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kryogenix vs. j-poll
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This fag gets no love from me! I constantly boot gays
Folks thought I was Jordan,The way I promptly Shoot J's! Engyma beat him before,and now he's about to get beat again Cause if J-Poll has a Shoe In for the win...Im Ampitating Limbs You are just a wack newbie...so damnit.....you play the roll This kid claims he's manly,but ONLY GAYS want to see J's Poll! JPoll is weak as fuck!..HEY!..Im just keeping shit real though Cause although he's Nice with a Mic..he's even better with a dildo! Im hell sent..let JPoll act tough...I will leave this dude bent Cause like Clumsy Architects....I destroy BluePrints!!! Im posting this now because I have finals and will not have alot of time to do it later. And if you dont understand all of my punches...then dont vote!! |
seriously i've checked out some battles...and whats with all the gay jokes??? dildo joke...wtf...played...same wit all your shit...so here's a lesson... hahah this is funny Quote:
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alright but here it goes... yo yo check this shiz Cryogenics...ahhh the art of making things cold... so retarded...for best rapper...lil jon he polled.. Yur just like Ja rule..you hold no wait with wack text... Before U talk to Jpoll...remember who's the Old RB reject... Got laughed outta the LLL...and it's soon to occure again... leave battles...head back to the lounge and make another wack top ten... Cause having you on the list is like having Gunit101 in first... The only chance you have is if the mods have our text reversed... Only spit gay jokes...seriously Kryo is it still 95'... You're the worst thing to happen to battling since 'White Out' arrived... Where's your 'mom' and 'fat' jokes...i know you think that's street... Brag about your 17 wins...but won't show all your defeits... Now that ur merked...please listen again stunned... Yur the trick clowned off every rap site...especially this one!... |
JPoll - Good battle man, hott flow.. hard hitten punches, and your personals were on FIRE.
Best Line - Now that ur merked...please listen again stunned... Yur the trick clowned off every rap site...especially this one!... Worst Line - Only spit gay jokes...seriously Kryo is it still 95' Kyro - Good spit man, you had a good flow.. and your punches were hitten hard. Best Line - JPoll is weak as fuck!..HEY!..Im just keeping shit real though Cause although he's Nice with a Mic..he's even better with a dildo! Worst Line - Im hell sent..let JPoll act tough...I will leave this dude bent Cause like Clumsy Architects....I destroy BluePrints!!! OVERALL - Good battle boys, but I gotta give it to the guy wit harder personals and that is... JPoll.. he came wit some niice personals and some tight punches, and his flow was hott. Kyro.. your flow was good to, and your punches were pretty tight.. but you didnt have good personals. Work on some hott personals and then you can beat this dude. VOTE - JPoll RETURN THE FAV http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124689 |
my vote
okay here is a bar for bar breakdown....
This fag gets no love from me! I constantly boot gays Folks thought I was Jordan,The way I promptly Shoot J's! Good punch and meta...nice wordplay...good opener...8/10 Engyma beat him before,and now he's about to get beat again Cause if J-Poll has a Shoe In for the win...Im Ampitating Limbs Good meta...good punch...1st line coulda been better....7/10 You are just a wack newbie...so damnit.....you play the roll This kid claims he's manly,but ONLY GAYS want to see J's Poll! Haha...good punch...waitin for an insane one...8/10 JPoll is weak as fuck!..HEY!..Im just keeping shit real though Cause although he's Nice with a Mic..he's even better with a dildo! Weak...6/10 Im hell sent..let JPoll act tough...I will leave this dude bent Cause like Clumsy Architects....I destroy BluePrints!!! Nice personal and punch....good closer....8/10 Verse Score - 37/50 = 74% Well your verse was decent....i mean you had punches but nothing that had me laughing or sayin DAMN!....fourth bar fucked up your sustainment....decent verse....nice flow....good meta's...only a couple personals....expected a better verse.... Cryogenics...ahhh the art of making things cold... so retarded...for best rapper...lil jon he polled.. hahaha....good punch....semmed wack at first....but the punch landed hard....8/10 Yur just like Ja rule..you hold no wait with wack text... Before U talk to Jpoll...remember who's the Old RB reject... Damn...another hard hitter....9/10 Got laughed outta the LLL...and it's soon to occure again... leave battles...head back to the lounge and make another wack top ten... Nice personal and punch...comin really hard at him....8/10 Cause having you on the list is like having Gunit101 in first... The only chance you have