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.::Re$tricted Vs. Native::.
.::Rules::. 10 Lines - Native 20 Lines - Re$tricted 5 Votez Winz No Crew No Hate No D/R Votes Spits Due Tomorrow Before Midnight ..::Good Luck::.. ~R~ |
Checking in...
LMAO @ you needing 10 more lines than me.... You fucking biter |
Kid Tryin To Sway Votes Already...You Forgot To Mention That Was A Year Ago When I Bit...
Plus The Fact That You Recycled Your Bars From The Old Rb.com and Used Them In Our Other Battle THat Happened In March LOL.. ~R~ |
Awaiting his verse.......
....then I'll key |
why the fuck are the lines uneven?
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He's an idiot that needs 20 lines to have a chance... Read the callout.... Was for 10 lines |
Damn . . If you`re spitting 20 you cannot afford to lose & make sure you use personals man.
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Aiyo...Nah Kid....I Said Verses Due Before Midnight...I Am Not Gonna Post Mine and Let You See My Shit So You Can Make Yours Better LMAO...
Post Whenever...But Before Midnight.. pEace ~R~ |
Then I'll be posting at 11:59 CST....
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LMAO ^^^ this is gun be a hott battle, bring the FIRE!
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.::My Spit Against Native::.
Aiyo...Check it..
Chea...3....2....1.... :gfy: Yo I Could Measure Your Greatness and List Who You've Defeated.. Wouldn't Be Much For You To Brag About, Just An Ego That Is Concieted.. This Fag Posted A Picture, Fucking Honkey Can't Affored Lighting.. Banged In Jail, Holding On To These Bars Keeps Him Cocked and Fighting.. You Said Text Is Hopeless, But You Put So Much Emphasis On It.. Can You Say "Hypo-CHRIT", Said I Couldn't Win, I'm Leaving You Astonished.. Claiming To Be Godly..Damn..I Thought That Was Supposed To Be Good.. But If Your Claiming That, Than I Must've Had That Word Misunderstood.. Merked You Once Before and I Won't Hesitate To Merk You Again.. My Style Is Like Multiplying Yours By A Thousand With A Cannibus Blend.. Not Impressed With Your Audios, They Put Me In A Cage-Ragged Mood.. Derranged Tools, Kid Sounds Like An 8 Year Old Girl With Inflamed Boobs.. Embarrasing But Yes Its True, No One Here Respects, Let Alone Likes You.. Intise You, Transforming Into A Machine With Enough Careosene To Ignite You.. This Would Be The Only Time This Kid Spit Hot With The Help Of Re$tricted.. Would Draw A Pen On Paper and Ask You To Write, Having Your Mind Conflicted.. This Pussy Got Merked By His Own Kind, Be A Bitch That Ripped Him.. Cut Off His Man-Hood, Laid His Balls On Da Line, She Staight Snipped Them.. This Bitch Has More Alias's Than RB.com and Relaunched Members Combined.. Rated Keeping Him Trapt Wit Mindless Adebisi To Annihilate Native Mankind.. |
.::Aight It's Past Midnight...Where He At?::.
~R~ |
Its 11:43 PM CST
And I've never had an alias of mindless..... Time to key... Bye kid Your structure is nonsense, getting clowned right Cuz your stuff actually makes Dirtboy's shit look nice Just run from what's savage, to be blunt - you're average You'll have a brush with talent & get crushed by the canvass The win you can have this... This site's plague by wackness Especially when everyone with talent, resides in your blacklist Kids a faggot even admitted when he bit before And now, I''d expose this whore, but I refuse to visit EZ Boards Left floored, bloody and broken, shit, kid will never win a fight When his name just describes his access to the old site Edit..... LMAO... you used more links than I had lines... thats pathetic |
Well I Just Searched Trapt Wit...and It Brought Up A Thread Created By Mindless...(He Was The Only Person That Posted In The Whole Thing)...So It Looked Like It To Me.
Neways...Let's Get The Votes In.. ~R~ |
If we got votes sometime in my lifetime it'd be appreciated....
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im gonna have to give this to R.
