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Blak Siinz \\\/// Accomplishment
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yo check bitch
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yeah yeah whatever.......*merke* cough.....check
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Kill dis herb lets hope deese votes ain't bias... ...how couldn't they be... 50 post kids already got more dan one alias.../ U ain't ill, unlike me, you be lacking stars... Your vers couldnt be sweet if u could spit candy bars.../ HAWK loogies to newbies, while i'm hitten you... funny thing is this kid couldnt HACK it on the original.../ I'd blast this through dis kid, then make it last... ...his verse couldn't be compared... if i only handed him half his ass.../ sendya back to original, like a deported imigrant... killya bitch, if i fed off ya verse i'd still be full of shit.../ Despisin my game, hate the fact that i rap, and he's lame... ...cuz he couldn't be seen... even by da two I's in his name.../ finished wit this shit, fuck it blak, take a while... ...cuz ten to one chances... ur verse is gonna have quotes from 8 mile.../ |
Let's Get It Crackin
Jus ‘Avert-To-Lose’ I'm Sinistar Nobody Feelin Ya Once Blak ‘Murks-Crews’! Dont Test My ‘Words-Dude’ I Smash ‘Herds-Through’! .. And Turn A "Faggit" Into A ‘Herb-Two’! .. Leave Kids ‘Folded-&-Finished’! .. Turn This Bitch Into A ‘Bold-Witness .. Test Me? And Get Slugs To ‘Show up on our Porch’ like ‘Jehova-Witness .. Destroy Ya Face! He Can’t ‘keep-up’ Like His Pants Too ‘Hard-at-the-Waste .. His Left Beat-Up..So He ‘Blew off Baron Davis’ To Put a ‘Guard-to-his-Face .. Your ‘Bars A Disgrace’! .. Blak ‘Hard-To-Replace’… ‘Like a ‘Tit-or-a-Eye.. ‘Split-This-Guy’! .. Plaster Ya Chest! This Bastard Vet Have His ‘Wits-In-Ties .. I ‘Flip-Ya-Tries’! Wont Skip-This-Demise! The Flows-Intact My ‘Blows-Attack .. And Come On Duke! Let’s Not Contradict “Hip-Hop” By Saying You ‘Know-Rap .. Ya Soul-Will-Crack! Siinz Is Ya Idol! Steadily ‘Breakin-Ya-Vitals .. And If This Bitch Is “100-0” Then I Kno You Aint Never ‘Takin-The-Titles.. Only "Accomplishment" you gunna achive this battle is make it 12 for you loss.. have on your knees by the end beging please like Tony Danza on who the boss.. blahh not my best but fuck it not feeling myself at allright now |
Black sinz you tight bro for real i mean the shit is like that but Let me battle you so you know what competition is really like
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what does murkin crews have to do with this battle
what is an herb two... just wonderin bout them forced multies |
I was kinda dissapointed by this battle... I've read accomplishments battles before and you usually attack with a ferocity that wasn't here. Your closer however had me laughin like I expected so you did have a couple nice punches in there.. As for Black-- Your flow is definately nasty, you did have a couple forced multi syllables in there but it didn't matter due to the sever lack of punches in the verse. If flow was what decided this battle I'd give Black the V but since it was a battle, I gotta go on punches and Accomplishment definately had the punch in the end of the battle so I vote for him.
Please return the favor.....http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124310 |
oh well fuck it and a Herb is a wack cat.......sumwun thinkin he the best......basically You.....i came half assed and still beat you except for the punches
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accomplishment u under estimated this new kat u had bad strcuture weak flow fair punches your best line:finished wit this shit, fuck it blak, take a while... ...cuz ten to one chances... ur verse is gonna have quotes from 8 mile.../ look at that wack structure i was talkin bout^^^ overall*6* bias and alias dont really rhyme either -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- black good verse solid structure not great punches but they did the job ^^work on your punches^^ best lines:Leave Kids ‘Folded-&-Finished’! .. Turn This Bitch Into A ‘Bold-Witness .. Test Me? And Get Slugs To ‘Show up on our Porch’ like ‘Jehova-Witness .. Only "Accomplishment" you gunna achive this battle is make it 12 for you loss.. have on your knees by the end beging please like Tony Danza on who the boss.. like i said^^ not great punch but nice verse better than his alias and bias doesnt rhymes accomp kno dat my vote black |
its aight i know you to know eachother from either.. RB original or Urban flows.. one of the two... you said you would win except for punches... BATTLES ARE PUNCHES idiot... go find the best text battler around and take alook at his structure...(Chrit) compare it to mine...
