da jokah vs don
rules is 10 to 20 lines
no dr crew or hate votes no bite or ricyclin due in 20 mins lets goooo..wun |
im chekin in lets go good luck u goin first
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chekin in wun
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ayo chek it da jokah like a train cuz iam runnin threw dem trax//
take this advice and go get ur alliance back/ you lost like me in ma fuckin science class/ cause dawg what im arm'n is hot/ chop you up and mail ur arms to the cops/ cause i be passin weight through the children/ shots flying every "everybody evacuate the buildin'/ dawg your flows gimic/ fuck chrome, it taste like a rotten apple with worm holes in it/ da jokah is quick to make a bastard fall/ they whole crew get "checked up" like a street game of basketball/ dawg you feel hopeless/ wild cat or phat cat? what ever..your shit is still bogus/ my flows is on fire/ i sell the heat for alot so get the cost right// i shook ur hand and like a bitch u caught frost bite// and i'll hack a nigga down just to earn the name butcher // and ur rhymes stink worse than the comidie of ashton cutcher// fuck tires im markin this rookie// dont be surprised if you see ur girl with teeth marks on her pussy/// Fuck da lyrics..votes...lets take this shit to da streetz// 16 shots later dis nigga is like dis battle and he layin in da-feet// wun muh fucka.. |
ok that was good
this little boy who calls himself Da Jokah... you called me out but nah bitch i already got a limozine choffa... he must be playin cause his punches are lobbin... hey i guess he jus neva watched batman and robin... i got my utility belt with shit that can kill you... none of ur your shit holds togetha so next time use a drill screw.. thats about all you can do to improve your game... that and oh yeah dawg try changin tha name... afta listenin to tha rhymes it left us all soft in tha brain... wen im done i perscribe u some morphine to deal with ur pain... wen he was halfway through i suprised he aint choke... cause this fools no flyweight hes just a straight joke |
ok that was good no crew votes or hate votes causae that shit gay n it makes this stuff personal. good stuff jokah i like ur style.
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nice yo..uppin fo votez......
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uppin fo votez
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don ur a joke. go check in our battle. stop tryin to avoid me. sorry for the freepost. goodluck jokah. you beat his ass. jus cant vote cause this bitch will report it as a hate vote. hahaha!
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dont worry hes mad because he neva showed up to fight me hes always scared nick why dont u jus admit u white n live in the farming part of delaware stop tryin if u want a fight im right here
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Da Jokah ILL MAN nice lyrics sun
not the best ive seen of you but good stuff punches were alot better vote Da Jokah |
ya i think ill agree with MC BERETTA Da Jokah took this battle with ease and don work on ya shit ull get better vote- Da Jokah
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this was a okay beat battle jokah took this one cuse had jus way beta punches and flow don elevate that i can tell u and jokah come harder he couldve won with beta punches
hey yall vote honestly aginst my battle aginst the gilla teen and lyrical demon dont know how to do the link think jus go to search and put my name in and look for those battles |
Well this is not to tought of a battle to judge, Jokah you came pretty good, probably about average some of your punches were a bit hard to follow some were creative and it worked well. My only suggestion to you would be to try and clean up the flow a bit, if you can do that then I would say that it would enhance yoru punches.
Don you need to throw some better punches, yours werent creative the flow was alright but there were no personals and thats about it. Keep elivate'n maybe battle a newb next time. |
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Jokah takes this battle cuz his verse was just stronger. Stronger punches and personals. Don it wasen't bad but u just gotta elevate some. A couple of the lines didn't make sense. Not bad though.
$MOKESKREEN VS GENERAL HOOD |
I Got To Give It To Jokah He Was Just Str8 Sick Wit It But Yo Don Ur Shit Was Hot Too
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aight thanx uppin fo votez....
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aight jokah,u steppin up evry day g,some good punches,flow was off a bit but overall it was good.
don,not a bad verse,u jus need to come wiv harder punches and some personals,kepp elavatin dawg. my vote-da jokah |
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