R. you had just a better flow..but work on oyur structure thats all you need you need to work on.. you had coo multies and good meta4s..good use of links..but i couldnt really biew some of them cuz oyu need a user account on the old rb to view them..you was hot through out the whole flow no weak lines...i liked the way you used all of his alias against him..and your closer whos killa...all in all 9/10 Native: you was aight but i htink the fact that you had to spit 10 lines was kida unfair. but i thought you was betta then that. see you should have droped some links or some quotes or somehting... you also could have worked on oyur meta4s..and the fact that you said you lost kida made you lose..all in all 7/10 vote=R. |
Wow... a kid wanting played ass quote and linked punches
You people are 8 months behind on this board |
alright i expected this to be more of a heavyweight battle and it turned out to be short and quick like roy jones getting knocked out. not your best battles either one
R first of all had a few punches, nice punch and use of multis with no one likes you,entice you, transforming you......, that was hot. that was pretty much it, the rest of your punches didnt hit hard, kinda soft, multis was ok, but in a battle you came up short. Native, this one was close since you only kicked 10 lines, but your punches were on point. Best punch was the one with everyone with talent is on your blacklist. nICE FINISHER |
overall this was close but i give this one to native, based purely on the fact he had better punchlines.
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guess it doesnt matter, since i need 400 posts to vote.
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Re - Good spit homie, you had some hott shit in there, and your personals were on FIRE.
Best Line - Claiming To Be Godly..Damn..I Thought That Was Supposed To Be Good.. But If Your Claiming That, Than I Must've Had That Word Misunderstood.. Worst Line - NONE Native - Good spit dawg, punches was hott.. personals wasnt as good but overall good verse. Best Line - Left floored, bloody and broken, shit, kid will never win a fight When his name just describes his access to the old site Worst Line - NONE OVERALL - Close battle here, but I got to give this to Re, he came harder and had some mad sick punches in there, and the personals were hott. Native, you came hard but your punches couldnt beat Re, good try though.. you had a good verse.. punches were good, and flow was too, but Re's personals took it. VOTE - Re RETURN THE FAV http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124689 |
wow what kinda shit is this
restricted um your opener was basically a filler to me not even a real punch in that shit and your closer was pretty tight worded nice good personal and nice punch all them links are wack though shits old already stop usin it and the res of your verse was pretty good an the nwack as fuck shit would be nice in 1 are then be weak in another not a very consistent verse dont know why you would wanna spit twice as many lines as somebody but 2 many links for shit personals where there but alot of punchs werent hittin to hard to me native your opener was average dirtboy is wack but punch still wasnt to good and your closer was real seriuos damn good personal and punch some heat right there and the rest of your verse was pretty nice personals but dissi nthe whole site aitn prolyl gettin you very many votes seein i aint wack but really a smaller verse that had more consitent and better punchs is gonna win to me nice verse but that font aint helpin your verse not to looked stretched shit just makes it smaller still the same amount of words vote native |
By god... someone thats not retarded voted...
And a kid that doesnt like me to boot Oh yeah... the tahoma font doesnt decrease the size much Put his in that font and see how incredibly stretched it is compared to mine |
This battle was not what I thought it would be
Restricted.....your verse was full of fillers, an played lines, all those links is wack man, you had a few good punches, but they weren't really that strong, you didn't really have any personals in your verse, but you had really good structure an had tight flow throughout the verse, you used your vocab very well, an had a few good metas, but it wasn't creative you used some really played concepts for your verse, I thought you would have dropped much better than that. Native....it was short an to the point, your personals was hard, an punches were good throughout very consistent, opener coulda been better though, but closer was fiya that line murked his whole verse, vocab was solid throughout, an decent metas throughout, but once again your personals hit really hard, an I think that those won this battle for you, but don't ever use that font again, nice drop though Vote: Native |
ok i think restricted whiped the floor with natives ass ur really overrated and come mad basic
restricted i would like 2 c u work on ur structurea little bit and work on ur multis but u had mad personals great flow and gret vocab native u came hard but 2 basic against him ur flkow was great and ur structure was better u came with pretty good personals i think ur vocab could use work though ok im givin it 2 r he had better vocab personals and closer good verse from both though Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
LoL...At Triple N Mad Cause I Voted Against Him In His Battle...
