macKa vs lyrical KILLAH
 

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WEAK..you win
i say that you won..i like you avatar and your abs, they look tasty
can i have a bite, i guess yoiu can call me a biter. 10/10

n you sucked all over this aint a lolly ... pop hoe 0/10

return the favor, it is a hot battle of mines
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124208

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wtf we aint even spitt yet and u voted aint that a dick ride???

no it aint lier...... lier lier pants on fier hangin by a telephone wire

fuck, can we get that vote deleted? thats fucked. set up a new battle and ill blacklist this fag

yo its kool i told on him and he well get banned or suspended or some shit they well remove the votes

aight. well, ill drop in 15 minutes, u drop 15 minutes afta that, cool?

here we go.

This kid couldn’t drop (w)raps if it was his birthday//
I got him more “shook” than Muhammad Ali during an earthquake//
So he made the battle callout and asked me to spit-first//
Coz he knows that like Cheech and Chong sharing, I “split-herbs”//
You don’t even hope-to-win this faggot aint “dope”, but I’m still “smokin”-him//
This fool couldn’t blow up if he was in a furnace soaked-in-gin//
You couldn’t make the crowd “throw up their hands” in you “dropped-the-ceiling”//
My “shots”-aren’t-healing ones giving you “nerves” like you lost-all-feeling//*
Claim to be a Killah, but you don’t “bare arms”-like-geriatrics-with-tattoos//
While you’re in trouble coz I’ve got no qualms-to-bury-faggots-and-wack-crews//
You’re a “desperate dickhead”, so any little bitch could “blow-your-mind”//
Like you’re the Giants and I’m the Patriots, you’re loss is no-surprise//
I’m “spitting flames”, so it leaves you in crisps, my tongue burnt and my mouth-sore//
My style’s-raw, your “punches” are never “right” like you’re a southpaw//**

*nerves give you feeling, so like, im giving him nerves coz he’s lost his/lost his nerve.
**southpaws are left-handed boxers.

sorry i was late, my computer keeps fuckin crashing. i had to write the damn thing 3 times over.

ayo...o....check it.....

This is tha first hit ya know I throw ya ass threw a glass window.../
Bitch ass hoe Ya rhymes are trash played out like a Super Nentindo.../
MacKa couldn't beat me even if Re$tricted give you lines for u to diss me.../
I thought you were decient i'm wrong, cause your another whack MC.../
Bringin death ta ya frame, how bout I jack you up like Debo…/
No wonder ya sex drive is gone you need ta enhance ya dildo…/
MacKa in dis battle you can't win so start givin up hope.../
Stuff crystal meth in your intestines just ta say ya flow is dope.../
I attack ya men, comin wit hard punches betta unrelax ya chin.../
MacKa u couldn't be sick if u had unprotected sex wit africans.../
I could do with some pratice but not against lyrikaly weak pussy's.../
I don't know why u wanna battle me u everlastin rookie.../
Nobody votes for your shit when you spit it give up thats gota be a sign.../
Everybody on here knew I beat you right after they read the first line.../


no beef Re$tricted i just had to use someone good on this forum

holla atcha boy!!!!!!!!!

macka there wasnt very much flow to your verse and not everything rhymed, you were also weak on multis.

lyrical killah, debo and dlido didnt really rhymes, but that african line took macka out

I attack ya men, comin wit hard punches betta unrelax ya chin.../
MacKa u couldn't be sick if u had unprotected sex wit africans.../

VOTE=Lyrical Killah

hey guys return the fav and vote on the front lines with the graphex vs boston lyricist and graphex vs godfather

MACKA: You had some great punchlines fam. The opening one with Ali in the earthquake was creative and the closing with the southpaw line. Them shits was fire. You had some good ones in between too. Your vocab and flow couldve been better but this was a great battle rap.

LYRICALKILLAH: You had a couple good punchlines but i dont think they matched up to Macka. Your flow and vocab was decent but Macka's punchlines were harder and thats why he has my vote. I also don't like how you said restricted's name in ya flow... Thats dickriding to me but i guess thats my opinion. Keep spitting fam.

