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DirtBoy69 05-16-04 10:05 PM

**Championship match** kingz(champ) vs. enygma
 
deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
30 line max.

Kingz 05-17-04 02:42 AM

check
its on

Enygma 05-17-04 01:13 PM

Check.....a rematch already.......just to let you know, I plan to skull drag you this time.

Enygma 05-19-04 12:59 PM

It's over......

Kingz, your reign is over...you're in the eye of the storm
This champ is publicly fucked...now he can rely on his porn
I'll put you over my knee and leave your ass abused
Win?.....C'mon....seems like he already plans to lose
Personals about your crew?...yeah I could send a bunch
But I could type like this and you still wouldn't get the punch
Lets face it, I’m diss regarded while you’re just plain old disregarded
He’s bout to drop some hot shit…my mistake, the kid just farted
I’m known for the jack of hearts…..I’ll take you life with my pen
And you could be the king of clubs……with a knife in your head
Or I could run up in your spot…..with two guns a blazing
And you’ll be screaming JESUS CHRIST when I bring your crew suffocation
And what the fuck did you Blueprint? There's no need to conceal it
A crew with Kingz and a Jack., no wonder they're easy to deal wit
Kingz battles like he fucks……..he just ain’t up to it
Cause like your crew predicts…...dawg, you just blue it

Enhance 05-19-04 01:19 PM

Personals about your crew?...yeah I could send a bunch
But I could type like this and you still wouldn't get the punch
^ Very Clever . .
Awaits for kings.

Kingz 05-21-04 06:07 AM

you say your 'gangstarr'..but ya 'skillz' got me in disbelief
as ya avatar shows...ya got ya mum handling ya beef
this aint an 'Enigma'...you aint no 'man of mystery'
your punches go no 'powers'...they jus dont do shit to me
u jus started audio...but ya 'hot shit' has never been heard
i'll disorientate you son...leaving your deadly visionz blurred
u aint earning cash money...you need a 'buc'...so go south
like Luda ya reputation came from...ya own 'word of mouf'
check his propaganda...like Rakim says he's got lots of 'soul'
i'll leave ya 'mind and body' in paralysis...you've jus lost all control
this is the second time i have had to murder you..its getting old
like ya mum in ya avatar...but i believe thats already been told (line 2)
its played...jus like ya wholse verse...like you sed 'its over'
i've beat ya...like roc did nas
....so jus call me J Hova

Blueprint Baby

Enhance 05-21-04 08:26 AM

you say your 'gangstarr'..but ya 'skillz' got me in disbelief
as ya avatar shows...ya got ya mum handling ya beef
LMAO . .
I honestly thought kingz won . .
but
no - show . . .
You posted on friday.

Kingz 05-21-04 08:41 AM

i had my verse dun but my comp didnt work - the internet wudnt work, it cudnt be helped. i was like 10 hours late, u can let off surely?

King Solo 05-21-04 10:54 AM

Kingz, your reign is over...you're in the eye of the storm
This champ is publicly fucked...now he can rely on his porn
7...nice opener, gud punch but pretty basic vocab.
I'll put you over my knee and leave your ass abused
Win?.....C'mon....seems like he already plans to lose
7...gud line, nice meta in the first line.
Personals about your crew?...yeah I could send a bunch
But I could type like this and you still wouldn't get the punch
6...average punch, wasn't really a strong diss.
Lets face it, I’m diss regarded while you’re just plain old disregarded
He’s bout to drop some hot shit…my mistake, the kid just farted
8...LMFAO!! Funny shit man funny shit!!
I’m known for the jack of hearts…..I’ll take you life with my pen
And you could be the king of clubs……with a knife in your head
6...not really gud, pretty basic i think.
Or I could run up in your spot…..with two guns a blazing
And you’ll be screaming JESUS CHRIST when I bring your crew suffocation
7...nice punch, pretty average vocabs.
And what the fuck did you Blueprint? There's no need to conceal it
A crew with Kingz and a Jack., no wonder they're easy to deal wit
9...SICK!! Best line u spit straight up!!
Kingz battles like he fucks……..he just ain’t up to it
Cause like your crew predicts…...dawg, you just blue it
6...pretty weak closer!!