Newayz.... .::Re$tricted::. - 3 .::Native::. - 2 ~R~ |
Restricted - probably the best i`v read from you yet.. flowed well generally.. a few stretched bars here and there.. but.. way too many links.. makes you look like a geek.. fishin` around the archives an shit.. alot of the personals have been used before on Chrit so many links were ineffective or played.. some played ideas i.e. `more alias` an your opener was pretty weak.. wasn`t much of a punch.. jus` a statement.. closer was worst line of ya verse.. jus` looked like you was desperate to get his names in.
Native - brutal.. not a word too many.. every line was efective an witty.. punches were connectin`.. personals an name flip were cool.. `blacklist` line was a tad played.. last two bars were mad quotable tho.. best lines of the battle.. closer itself was dope.. you won this for wittier, more original punches. And Restricted lost this for too amny ineffective `link` punches. v/ Native. Hit up any of my battles. |
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LMAO at you even getting votes... This site is known for the D/R I guess |
hahah native thinks he's so great...you're not that good kid...casual fucking rides your cock around this fuckin site...i'm not much of a fan of restricted...i just know that your style...you only have like 4 punches in every fuckin verse...overated...people just think your good and don't want to get bitched at so that's why your ass gets votes... restricted and lattinkitten have both merked the fuck outta you...stop talkin shit everywhere...that's all you ever do...if your that great why are you fuckin text battling in the first place idiot? i'm not going to vote...so don't worry, i wouldn't hate vote anyway...i just think your overated in a huge way...and yes i'd battle you anytime...
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well,imma drop an honest vote......n u know native,i voted for u before when u earned it.....but in this case,u really didnt..........one question.....wtf was that 20 line vs 10 line thing???
well either way.native ur whole verse was weak............i mean were u not tryin? it just sucked.......only the last line was worth mentioning "When his name just describes his access to the old site" restricted....if u ask me,he shouldnt be allowed on the site i dont care when he bit......but since yall allowin it,i guess i'll vote on what verse was the best.......umm,restricted...u dont have any well constructed punches......the content is decent...i liked u sayin hypo-chrit,cuz he definitely is...but man,if u only worded ur punches better,u'd be much much better.....u seem to write a verse thats like a story,with decent content but,u dont have the right punches........anyway,u came harder in this battle there is no doubt.......u touched on a lotta things...but like i said it felt like i was readin a story with links,rather then a battle verse.....n like i told shadows edge,puttin a link to his pic on old RB wasnt the greatest idea,it would've been harder hitting if u posted the pic above ur verse feel me? if u need more braking down.....i can do that....restricted ur closin was weak,u started off stronger.....native,ur closing was the only decent line in ur whole verse...so i'm out vote restricted |
aight heres the spcheel of dis battle
aight native your shit was short and Str8 to da point i liked it but restricted had hella alot more to say and looked like he thought about his shit more. heres Re$tricted's bes line :You Said Text Is Hopeless, But You Put So Much Emphasis On It.. Can You Say "Hypo-CHRIT", Said I Couldn't Win, I'm Leaving You Astonished.. aight now heres Natives bes line: Just run from what's savage, to be blunt - you're average You'll have a brush with talent & get crushed by the canvass The thing about natives that i didnt like is like he was battlin gainst hisself EXAMPLE: The win you can have this... This site's plague by wackness Especially when everyone with talent, resides in your blacklist ,,,,,,,,,,, How you gonna tell someone they can have the win???? well i guess but this battles going to restricted v= Re$tricted |
Yo I Could Measure Your Greatness and List Who You've Defeated..
