha^^^he hella used punches against u..
since i can't vote...I'll jst say wut i think:

Yo Yo:
aight dawg...ur spit was pretty much elementary style...some of da rhymes didn't even rhyme much...lolz....u forgot to use punches..if u don't know wut that is..then figure it out..here's and exmple:

This niggas rhymes are simple and small jst like his dick//
To bad he's only as smart as Willaim Hung da retared idiot//

^not a good example..but u need punches like that even better to win battles...lolz
Spit:3/10
punch:1/10
multi:0/10


Frisco Boy:
aight dawg...ur shyt was tite...not da best i've read..but pretty good...i could tell you ain't new ta rappin at all...how long have u been doin this???well ur vocab was sick...good vocab.....u also had pretty good punches...my favorite lines were:

Hoe...Chill cuz im a rhymin professional//
Last time i went to church I saw a dude fuckin you in the confessional//


That was sick^

This niggas head lookin up at the sky//
Cuz he wanted to see me, he's better off usin stevies eyes//


this was aight^^

good everything dawg...keep it up...lookin forward to ur future battles..imma keep my eye on u..umm...

if i could vote it would go to: Frisco Boy

Diagnose 05-15-04 06:54 PM

hey frisco..do u have aim...

pn0yt0pel@aol.com

mine^

.::N-Sight::. 05-15-04 07:01 PM

Hoe...Chill cuz im a rhymin professional//
Last time i went to church I saw a dude fuckin you in the confessional//
You ate my ass like this stand was concessional//
The fact is you couldn't stand up to CALI less you had a correctional//


^^^ OMFG>..those 4 lines murdered that kids verse


Vote: Daly...punches...punches...punches...punches


hard man...i love dat style

i might have to battle u


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-bODy CoUnT- 05-16-04 04:48 PM

Uppin for votes .... finsh votin on this shit so i can claim my win homeys... Vote in this and ill return the favor

White Craca 05-18-04 06:44 PM

this shit was closer than kissing :laugh: well both of yalls were good but i gotta go with dalyrical villian cause he had more punches and thats it

White Craca 05-18-04 06:45 PM

can u guys vote on my shit with fine mind or swampsouljah716 or whatever thanks dog

Beyond Logic 05-22-04 01:32 PM

lyrical villian got this battle:
Hoe...Chill cuz im a rhymin professional//
Last time i went to church I saw a dude fuckin you in the confessional//
You ate my ass like this stand was concessional//
The fact is you couldn't stand up to CALI less you had a correctional//

those were ya strongest lines but still weren't all that appealing to me. you rhymed them, thats about it. both verses were lacking creativity n metaphors.

-bODy CoUnT- 05-22-04 02:46 PM

ay my niggas could some1 jus give me my last vote so we can close this shit up...1

-bODy CoUnT- 05-23-04 09:49 PM

Can some1 give me my last vote on this bullshit... plz

balla69 05-24-04 01:24 PM

damn lyrical merked u dawg betta punches, flow

Last time i went to church I saw a dude fuckin you in the confessional//
You ate my ass like this stand was concessional//

dat killed him vote=lyricalvillian holla


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