is if the mods have our text reversed... Nice punch...8/10 Only spit gay jokes...seriously Kryo is it still 95'... You're the worst thing to happen to battling since 'White Out' arrived... Good meta...okay punch....7/10 Where's your 'mom' and 'fat' jokes...i know you think that's street... Brag about your 17 wins...but won't show all your defeits... lol nice punch and personal...8/10 Now that ur merked...please listen again stunned... Yur the trick clowned off every rap site...especially this one!... Nice punch and closer...decent...7/10 Verse Score - 55/70 = 79% Well you topped his verse...you had better punches...they were more direct...u had more and better personals....flow was nice.....wordplay was good...but ur punches won u this battle.....good verse... Vote - JPoll |
ok honest vote
j-poll- nice drop good flow punches and personals good structure Yur just like Ja rule..you hold no wait with wack text... Before U talk to Jpoll...remember who's the Old RB reject... ^^^ good punch but needs work^^^ Now that ur merked...please listen again stunned... Yur the trick clowned off every rap site...especially this one!... ^^^ god personal and punch overall*8* ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ kyro kinda wack and weak bad flow weak punches not great personals This fag gets no love from me! I constantly boot gays Folks thought I was Jordan,The way I promptly Shoot J's! ^^here u go carrying on with the gay lines^^ not helping you at all^^ VERY WACK!! terrible flow just overall weak *5* -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- my vote- j-poll |
stop free posting next time i gotta delete it someone's being dq'd.
breakdown for kryogenix: flow:worked well here i saw no off spots 7/10 volcab:not much to say nothing special but it was working 6/10 punches:some good personals mainly played topics but they seemed to raise beef and bother j-poll so good job best line,"This kid claims he's manly,but ONLY GAYS want to see J's Poll!" 8/10 overall:21/30 best part of your verse was the punches breakdown for j-poll: flow:worked but nothing too compelx 6/10 volcab:good job here pretty much on par with your oppenent 6/10 punches:not too many lines here hittin on a personal level your usually array of he's wack i'm good best line,"Only spit gay jokes...seriously Kryo is it still 95'..." try harder here 6/10 overall:18/30 good verse but really i don't see it being better then kryogenix vote--kryogenix |
Jpoll Was sikk his battle was very good his flow was nice i liked the way u did this battle
Kyro Genetix did good but ur structure wasmessed up so u need to work on that Break DOwn Kyro Genetix Flow 7/10 Rhymes 7/10 Structure 5/10 punches 8/10 27/40 Jpoll Flow 8/10 Rhymes 9/10 Structure 8/10 Punches 9/10 34/40 |
wtf^
Im tired of these votes from people thats not in the league the score is JPoll-2 Me-1 if just anyone can come and vote then these should just be regular frontline battles right? |
this battle was ok i guess. punches were gernally weak and hte flow was pretty boring. ill breka it down.
Kryo This fag gets no love from me! I constantly boot gays Folks thought I was Jordan,The way I promptly Shoot J's! meh, u know, its ok. it's a punch at least. not saying anything that great though. flow was good, rhyme scheme average. 6.5/10 Engyma beat him before,and now he's about to get beat again Cause if J-Poll has a Shoe In for the win...Im Ampitating Limbs Didn't really rhyme here. Just saying someone lost before without any other sort of punc is pretty weak. Nothing special. flow ok, but it didn't really rhyme. 5.5/10 You are just a wack newbie...so damnit.....you play the roll This kid claims he's manly,but ONLY GAYS want to see J's Poll! first line was stupid, but the second one was OK. would have been really wack, since it was just a gay punch, but u used his name which made it ok. flow was ok again, not great. rhyme scheme was once again average. 6.5/10 JPoll is weak as fuck!..HEY!..Im just keeping shit real though Cause although he's Nice with a Mic..he's even better with a dildo! not bad ere actually. Using his subnic. You could have used it better though i think. not too bad though. flow ok, rhyme scheme ok. 7.5/10 Im hell sent..let JPoll act tough...I will leave this dude bent Cause like Clumsy Architects....I destroy BluePrints!!! This didn't really rhyme very well again. But the last line had some nice wordplay, good punch. flow was a bit off and the rhyme scheme wasn't good. 7.5/10 J-Poll Cryogenics...ahhh the art of making things cold... so retarded...for best rapper...lil jon he polled.. sounded very contrived. wans't smooth at all. not a good opener i dont think. didn't do anything for me at all. flow was pretty off and rhyme scheme was weak. 4.5/10 Yur just like Ja rule..you hold no wait with wack text... Before U talk to Jpoll...remember who's the Old RB reject... OK I guess. not bad. flow was ok, rhyme scheme was off again. 