.:VA:. vs popa doc
 

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unlim lines'
no: hate
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3-0 = KO...
4-1 = KO...
otherwise 5 votes wins.. agree than check in

popa doc's gettin knocked, B4 im puttin 'em in shock./
im tha doc with tha surgical glock. wit a bullet tha size of a rock./
puttin a hole in his head, makin him tha site for an 'AND-1-DEMO'./
their U-haulin him away in multiple trips usin 2 hurses 'AND-1-LIMO./
cuz i sprayed his body into particles as if it wer tha 4th of july./
his blood shootin up like fire works, body parts fallen from tha sky./
ppl think its heavenly "rib-eye" and be rushin tha-streets./
collectin his thighs, legs and feets. fillen ther kids sacks with lunch-meats./
even given the family poodle a few dog treats,at least no bodies starvin./
ppl carvin and savin 'em in "GLAD-WARE", givin reason to startin fridges and keep 'em chargin./
im throwin hate at your face./
rubbin grace all over tha place./
cuz when im sendin you hate its better than death./
shankin yor neck, punk'cher yor chest- effecctin yor existance and stealin yor breath./

wers paps at/??................................................

VA is shallow n dence as fuck wid a desease called HIV/
got a girl pregnant cuz he couldn't control his minni dick/
i'll slash your face in h8, having scars on ur face like scar face/
your lyrics were kinda twisted like your shit had something missin/
maby creativity, thinkin it was nativity play, thats why ur lyrics are so gay/
im gonna fold you up like a sandwidch, with me ready to eat the first bite/
dis bitch is a light weight, knock you down wid a feather, whoopin ur ass wid my leather belt/
ur words stick to me like velcro, den execute u bitch, puttin u on death row/
i'll attatch u on the back of my vehical to tow, draggin your ass naked shredding skin off/
top you off like a pint of guiness, with extra froff/

aight its legit,........................u-p-p-i-n................

Both need to elevate their skills up too a higher level but just like in every case someone has to win or lose. I think Va's were better with punches! Also i think he had the best overall verse!

Vote: VA

rETURN tHE lOVE!
 

Both Verses Sucked Ass But I Gotta Give It To Va. Not B/c Im From Va But Because His Verse Was Way Better. Step Up Your Punches And Multiples. You Had No Good Word Play. Yall Need To Step Up Quick. Return The Favor

Vote=va

uppin............................................. ..........

va- i thought you had good flow and creative rhymes. "cuz i sprayed his body into particles as if it wer tha 4th of july./ his blood shootin up like fire works, body parts fallen from tha sky"...this was a nice punch..very creative.

popa doc- you did alright, but your structure was a little off. keep workin..

vote: va
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aight vote up.... 2-0/////.................................

vote goes to va, why....beacuse he had the better flow and way better contex in his verse. he had better punches n metaphors in my opionon to go along with the harder punches

1 sided in my opionon

uppin to tha top, hit this up and ill for sure hit urs ppl, just drop tha link for a fair vote//

Popa
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 6/10
Humor 6/10

VA
Flow 7/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 7/10
Humor 7/10

v/ .:VA:.

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wow this battle was way back, ive elevated a lot since then, uppin

uppin uno

Vote=VA

VA got my vote because he had better punches.Popa needs to work on hie rhyming,cuz to me his stuff was not rhyming at all therefore leaving him no flow therefore just fucking it up for himself.VA had better punches,but could work the structure a bit.Both should try to add a couple of multies in there also.

Hit one of my battles back,after all,I did take time 2 read this shit!!!

obviously :va: won this battle....popa doc your verse hardly rhymed at all...you had mediocre punches and a basic verse all around...va you had some good multies and wordplay and a couple decent punches but you both need to elevate...va your verse was pretty good until the last couple bars and then the structure just went to sleep... your lines were short and uneven no flow...really bad stuff but popa yours was even worse...you need to elevate in all areas

Flow : ::VA::
Structure: popa
Punches: VA
Multies: VA
Wordplay: VA
Consistency: VA
Personals: none

vote: VA

weak battle

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