<<Action Vz Lil Nae2 >>
 

Rules:
10 Lines/5 Bars
First To 5 Wins, 3-0 KO
No Hate, D/R, Or Crew Votes


I Set It Up, So You Spit First...

G' Luck...

I'll leave you laying down, shaking like an epelectick/
seize ya like a detective apprehending the unsuspected//
you talkin' too much shit, something I should've expected/
the only way you hittin' like a tank is if that tank's a septick//
I'm the cure for the infected/
cleaning out the bacterium crumbs like an antiseptic//
you picked up a pen, shoulda left it un-affected/
you a pathetic skeptic investing your time on a weak rhyme ready to be rejected//
I'll burn you like I was acidic/
to be more specific, I'm quantized educated quantum physicks//
Everytime you rock a mic, gotta check the shit for lipstick/
around a 12 inch dick or galvanized pipe is where your lips fit//
You don't get fucked in the butt, you just get fisted/
the fact you eat crap outta azzcrack is the only reason why you "spit shit"//
The H-2-O pro, I flow like likwit/
the only time you'll flow right is when you get your wrist slit//
Here's a lending lyric, take it, I insist it/
if having half a brain were a train, your azz just missed it//
This is but an ounce of knowledge, you still can't lift it/
like when you saw pussy for the first time, you just can't find the right tool to stick it...

Aight That Was More Then 10 Lines, But Whateva I'ma Keep To The Rules..


Listen Bitch,
You Aint Even Close To Nice So I'ma Eat-Ya-In-This-Battle... ~1
This Ho Finished Cuz I'm Hungry Like Latifah-In-White-Castle... ~2
Guess I Gotta Rip-A-Fake, Cuz When I Flow I Kill And Oblit-er-ate... ~3
And The Only "HARD TIMES" Nae Faces Is When She Got A Dick-To-Taste... ~4
Heffer Only Got "PHAT RHYMES" Wit Verses On Her Hips-And-Waste... ~5
Lyrically This Chick-Is-Raped.. Fuck A Lil Nae Cuz A Bitch-I-Hate... ~6
Homegirl Only "FLOW SICK" When She On The Rag Wit A Yeast-Infection... ~7
And You Couldn't Hide From My Divine Rhymes Wit Police-Protection... ~8
Chillin On That PS2 Game The Only Time This Flusie Be-In-The-Streets... ~9
Guzzlin Seamen-For-Weeks She Just Mad Cuz My Whole Team-Got-the-Cheeks...~10


Explanations:
Line 7 - On the Rag=On Her Period
Line 9 - NBA Streets Is A Game For Playstation 2

Yall Should Get The Rest, It Aint To Complicated...

Aight Yall, We Both Dropped Our Verses... So Peep And Drop A Vote...

ummm good battle fellaz.......ok

flow: action
punch:action
wordplay:nae
multies:nae
Vote: action ( punch'z just win by da inch......naw mean)

good shit yall

Uppin 4 More Votes...

Hey Lil Nae, dat's my daughter's name! lOl... Her name is Nevaeh, and we call er Nae Nae, or Lil Nae for short. lOl.... Jus thought I'd let you know... If you're a dude then I'm sorry!

Punches=Action
Flow=Nae
Multis=Action
Personals=Tie (Didn't really see any from either verse)
Wordplay=Action
Complexity= About even
Overall= Action

Vote=Action

Good battle! Nae, your flow was tight, but you lackked da effective punches dat Action had, and punches win battles, bottom line. Good jod, and congrats to whoever wins...

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Uppin 4 Votes...

Action I think Took This..sick rhyme scheme..other dude's got redundant..plus he did a line about "spittin shit" can't get more played..best line..

You Aint Even Close To Nice So I'ma Eat-Ya-In-This-Battle... ~1
This Ho Finished Cuz I'm Hungry Like Latifah-In-White-Castle... ~2
Guess I Gotta Rip-A-Fake, Cuz When I Flow I Kill And Oblit-er-ate... ~3
And The Only "HARD TIMES" Nae Faces Is When She Got A Dick-To-Ta

that did it for me..she had no personals either...

i liked action's rhyme scheme except the fact that he talked about himself too much the comparison were more to him than Lil Nae... i liked Lil Nae's lines:

You don't get fucked in the butt, you just get fisted/
the fact you eat crap outta azzcrack is the only reason why you "spit shit"//
The H-2-O pro, I flow like likwit/
the only time you'll flow right is when you get your wrist slit//

that was some funny ass shit... i give it up to Lil Nae

my vote: lol Lil Nae

Uppin 4 Votes...

flow: nae
punch:action
wordplay:nae
multies:action

VOTE=ACTION

Close Battle both yall try And Come More Complex Next time

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Uppin 4 Votes...

i give it to action b/c he stuck to the rules. he is a loyal rapper. nice punches action. step up your lyrics though.return the fava
erase this vote or not i don't care action was true to the game

vote=action

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i think action got this cause of his punches n multis

nae2 had some nice multis and some nice vocab too but action's flow mixed in with the context of the verse was just too strong overall.

nice battle though

WTF, Why All The Votes Gettin DQ'd. This Some Bullshit.

