Dalyricalvillain vs shamira
 

Its on you shorty...
You know the rules...

No more games...

99.9% of these niggas aint shit
And most of these niggas suck dick

u need to explain the rules. Are u spitting first?

matter a fact since u don't know how to i will!!!

Rules:
10bars
no crew votes
explain votes
4 votes wins
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U spitting first!!!!!



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how the fuck am i spittin first you called me out plus i laid the rules down in frontlines
my rules were 16 bar max YOU SPIT FIRST

yeah u right i did call u out, so i'll spit first, but u didn't tell me 16bars, when i called u out, so its still going to be 10bars. Check in, if u agree!

aight checkin in its on you.... drop it like its hot

WEAK..you win
i say that you won..i like you avatar and your abs, they look tasty
can i have a bite, i guess yoiu can call me a biter. 10/10

n you sucked all over this aint a lolly ... pop hoe 0/10

return the favor, it is a hot battle of mines
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124208

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U fucked with the wrong chick I’m never gonna get dragged, I chop up pussies like u, and leave ya ligaments in my book bag//
Competing against me u might fail, cause this chick is hell, fuck with this chick again I’ll show ya little dick for show and tell//
Messing with u is easy, my life is breezy, while u in the back of my my videos covering ya mouth like selie//(off the color purple…*U show is ugly...lol*)
Don’t u get it I don’t want u, u better off asking Elten john for a butt rub or a nice hair due//
If u hooked up with me I’ll make ya bed rock, putting so much pain on ya body u would think I’m 50 putting ja in a head lock, from 9 shots//
Im the greatest, look at my paper, making niggaz feel my reptile style, I’m high gators//
Im making this bitch into a elevator, I’m his life saver, before this bitch was not in order so I call him my operator//
Making this nigga bleed, makes me want to get a brownie and spark some trees, this bitches flow is ass rough as beyonce’s weave//
I got him looking so crazy right now, my style is so doggy u would think im from the pound, just look at the gangsta style//
He’s a ferry tail which to me is not important me, I take his pain away, so I guess u can call him a morphine//
I have photos of u making love to your spouse, on the couch, the only thing I saw that was wrong with it, was when u were spitting cum out ya mouth//

this bitches flow is ass rough as beyonce’s weave//

I meant as***

What the fuck this bitch ass nigga votes for you before you even spit...
Whatever tho...
Bitch you is crazy, "A good hair due"//
My braids cleaner than pussy if you scrubbed and got it sandblasted too//
And how long did it take you to spit//
It didn't take as long as suckin ooh wops dick and have him vote for your shit//
And you'd know all about beyounces weave//
Because i seen you going to the same hair dresser jus to recieve//
THe fucked hairstyle she be sportin, You're prolly snortin crack, i asked yo mom about you and no need for retortin//
And wait you wish you had beyounces curves// Cuz you're the aftermath of babies being born between babs bunny and urv//(urv gottie)
And that porn was like r kelly its not me//
YOur boyfriend ooh wop musta went a paste your mouth on my body//

aight..shamira...ur wack...I could beat u wit only 4 lines and u using 10..hahaha...u threw very few punches wen he threw everything at u....most of da time u talked about ur self then dissing him...ur aight..but u gotta work on ur structure cuz its hard to read ur spit like that wen it's not set up right...

aight frisco...ur spit was wack also..i wonder how u won that first one...but ur aight...u only won cuz u had more punches then she did dawg...u need ta work on ur vocab..it should be like da one in ur first battle i saw...well

vote: frisco....

this is to u shamira...don't talk smack about others being weak wen really ur not good aight..

i'll do whateva i please, and u not gonna hold me down..lol! Still uppin for votes 1-0!

nice battle u guys lol i didnt understand some of it tho but nice :P

very close battle.
I dont know who took this ut I have to go with dark
Dark-Nice stuff was very weak though.....but you took
this becuz of flow and structure.....very nice easy good 10
lines....complexity not that hard

shimira-Nice stuff also but lack on flow.......work
on that a lil but more......for the rest the rest was the same
for both of ya

well shamira...ur flow was off..i see where ur trying to go with this..and u had some forced punches...u kinda slacked

lyrical villian..ur flow was on points..and good punches..but u could have came harder..but i think u won the battle so u get my vote

(shamira u know u my girl but cha know how votes go)

ONE-SB

Uppin for votes...aight right on everybody but lets put this battle to rest vote homeys

well....dis battle wass ight but vote goes to shamira cuz hers wass longer aand had more punches den dude did even tho they were alil off ma....but yea villian ya shit wass ight too try not ta flow off wut she or any one u battle nex time diss'em ya way one...

vote:SHAMIRA

DON'T RETURN DA FAVOR....DON'T WANT ANYONE THINKIN JUS CUZ I VOTED ON DEY BATTLE TA VOTE FA ME ON MINE......B EASY!!

to me i think that shamira punchlines were better, and her lines were much longer, then dudes one. But dude shit was ill, but i liked shamira's better.

vote: shamira

ok battle. It really didn't appear that either of you wanted to win. In any case, there has to be a winner and loser.

Shamira - your structure was difficult to read. You were trying to be very aggressive and punch with all you could, but you weren't hittin' hard enuf. For that fact...neither was your oponent. You had some decent punches - I especially like that bit about Selie **I chuckled on that one** Work on structure and punch.

DaLyric - your structure was better, and your punches were direct. Your best line was prolly that Irv and babs bit.

Fundamentals is all I have to go with on this one, because both of you could have come much harder. I would have given it to Shamira if she had better structure, since I liked that Selie bit ALOT!! But, keepin' it basic, I will have to give this one to DaLyric. Sorry Sha--- keep workin' ma!!!

this was a close battle shamira - u had some pretty good punches and flow did pretty good too dalyricalvillian- ur lines were a bit short and had good punches too but my vote goes to shamira because she had better flow longer lines and thats it dalyricalvillian ripped her in punches though

vote Shamira

Well i think Shi got this 1 she got my eye a few time on her verse the rest of the battle was kinda not interesting shi had a few barz that was O.K but the rest Sloppy ,next time make and put more effort in the battle both of ya

Vote-Shi

Urmm....tough 1 this battle was good all around but..the winner is Shamira i think because she had 1 punch line i liked better the the rest of the lines:

Making this nigga bleed, makes me want to get a brownie and spark some trees, this bitches flow is ass rough as beyonce’s weave//

Man this battle was on hit but girl you was just talkin just to talk so i give it to the man