you say your 'gangstarr'..but ya 'skillz' got me in disbelief
as ya avatar shows...ya got ya mum handling ya beef
9...LMFAO!! Funny as hell, one sick ass opener!!
this aint an 'Enigma'...you aint no 'man of mystery'
your punches go no 'powers'...they jus dont do shit to me
7...aight punch, first line was better i think.
u jus started audio...but ya 'hot shit' has never been heard
i'll disorientate you son...leaving your deadly visionz blurred
7...nice punch again, pretty good personal Kingz.
u aint earning cash money...you need a 'buc'...so go south
like Luda ya reputation came from...ya own 'word of mouf'
7...gud punch again, nice wordplay in there.
check his propaganda...like Rakim says he's got lots of 'soul'
i'll leave ya 'mind and body' in paralysis...you've jus lost all control
6...pretty weak compared to ure other lines man!!
this is the second time i have had to murder you..its getting old
like ya mum in ya avatar...but i believe thats already been told (line 2)
7...nice punch, liked the way u linked back to the beginning!!
its played...jus like ya wholse verse...like you sed 'its over'
i've beat ya...like roc did nas
....so jus call me J Hova
7...nice closer, nowhere near as good as ure opener tho!!


POINTS TOTALS

enygma - 56/80 70%
Kingz - 50/70 71%

V/ - Kingz...just edged it!!

-Zone Out- 05-21-04 11:15 AM

wtf?^
Engyma got this one
I felt came decent, but often to corny or played
engyma, I have to say, beat him..rather cleverly
The Blueprint line was dopeness

v/engyma

Enygma 05-21-04 11:53 AM

Doesn't really matter when he posted his verse.....lets go with the votes.....Ohh, by the way, If you looked at my avatar you would see that it is a man cooking on the grill. It was a pretty clever punch (the only one), but why use it twice?

Kingz - 1
Enygma - 1

*not to self....If I lose, bitch about the late drop*

-Zone Out- 05-21-04 12:00 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by enygma
Doesn't really matter when he posted his verse.....lets go with the votes.....Ohh, by the way, If you looked at my avatar you would see that it is a man cooking on the grill. It was a pretty clever punch (the only one), but why use it twice?

Kingz - 1
Enygma - 1

*not to self....If I lose, bitch about the late drop*

shouldnt it be note*, and not not?

Enygma 05-21-04 12:05 PM

It was really just a joke.....I don't really care when he dropped. It is kinda suspicious that he always waits 'til the last minute probably trying to fix his verse of look for better personals or whatever.....I'm pretty confident that his verse was garbage and everyone will see it....

Shadows edge 05-21-04 03:07 PM

His verse was garbage, and the avatar is a dude handling burgers. Kinda ruined the punch for me, although it was still pretty nice the first time. not the second time. rest of verse = crap. no real nice punches, no wordplay or nice metas.

enygma had a couple nice concepts and some good punches. the blue print line.. i really liked the concept and wanted the punch to be nice, but the wording let it down. it was nice, but could have really won this easily for you. then you kinda grasped with your first card wordplay diss:

"
I’m known for the jack of hearts…..I’ll take you life with my pen
And you could be the king of clubs……with a knife in your head"

^ boo-urns.

"
And what the fuck did you Blueprint? There's no need to conceal it
A crew with Kingz and a Jack., no wonder they're easy to deal wit"

^ far better.

your closer was pretty decent.

enygma wins hands down for better wordplay and punches.

DirtBoy69 05-21-04 09:55 PM

just cause i don't wanna see a no show in the title match ands it's my fault for the threads being left open i'm a let this go and on to the vote

breakdown for enygma:

flow:straight flow worked through the whole peice 7/10

volcab:pretty good i've seen better in past title matches though 6/10

punches:some pretty good personals best line,"A crew with Kingz and a Jack., no wonder they're easy to deal wit" good job 7/10

overall:20/30 pretty good verse

breakdown for kingz:

flow:nice feeling this through the whole peice 7/10

volcab:good use edged enygma here 7/10

punches:a bigger amount of punches then enygma had and a solid quality of them in the entire peice best line,"like Luda ya reputation came from...ya own 'word of mouf'" good job 8/10

overall:22/30

vote--kingz took this just a notch above enygma

Kingz 05-22-04 04:54 AM

Kingz - 2
Enygma - 2

Mad Dog 05-22-04 05:10 AM

I think Kingz got this 1 coz his punches were decent 8/10 personals good 7/10 the structure was again decent 8.5/10 and wordplay too was killa 8/10.