Wouldn't Be Much For You To Brag About, Just An Ego That Is Concieted.. Not a punch, all you said was he was conceited, bad opener This Fag Posted A Picture, Fucking Honkey Can't Affored Lighting.. Banged In Jail, Holding On To These Bars Keeps Him Cocked and Fighting.. why did you post 2 links of the same thread, it doesnt make sense, and the punch alone was weak You Said Text Is Hopeless, But You Put So Much Emphasis On It.. Can You Say "Hypo-CHRIT", Said I Couldn't Win, I'm Leaving You Astonished.. once again, too many links, Im not going to continue going to every single link you post in your verse.whoever taught you how to do that should be hung.the Hypo chrit thing is played, I've said it against him a few times , and we've never even battled Claiming To Be Godly..Damn..I Thought That Was Supposed To Be Good.. But If Your Claiming That, Than I Must've Had That Word Misunderstood.. o....kay?..you have the word misunderstood..your point is?..not really a punch. It just shows that you need to read the dictionary more. lol blah @ this bar Merked You Once Before and I Won't Hesitate To Merk You Again.. My Style Is Like Multiplying Yours By A Thousand With A Cannibus Blend.. well, you didnt really "merk" him, you won by only a few votes, and the actual punch was wack as hell.. Not Impressed With Your Audios, They Put Me In A Cage-Ragged Mood.. Derranged Tools, Kid Sounds Like An 8 Year Old Girl With Inflamed Boobs.. good multis, thats something good. and finally a half decent punch. Props for this shit. Embarrasing But Yes Its True, No One Here Respects, Let Alone Likes You.. Intise You, Transforming Into A Machine With Enough Careosene To Ignite You.. some more multis, but once again, the actual punch was weak. sorry This Would Be The Only Time This Kid Spit Hot With The Help Of Re$tricted.. Would Draw A Pen On Paper and Ask You To Write, Having Your Mind Conflicted.. I didnt get this punch.. This Pussy Got Merked By His Own Kind, Be A Bitch That Ripped Him.. Cut Off His Man-Hood, Laid His Balls On Da Line, She Staight Snipped Them.. okay, LK "beat" him..but well..okay..I'll go along with this I guess..mediocre punch though This Bitch Has More Alias's Than RB.com and Relaunched Members Combined.. Rated Keeping Him Trapt Wit Mindless Adebisi To Annihilate Native Mankind.. good playt on all of his aliases.but..overall..you had a half ass'd verse with WAY TOO many links in it. They took away the look to it and the feeling I had.But atleast I can say 1 good thing,..you came like I expected you to come...WACK! Your structure is nonsense, getting clowned right Cuz your stuff actually makes Dirtboy's shit look nice Mediocre opener, but an actual punch, because dirtboy is fuckin WACK! BWahaha. could have been better though Just run from what's savage, to be blunt - you're average You'll have a brush with talent & get crushed by the canvass lol..nice nice..creative..good hard punch. The win you can have this... This site's plague by wackness Especially when everyone with talent, resides in your blacklist a few multis, thats a plus..a decent punch..although it really doesnt match the setup. Kids a faggot even admitted when he bit before And now, I''d expose this whore, but I refuse to visit EZ Boards all I can say about this is BLAH!.. Left floored, bloody and broken, shit, kid will never win a fight When his name just describes his access to the old site RRROOOFFFLLLMMMAAA. Nice closer..restricted from rb.com nice closer. overall..I would say this battle was unbalanced on so many levels.Meaning that, first of all R had twice as many lines...but Native had twice as much skill.R, you could have did better with all of those damn lines, instead you overstuffed tthem with links to bullshit. V/Native |
LMFAO..
Re$tricted - the links were just to much man The shit made you look extremely desperate Quote:
That was decent personal.. but a wack punch and in acception, a wack closer.. Native - Lol.. you made me laugh a bit Quote:
Decent personal.. witty punch your verse was filled with more wittyness with the acception of decen punches which Re$tricted didn't have that much Punches win battles so.. Native gets my vote V/Native |
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THats some wack shit! |
Wow.....THis battle was not the best ive seen out of u both but i think it was ok since im not better then either of you 2 so im gonna say Re$ won this 1 because he had a couple of punches and Native i had to double read ur Battle so this si to Re$
Vote_Re$ I would like to see a rematch between these 2 |
alright here's my vote...no hate native..eventhough you dropped a hate vote on my battle...i'll be honest on this...