5/10 Got laughed outta the LLL...and it's soon to occure again... leave battles...head back to the lounge and make another wack top ten... not bad. at least its a personal. other than that, nothing special. flow was off and rhyme scheme was weak. 5/10 Cause having you on the list is like having Gunit101 in first... The only chance you have is if the mods have our text reversed... nothing special once again. yeah, it's a punch, but not the greatest. flow was ok, rhyme scheme ok, pretty weak though. 5.5/10 Only spit gay jokes...seriously Kryo is it still 95'... You're the worst thing to happen to battling since 'White Out' arrived... getting better here. nice personal stuff. punch was ok, could have made it better. i dunno, more complex or something. floww as a bit off, rhyme scheme was ok. 6.5/10 Where's your 'mom' and 'fat' jokes...i know you think that's street... Brag about your 17 wins...but won't show all your defeits... not bad. once again, nothing really special. need some mroe complexity though. flow was ok, rhyme scheme was ok. 7/10 Now that ur merked...please listen again stunned... Yur the trick clowned off every rap site...especially this one!... not bad. pretty weak for a finisher though. flow was good, rhyme scheme was good. 7.5/10 Kryo Line by Line - 67 Complexity - 10 Vocab - 8 Total - 85 J-Poll Line By Line - 59 Complexity - 12 Vocab - 11 Total - 82 Therefore, Kryogenix just got this. |
no actually it's 4 to 2...but good try... uppin
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that was a good battle, kryo you had good punches, but i think j-poll hit harder.
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Cryogenics...ahhh the art of making things cold... so retarded...for best rapper...lil jon he polled.. OK..TAILED OFF off 7/10 Yur just like Ja rule..you hold no wait with wack text... Before U talk to Jpoll...remember who's the Old RB reject... NICE PERSONAL...8/10 Got laughed outta the LLL...and it's soon to occure again... leave battles...head back to the lounge and make another wack top ten... AGAIN HIT PERSONALLY...7/10 Cause having you on the list is like having Gunit101 in first... The only chance you have is if the mods have our text reversed... PERSONAL...CUD B HARDER...7/10 Only spit gay jokes...seriously Kryo is it still 95'... You're the worst thing to happen to battling since 'White Out' arrived... GUD PUNCH 7/10 Where's your 'mom' and 'fat' jokes...i know you think that's street... Brag about your 17 wins...but won't show all your defeits... OK....6/10 Now that ur merked...please listen again stunned... Yur the trick clowned off every rap site...especially this one!... DECENT PERSON AND PUNCH...7/10 JPOLL-49/70-lots of personals cuda bin a bit harder...nice spit ___This fag gets no love from me! I constantly boot gays Folks thought I was Jordan,The way I promptly Shoot J's! NICE..PUNCH..8/10 Engyma beat him before,and now he's about to get beat again Cause if J-Poll has a Shoe In for the win...Im Ampitating Limbs PLAYED...6/10 You are just a wack newbie...so damnit.....you play the roll This kid claims he's manly,but ONLY GAYS want to see J's Poll! NOT FEELIN GAY JOKES...PLAYED6/10 JPoll is weak as fuck!..HEY!..Im just keeping shit real though Cause although he's Nice with a Mic..he's even better with a dildo! OK PUNCH 7/10 Im hell sent..let JPoll act tough...I will leave this dude bent Cause like Clumsy Architects....I destroy BluePrints!!! NOT HARD BUT GUD WORDPLAY 7/10 kryo-shuda cum harder,gud word play...but no personals32/50_______________ my vote goes to j poll....if kryo had hit harder hed have won...jpoll won coz he hit wit decent punches that were personal both had gud structure n flow n i did like kryo`s wordplay beta vote-jpoll |
votes from outside the league count as long as there explained 5-2 for j-poll is the count
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Kryo won this...
Other kid didnt really throw many punches No metas at all... Just not good Vote- Kryo for atleast understanding what a battle is about |
okay it's either 6 to 3
or 5 to 2 cause two votes weren't really explained hate vote by native...i didn't think you'd do something like that dude...weak man |
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if just anyone can come and vote then these battles are just considered regular frontline battles thats stupid. Let only the ones that are good enough to battle in the league vote on battles because for all we need he can be IMing for votes he can be PMing for votes. its just a thought. |
Kyrogenix: As far as flows and multi's go you were pretty good. The punches I liked were the Gay's and Jay's poll, creative, and the blueprint punchline, and the jordan punchline was pretty good as well. The blueprint punchline was a nice one to close the battle out with. Decent Flow overall, keep spitting homie.