Vote: Macka

weak on multis? man, i had alot more than him. im not gonna bitch, but i dont think u really read the verses properly. coz
"arms like geriatrics with tattoos"
and
"qualms to bury fagots and wack crews"
then u got
"mouth sore, style's raw and southpaw"
all in that last line. can u show me multi's from him?

and my last line i think ripped his African line. as did
"You couldn't make the crowd through up their hands if u dropped the ceiling"
c'mon. "u couldn't be sick" lines are very played.
i really dont think u read the verses properly. i think u should in future.

macka
This kid couldn’t drop (w)raps if it was his birthday//dont make sense
I got him more “shook” than Muhammad Ali during an earthquake//meh....
So he made the battle callout and asked me to spit-first//
Coz he knows that like Cheech and Chong sharing, I “split-herbs”//nice nice
You don’t even hope-to-win this faggot aint “dope”, but I’m still “smokin”-him//
This fool couldn’t blow up if he was in a furnace soaked-in-gin//dont make sense
You couldn’t make the crowd “throw up their hands” in you “dropped-the-ceiling”//tite
My “shots”-aren’t-healing ones giving you “nerves” like you lost-all-feeling//* hmmmm
Claim to be a Killah, but you don’t “bare arms”-like-geriatrics-with-tattoos//ok
While you’re in trouble coz I’ve got no qualms-to-bury-faggots-and-wack-crews//
You’re a “desperate dickhead”, so any little bitch could “blow-your-mind”//damn,....
Like you’re the Giants and I’m the Patriots, you’re loss is no-surprise//
I’m “spitting flames”, so it leaves you in crisps, my tongue burnt and my mouth-sore//
My style’s-raw, your “punches” are never “right” like you’re a southpaw//**nice closer
your wordplay was nice and flow was good...but you need more metaphors...but tight verse...add more multies and metaphors....some shit didnt make sense

This is tha first hit ya know I throw ya ass threw a glass window.../
Bitch ass hoe Ya rhymes are trash played out like a Super Nentindo.../nono....
MacKa couldn't beat me even if Re$tricted give you lines for u to diss me.../
I thought you were decient i'm wrong, cause your another whack MC.../meh.....
Bringin death ta ya frame, how bout I jack you up like Debo…/
No wonder ya sex drive is gone you need ta enhance ya dildo…/thats good
MacKa in dis battle you can't win so start givin up hope.../
Stuff crystal meth in your intestines just ta say ya flow is dope.../nice nice nice
I attack ya men, comin wit hard punches betta unrelax ya chin.../
MacKa u couldn't be sick if u had unprotected sex wit africans.../damn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I could do with some pratice but not against lyrikaly weak pussy's.../
I don't know why u wanna battle me u everlastin rookie.../ok.............nice flwo
Nobody votes for your shit when you spit it give up thats gota be a sign.../
Everybody on here knew I beat you right after they read the first line.../
good battle man but v--macka cause he was more CONSISTENT and he had more ¨wordplays¨, he came wit many styles. however, lyrical killah´s was tight too wit as good punches but some lines were really weak. your flow was better....but agian it is a hard decision....I gotta give it to¨macka for consistency sry no hate.....good battle

they both were type evenly matched cause i like the part about the Ali and the quake witch was creative and 4 lyrical i liked the part about the african
but i think ya could've came a little harder with the merks aight
my vote-lyrical

Aight Check Dis..

Macka: 5/10
Your Shit Was Alright, Your Punches Were Mad Played..I Am Sorry But I Hate That. Your Vocab Was Wack and Your Flow Was Off. Sum Punches Came Hot Though, I Will Give Ya That...Just Use Better Word Usuage, Vocab, and Multis.

Lyrical Killah: 6/10
Your Spit Wasn't The Greatest Either, You Had A Lot Of Self-Glorification In Dis One, But Your Punches Were Sum-What Original and Hitting Hard. You Had Sum Vocab and Metas. Just Keep Elevating.

Vote - Killah

~R~

This was a close battle...I Think Lyrical Killah would have taken it if his begining was as strong as the finish... Your first few lines lacked punches even though the flow was ill-- Macka had a little problem with the structure which I can't figure out-- but it does flow nicely if you compensate for that and the whole verse is packed with punchlines...

I give Lyrical a 5 outta ten for the begining and an 8 for finish to round off to 6.5...
I give Macka a 7 out of 10--- Battle- Macka.

yoi....

this was a good battle.....

lyrical killah
punches were solid...personels ight,ur flow was good...and u had some nice structure to ur verse.....and the creativite was there and your verse was witty
macka
u had nice punches.....ur flow was ok...and....structure was coo.....
one thing i liked about your verse was your creativitie it was nice...and u tryed to be a lil witty with ur verse...but thats not enough

structure:LK
flow:LK
creativite:macka
wittieness:LK
punches:LK

V/lyrical KILLAH

Macka-...........Your Shit Wasnt that good......you had really played lines and it was messed up you had really bad vocabulary and your structure was mad messed and in doing that it threw off your flow....... two of your punches hit hard but that was it,Work on your structure and your flow.....pc

Lyrical Killah-.........Your verse was kinda week........i have seen you come alot harder, Most of the time i have talked about your self, On the other had you had witty and orignal punches that hit hard so that made up for you......strucutre was okay your vocab was okay and you had sum good metas going on

Vote - Killah

im votin kilah...
both verse were pretty blah -
but killa hhad some punches that made me laugh out loud
and i love to laugh
so vote killah