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chrit aint the best text battle....man i took it easy on your ass cause of your fucking wack ass verse....mabye you should have taken Nolost4Rhyms advice when he told you about me you fucking idot
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yo i gotta go with accomplishment i enjoyed his easy read flow
text flow is a hard one to assemble and everyone has there own style it seems and if its not like everyone elses its automatically garbage well if people flowed the verse instead of READING it they would determin that accomp had better fluency i thought both had some good wordplay and both had some stuffed rymes in there but overall the flow in my opinion was just a lil bit better on accomplishment big ups to both for a decent battle keep flowin yall v-accomp |
Aight i gotta go wit Blak on this 1 both had decent verse and punches on both sides were real strong both had a kinda weak structure but Blaks was stronger coz Acc i couldnt really make out where the verse ended and where it began both cats r real tight on the battle field but i think Blak had this 1 put more into it.
V/Blak Siinz |
2 up still uppin for votes.... please blak siiz keep talkin
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uppp for votes...
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I think black took this.....he came harder than Accomplishment......Nice
structure by the way.......You took this becuz of your similies and metaphores. Work on punches more but they was tight too.......Thats all v/blak Return the favor please...I murked him http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124400 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
ok blak siinz took this shit with ease accomplishemnt- ur stuff was pretty good but u didnt compare to blak siinz's verse vote= blak siinz
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ok blak siinz took this shit with ease accomplishemnt- ur stuff was pretty good but u didnt compare to blak siinz's verse vote= blak siinz
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ok blak siinz took this shit with ease accomplishemnt- ur stuff was pretty good but u didnt compare to blak siinz's verse vote= blak siinz
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o shit messed up sry yall vote on my battle with fine mind plz come on ill return the fava
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damn accomp...you should have done alot better...well there are always times wen u do bad..fa' sho...well i give this ta black cuz he did give more punch
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Crew vote should be removed besides the Feedback.
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it wasnt a crew vote cause i wasnt in the crew until they saw mi verse in this battle
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finished wit this shit, fuck it blak, take a while...
...cuz ten to one chances... ur verse is gonna have quotes from 8 mile.../ ^^ weak closer...and I'm not feeling your structure...shit looks like Poetry Let's Get It Crackin Jus ‘Avert-To-Lose’ I'm Sinistar Nobody Feelin Ya Once Blak ‘Murks-Crews’! Dont Test My ‘Words-Dude’ I Smash ‘Herds-Through’! .. And Turn A "Faggit" Into A ‘Herb-Two’! .. ^^^ Just start ur verse already...damn...lol Leave Kids ‘Folded-&-Finished’! .. Turn This Bitch Into A ‘Bold-Witness .. Test Me? And Get Slugs To ‘Show up on our Porch’ like ‘Jehova-Witness .. ^^ pretty decent opener Destroy Ya Face! He Can’t ‘keep-up’ Like His Pants Too ‘Hard-at-the-Waste .. His Left Beat-Up..So He ‘Blew off Baron Davis’ To Put a ‘Guard-to-his-Face .. Decent^^^^^^ Only "Accomplishment" you gunna achive this battle is make it 12 for you loss.. have on your knees by the end beging please like Tony Danza on who the boss.. ^^^^^ decent... ur verse wasn't all that great, but way more cnsistent with punches than ACC. Vote: Flash |
thank you peeps i am upping for 2 more votes so i can beat this cat again...........
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Aight imma have to go with Sinns here... Heres how i break it down..
ACCOMP - your structure wasn't too good, but it was different for a change your punches were good your flow was kinda hard to get at cause of the structure Bias and Alias dont rhyme... overall im gonna give u an 8 outta 10 SINNS - You had alright structure, i didnt like the whole - - - - - stuff... You had good punches as well, a lil better then accomplishment.. I didn like how u rhymes witness with witness... lack of creativity... Overall im gonna give u a 9 cause u had better structure, a little bit better punches, and a good flow... Vote - Sinns |
uppin for the 5th vote again......i want this battle to be closed for good this time
if you gunna vote explain your votes.....thanks |
black sinz has this battle clearly he has my vote
return the fava The Chosen One vs. Tonyself |
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