Enygma had ok punches but kinda basic 7/10 personals too were good 6.5/10 and structure hott well displayed 9/10 and wordplay was decent 7.5/10

Break down Kingz 31.5/40
Enygma: 30/40

Tight battle peeps but Kingz jus got this i felt props to both tho

.::N-Sight::. 05-22-04 06:10 AM

Kingz, your reign is over...you're in the eye of the storm
This champ is publicly fucked...now he can rely on his porn

^^ pretty decent there

I'll put you over my knee and leave your ass abused
Win?.....C'mon....seems like he already plans to lose

^^^ nice

Lets face it, I’m diss regarded while you’re just plain old disregarded
He’s bout to drop some hot shit…my mistake, the kid just farted

^^ the disregarded part was slick...the fart part was kinda corny

Kingz battles like he fucks……..he just ain’t up to it
Cause like your crew predicts…...dawg, you just blue it

^^ nice nice closer

you say your 'gangstarr'..but ya 'skillz' got me in disbelief
as ya avatar shows...ya got ya mum handling ya beef

^^ decent opener

this aint an 'Enigma'...you aint no 'man of mystery'
your punches go no 'powers'...they jus dont do shit to me

^^ pretty good there

like ya mum in ya avatar...but i believe thats already been told (line 2)
its played...jus like ya wholse verse...like you sed 'its over'
i've beat ya...like roc did nas
....so jus call me J Hova

^^ pretty decent closer


Vote: Enygma...more solid verse...punches..metas


good battle

1

Kingz 05-22-04 06:13 AM

Kingz - 3
Enygma - 3

Quick beats 05-22-04 06:16 AM

Hey Enygma,

i vote for enygma, cos he was better

ok, i' voted for you like u sed. so can u write me a verse now?

~QB~

King Solo 05-22-04 06:45 AM

Quick beats man, quit lyin tryin to get ppl banned!!

enygma don't need to get ppl to purposely vote for him, get da fuck out bitch!!!

Premanition 05-22-04 07:43 AM

^^^werd.......

kingz check ya pms n drop in our crew battle!!!!

Native 05-22-04 11:38 AM

Enygma won...

vote accordingly

Enygma 05-22-04 01:33 PM

King Solo, Mad Dogg, N Sight and Quick Beats are not in this league so their votes should not count....
Score should be....

Kingz - 1
Enygma - 3

Kingz 05-22-04 03:57 PM

Kingz - 1
Enygma - 1 (3 if natives and kyro's votes count but they werent explained)

pimp rawb 05-22-04 04:46 PM

ENYGMA

Kingz, your reign is over...you're in the eye of the storm
This champ is publicly fucked...now he can rely on his porn

Nice Intro Aiigth Personals

I'll put you over my knee and leave your ass abused
Win?.....C'mon....seems like he already plans to lose
Personals about your crew?...yeah I could send a bunch
But I could type like this and you still wouldn't get the punch

LoL That nice Wordplay

Lets face it, I’m diss regarded while you’re just plain old disregarded
He’s bout to drop some hot shit…my mistake, the kid just farted
I’m known for the jack of hearts…..I’ll take you life with my pen
And you could be the king of clubs……with a knife in your head
Or I could run up in your spot…..with two guns a blazing
And you’ll be screaming JESUS CHRIST when I bring your crew suffocation

Still Good Structure But Da Pucnehs Getting Weaker

And what the fuck did you Blueprint? There's no need to conceal it
A crew with Kingz and a Jack., no wonder they're easy to deal wit

That A Hot Personal Punch Right Der...Alough A Lil Played But Hot

Kingz battles like he fucks……..he just ain’t up to it
Cause like your crew predicts…...dawg, you just blue it

Ending Isnt As Strong As Intro

Punches=7
Flow=8
Structure=7.5
Wordplay=6.5
Personals=7

Overall=7.3


KINGZ

you say your 'gangstarr'..but ya 'skillz' got me in disbelief
as ya avatar shows...ya got ya mum handling ya beef