here it is restricted Aiyo...Check it.. Chea...3....2....1.... Yo I Could Measure Your Greatness and List Who You've Defeated.. Wouldn't Be Much For You To Brag About, Just An Ego That Is Concieted.. 7.5 it's so true...not a great punch...but too true...good personal... This Fag Posted A Picture, Fucking Honkey Can't Affored Lighting.. Banged In Jail, Holding On To These Bars Keeps Him Cocked and Fighting.. 7 decent...ya know...good opener...poor punch... You Said Text Is Hopeless, But You Put So Much Emphasis On It.. Can You Say "Hypo-CHRIT", Said I Couldn't Win, I'm Leaving You Astonished.. 10 serious shit...killer...haha...it's so true also... Claiming To Be Godly..Damn..I Thought That Was Supposed To Be Good.. But If Your Claiming That, Than I Must've Had That Word Misunderstood.. 9.5 hahahah....this is true too...funny personal...shit son...hahaha Merked You Once Before and I Won't Hesitate To Merk You Again.. My Style Is Like Multiplying Yours By A Thousand With A Cannibus Blend.. 7 whatever line...filler..but liked the vocab...good vocab through out Not Impressed With Your Audios, They Put Me In A Cage-Ragged Mood.. Derranged Tools, Kid Sounds Like An 8 Year Old Girl With Inflamed Boobs.. 7.5 filler...but tight wording... Embarrasing But Yes Its True, No One Here Respects, Let Alone Likes You.. Intise You, Transforming Into A Machine With Enough Careosene To Ignite You..8.5 no one does like him...original... This Would Be The Only Time This Kid Spit Hot With The Help Of Re$tricted.. Would Draw A Pen On Paper and Ask You To Write, Having Your Mind Conflicted..8 good shit man...nice This Pussy Got Merked By His Own Kind, Be A Bitch That Ripped Him.. Cut Off His Man-Hood, Laid His Balls On Da Line, She Staight Snipped Them.. 9 haha she owned you...it's true...fucking good personal... This Bitch Has More Alias's Than RB.com and Relaunched Members Combined.. Rated Keeping Him Trapt Wit Mindless Adebisi To Annihilate Native Mankind.. 8 good finisher...nice verse... now for native Your structure is nonsense, getting clowned right Cuz your stuff actually makes Dirtboy's shit look nice 8 and only cause it flowed nicely...not really a huge punch but decent Just run from what's savage, to be blunt - you're average You'll have a brush with talent & get crushed by the canvass 7 only cause of the multi...doesn't really make sense...not really a punch... The win you can have this... This site's plague by wackness Especially when everyone with talent, resides in your blacklist 9,,,finally something good...nicely done... Kids a faggot even admitted when he bit before And now, I''d expose this whore, but I refuse to visit EZ Boards 7 wha??? good set up brutal punch...i mean seriously ...come on Left floored, bloody and broken, shit, kid will never win a fight When his name just describes his access to the old site 9 nice nice nice...good finisher...nice shit man... _ native 40/50 80% restricted 82/100 v- restricted_________________ Removed... possible hate vote: http://community.rapbattles.com/showpost.php?p=1296423 -strobe |
BREAKDOWN
Flow: This I give to Native cuz overall i was feelin his verse more probably because he had an overall better structure than Re$TricTed. Structure: Native gets this as well as i said because his shit was nice and kept together making it easy to follow. Re$TricTed your lines were stretched in places and they weren't all the same length and i found ures harder to follow. Punches: Re$TricTed takes this hands down because he just came a lot harder with better connection. Native had some hott punches to but overall he wasn't hitting as good as Re$TricTed. Creativity: Easily this one goes to Re$TricTed because he showed a lot better wordplay whilst Native was sticking to basic shit. Also Re$TricTed had the links all over his spit showing that he did a little research on his opponent. Best Line: Re$TricTed Not Impressed With Your Audios, They Put Me In A Cage-Ragged Mood.. Derranged Tools, Kid Sounds Like An 8 Year Old Girl With Inflamed Boobs.. Worst Line: Native Your structure is nonsense, getting clowned right Cuz your stuff actually makes Dirtboy's shit look nice OVERALL Overall it is clear that Re$TricTed took this battle easily. Native had better flow and structure but battles are about the punches and the personals really and Re$TricTed just came harder and more creative in that area. V/ - Re$TricTed |
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