JPoll: Whoa man.... this shit was hot duke. Im giving my vote to you because you just kept hitting him with personal punches. A punch is good in a battle but when you put personal punches in there that makes your verse so much better. You were spittin like you really knew this cat and were taking shots at him. I liked that shit. Vote: JPoll http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124731 (CLICK ON THIS LINK AND PLEASE VOTE ON MY LYRICAL LEAGUE BATLLE, GOOD LOOKIN OUT) |
Cryogenics...ahhh the art of making things cold...
so retarded...for best rapper...lil jon he polled.. this kinda sucked, first line was filler but second line was aight 4 Yur just like Ja rule..you hold no wait with wack text... Before U talk to Jpoll...remember who's the Old RB reject... aight, not great, 5 Got laughed outta the LLL...and it's soon to occure again... leave battles...head back to the lounge and make another wack top ten... aight, nice personal, 7 Cause having you on the list is like having Gunit101 in first... The only chance you have is if the mods have our text reversed... whew, i doubt many grasp how much of a diss that is, second line didnt really hit though, 6 Only spit gay jokes...seriously Kryo is it still 95'... You're the worst thing to happen to battling since 'White Out' arrived... kinda gay and feeding, 4 Where's your 'mom' and 'fat' jokes...i know you think that's street... Brag about your 17 wins...but won't show all your defeits... this was one of your better punches 6 Now that ur merked...please listen again stunned... Yur the trick clowned off every rap site...especially this one!... weak closer, lost the flow 5 This fag gets no love from me! I constantly boot gays Folks thought I was Jordan,The way I promptly Shoot J's! aight nice solid opener, 7 Engyma beat him before,and now he's about to get beat again Cause if J-Poll has a Shoe In for the win...Im Ampitating Limbs very nice punch, set up seemed a lil weak otherwise this woulda killed it 7 You are just a wack newbie...so damnit.....you play the roll This kid claims he's manly,but ONLY GAYS want to see J's Poll! ha, nice, funny shit, 6 JPoll is weak as fuck!..HEY!..Im just keeping shit real though Cause although he's Nice with a Mic..he's even better with a dildo! damn, this here was best line in the battle, look under j's name 8 Im hell sent..let JPoll act tough...I will leave this dude bent Cause like Clumsy Architects....I destroy BluePrints!!! aight closer not great rhyme, 6 kryos punches were all just a lil harder, they were more direct while j's kinda fell off, his flow was also better and the verse was just more complex vote- kryo |
JPoll-5
Kryogenix-4 lets keep getting votes from people who actually know about battling! |
not a hard battle to judge
not at all Kryo came with more hard consistent punches lol @ the dildo line funny as fuck jpoll, came sorta weak opener was wack as fuck! and closer was aight, but not better than Kryos v/Kyro, good shit man |
actuallly it's 7-5..but good try...god now i know why you were banned from the original rb
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i've counted 5-5 myself taking back people not in the league and unexplained votes
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Very weak battle.....
I expect so much better from the both of you. You both talk a big game but never show it. Kryo came half assed with played out punches and concepts.....JPoll had a few nice personals but there was no wordplay whatsoever. His verse had nothing that stood out as a good punch whatsoever.....Atleast Kryo had one or two OK punches Vote - Kryo |
this was a gud battle wiv some sick punches!! but after reading both verses 3 times imma go wiv jpoll, i just thought his punches hit harder overall, k ad some sick lines but a little bit too much of the gay jokes i thought although they were used to gud effect, both ad gud structure, flow, wordplay and personals but in the end i thought poll came wiv harder hittin punches!!!
peace n gud read! v/jpoll |
A'ight...this is the way I see it...Kyrogenix...you had way to many gay joke shit. That shit is played. Some of your shit was pretty hot tho...but too many gay punches. I was expecting more from you. JPoll...verse was musta been from hell dawg, 'cause what i read burned my eyes. You hit wit every punch, and every personal. You got this fo real dawg...
No hate. Vote- JPoll |
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kids keep saying that bullshit but I had 2 punches "This kid claims he's manly,but ONLY GAYS want to see J's Poll!" thats 1 "Cause although he's Nice with a Mic..he's even better with a dildo!" thats 2 so how is "that too many"? bullshit votes peep the sig!! |
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good battle 7-6 for j-poll right now
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^^ j-poll wins
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