Uppin 4 Votes...

uppin fo votes

Uppin 4 Votes...

Damn, everyone's vote DQ'd for inadequated feedbackk? I'll redo mine...

open: Nae (this is a stupid thing to vote on... this should be wordplay not opener- who gives a fuckk about openers?)
close: Act (this is a stupid thing to vote on too! this shoule be for flow! who da hell thought on this shit for voting on a battle?)
personals: Act
metas: Act
punches: Act
multis: Act

win: Act

open:action
close:action
metas:LilNae
multis:action
flow:LilNae
personals:action

winner:action

Yo this Battle's A Week Old Already, Can yall Vote Up...

uppin on votes stop lookin at dis shit and vote

Uppin 4 Votes...

I'll leave you laying down, shaking like an epelectick/
seize ya like a detective apprehending the unsuspected//nice multie
you talkin' too much shit, something I should've expected/
the only way you hittin' like a tank is if that tank's a septick//ok...
I'm the cure for the infected/
cleaning out the bacterium crumbs like an antiseptic//
you picked up a pen, shoulda left it un-affected/nice flow
you a pathetic skeptic investing your time on a weak rhyme ready to be rejected//nice
I'll burn you like I was acidic/
to be more specific, I'm quantized educated quantum physicks//no.....
Everytime you rock a mic, gotta check the shit for lipstick/
around a 12 inch dick or galvanized pipe is where your lips fit//aiight
You don't get fucked in the butt, you just get fisted/
the fact you eat crap outta azzcrack is the only reason why you "spit shit"//played
The H-2-O pro, I flow like likwit/
the only time you'll flow right is when you get your wrist slit//nice
Here's a lending lyric, take it, I insist it/
if having half a brain were a train, your azz just missed it//ok...
This is but an ounce of knowledge, you still can't lift it/
like when you saw pussy for the first time, you just can't find the right tool to stick it...ok...played but nice flow


action

Listen Bitch,
You Aint Even Close To Nice So I'ma Eat-Ya-In-This-Battle... ~1
This Ho Finished Cuz I'm Hungry Like Latifah-In-White-Castle... ~2 ya nice...
Guess I Gotta Rip-A-Fake, Cuz When I Flow I Kill And Oblit-er-ate... ~3
And The Only "HARD TIMES" Nae Faces Is When She Got A Dick-To-Taste... ~4 nice...
Heffer Only Got "PHAT RHYMES" Wit Verses On Her Hips-And-Waste... ~5
Lyrically This Chick-Is-Raped.. Fuck A Lil Nae Cuz A Bitch-I-Hate... ~6 nice multie...
Homegirl Only "FLOW SICK" When She On The Rag Wit A Yeast-Infection... ~7
And You Couldn't Hide From My Divine Rhymes Wit Police-Protection... ~8 nice....
Chillin On That PS2 Game The Only Time This Flusie Be-In-The-Streets... ~9
Guzzlin Seamen-For-Weeks She Just Mad Cuz My Whole Team-Got-the-Cheeks...~10 nice...

this was hard to vote cause both were good, but both didnt have punches that hit really hard. But i think i GOTTA GIVE it to ACTION cause his lines were down to the point, no fillers, multies were incorporated in the punches which made it flow nice...lil nae shouldnt use fillers cause it fucks up the flow.....but overall nice battle this goes to action peace.

ight this battle goes to action even despit shorty goin ova tha limit..

multies, and complexity go to lil nae for lines like...

I'll leave you laying down, shaking like an epelectick/
seize ya like a detective apprehending the unsuspected//
you talkin' too much shit, something I should've expected/
the only way you hittin' like a tank is if that tank's a septick//

but the flow, punches, personals, got to action for lines like...

Guess I Gotta Rip-A-Fake, Cuz When I Flow I Kill And Oblit-er-ate... ~3
And The Only "HARD TIMES" Nae Faces Is When She Got A Dick-To-Taste... ~4
Heffer Only Got "PHAT RHYMES" Wit Verses On Her Hips-And-Waste... ~5
Lyrically This Chick-Is-Raped.. Fuck A Lil Nae Cuz A Bitch-I-Hate...


vote=action