Nae\\s//Krairo
10-20lines
no d/r no bullshit votes blah, blah, blah you kno da rules 45min |
aight I agree time starts now
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Neva slippn my tongue i need no correctionz cuz i spit wit perfection and end ya life in 60 seconds/
I been blessed wit a tongue to spit deez clips to fracture ya hip/ Neva come 2 war wit only a knife nigga dats juz a tip/ 16 yrs old huh you still young and ya mind is mellow/ I shoot 2 clips at ya body and turn ya bladder into jello/ U aint real 2 me what im spittin iz 2 "ill"/ Gimme a pen and a paper and i write out ya will when ya body lays still/ Now ya body layin still on da ground dead wit no motion/ Neva side tracked when i flow cuz i spit wit too much emotions/ You fuckin toilet paper mouth always talkin shit/ U front on nae i swear you'll get ya fukin throat ripped/ My rhymez is raw like sex wit no condom/ When i flo i kill emceez wit no problem/ |
eh give and extension on the time I got a friend over here recording give it like and hour
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Lil Nae2 I'm bringin to straight to u/ #1
I'm focused right now like the pilot of a F-22/ #2 why would I use a missle/ #3 when for u all I need is this a pistol/ #4 gunshots ringin in yo ears remind u of a whistle/ #5 as yo brains hit the engine and start to sizzle/ #6 Lil Nae2 should be know as lil fake2/ #7 second fakest MC since Vinillia Ice saw the truth/ #8 I ain't talkin bout Beanie Sigel the truth I'm livin proof/ #9 I can say I pops 9's but still ain't spent no time/ #10 while u scramble for punchlines use a actor remindin me of Gregory Hines/ #11 don't ever think you'll get a deal wit weak punchlines/ #12 U fucked up when u 1st stepped on the front line/ #13 another example bout to about to have my skills shined upon/ #14 if u ask me I think your more stuckup than tampons/ #15 you need to condense your attitude your to cocky/ #16 don't think of fightin me man I'll knock u out like Rocky/ #17 couple shots to the head or 1 to the temple/ #18 I got u delirious cause u think your name's Rumple Stinskle/ #19 ( that story where the person had to guess his name) come against me and get broke worst than a pencil/ had to speed write damn people want to record soo much |
c'mon someone vote for this shit
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aight both had good shit....but i think lil nae took this one cuz her shit wasnt full of filler lines and her punches came better......
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uppin fo votes
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LiL Nae Just Takes Thiz 1 Wit Pucnhes And Flow
Kariro Wa Ok But try And Improve On ya Punches And Complexity LIl Nae Try And Work On Some Deeper Pucnhes As Well Vote=Lil Nae2 Return Da Favour Links Is In Ma Sig....Peace! |
lil nae all the way. don't get me wrong Krairo your verse was aight but i think you took the 10-10 limit to far. your lines were mad long and your structure was weak. punchlines were aight but to stretched out man. lil nae nice punches and structure. i was fellin yah verse lil shawty. better punches and lyrics. return the fava
vote=lil nae |
lol I rushed too do that I'll take my time next time I've been flowed for like 1 hour or 2 like 2 nights ago I'd rip her now. I did learn from rushing tho
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uppin on votes
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uppin on votes
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uppin on votes stop lokin at it and vote
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Nae got this, his punchlines was off the chains. Krairo it seemed like to me, that u were russing your words, but your verse was ok.
Vote:Nae |
im a fukin grl yall muthafuka get da shit str8ht uppin on votes
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yo lil nea took this shit with her mad creativity, and punches
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vote on my shit please http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125654
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