LMAO HOT INTRO

this aint an 'Enigma'...you aint no 'man of mystery'
your punches go no 'powers'...they jus dont do shit to me
u jus started audio...but ya 'hot shit' has never been heard
i'll disorientate you son...leaving your deadly visionz blurred
u aint earning cash money...you need a 'buc'...so go south
like Luda ya reputation came from...ya own 'word of mouf'


Keeping It Going Ok Pucnhes Not As Strong But Structure And Flo Aiight
check his propaganda...like Rakim says he's got lots of 'soul'
i'll leave ya 'mind and body' in paralysis...you've jus lost all control

Nice

this is the second time i have had to murder you..its getting old
like ya mum in ya avatar...but i believe thats already been told (line 2)
its played...jus like ya wholse verse...like you sed 'its over'
i've beat ya...like roc did nas
....so jus call me J Hova

Wak Ending

Punches=7
Flow=7.5
Structure=8
Wordplay=7
Personals=7.5

Overall=7.6



VOTE=Kingz

Native 05-22-04 05:01 PM

I dont need to explain shit...

I said who won... thats who did

Kingz 05-22-04 07:16 PM

why shoud the rules be any different for you

Native 05-22-04 10:35 PM

Because I know text battles better than you people

macKa 05-23-04 06:55 AM

King'z first two lines were fuckin isck. yeah, it's a man int he avatar, but that's really inconsequential. However, Enygma came with some nice lines, liek that line about Kings and acks, etc.
Basically, enygma came more consistent. Kingz had one or two moments, but most of it was pretty bring and lame. Enygma came with a few hot punches throughout. Enygma also came with better rhymes, more complex.

L.E 05-23-04 04:16 PM

A'ight this was a close as hell battle...both spit some of tha hottest shit I have ever seen. The cooking grill shit sorta ruined Kingz verse to me...but then I looked at it from a different point of view. Enygma...you had tite punches, but I wasn't feelin' osme of ya shit...like ya closer...Kingz...I think that you had the edge in this battle. Ya punches was just much more consistent I think...both dope no question about it...

No hate, but this one goes to Kingz.

Vote- Kingz

Key... 05-23-04 04:35 PM

This was nice battle from both of you.

Kingz:

Some played lines, Punches were hittin i have to say, they werent forced,made me laugh about the mom handlin beef thang, u stayed consistent like most of em said, Overall verse was good.

Enygma:

U started good ended bad, I was feeling yo punches, but it wasnt consistent i seen betta verses from you. Overall it was aight.

V/: K

DirtBoy69 05-23-04 04:55 PM

4-3 kingz right now is what i count

shadow 05-23-04 04:57 PM

enygma
dropped a hott verse somethings were played and some were original
good opener
weak closer
ive seen much much better from you
Lets face it, I’m diss regarded while you’re just plain old disregarded
He’s bout to drop some hot shit…my mistake, the kid just farted
i heard something like that before
its played
Or I could run up in your spot…..with two guns a blazing
And you’ll be screaming JESUS CHRIST when I bring your crew suffocation
^^ not good either
those two lines, prolly lost you the battle
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
kingz
flow was good
original punches
pretty solid structure
this is the second time i have had to murder you..its getting old
like ya mum in ya avatar...but i believe thats already been told
fair punch^
you say your 'gangstarr'..but ya 'skillz' got me in disbelief
as ya avatar shows...ya got ya mum handling ya beef
^ good punch^
check his propaganda...like Rakim says he's got lots of 'soul'
i'll leave ya 'mind and body' in paralysis...you've jus lost all control
worstline^^ no worries though it didnt hurt your verse enough
to lose this battle
vote: kingz

SPuL™ 05-23-04 06:05 PM

damn, this was a tight ass battle. Both of y'all came hard on this one. I enjoyed readin' both. Here's the breakdown:

Enygma, yea, man you had a tight verse. I liked it a lot. You came really hard wit your punches. My fav was the blueprint one. HOT shit rght there. Your flow was really good, but in a few areas I thought it got messed up a little. You had a awesome closer too. Very hot verse. Good rop.

Kings, you had an awesome verse too. I liked this one too. You came really hard, and delivered some strong punches. The opener was hilarious, and prolly the punch of the match. I also liked your flow a lot, but it too went off in a few spots. It was a great verse wit a nice opener and closer.

Overall, it's a hot battle, but my vote goes to...

Kingz. good job, man

DirtBoy69 05-23-04 08:43 PM

6-3 kingz wins


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