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illtalic vs. deadly visionz(hype match)
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battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 4 line min. 16 line max. The Object of the match:you write your verse to hype yourself up not to make fun of your oppenent voting must be based on how well someone hypes themselves up |
Hype yourself up!! Wtf...........who made this shit??
-------Ooh Well................Mr IJL.....himself...hahaha |
I No Man This Shit Is Whack Hegave Me Match Where I Got To Diss My Self An Dwhoever Diss Themself The Best Win This Shit Is Whack
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Yup. Where is my boi Talic?
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trust me that shit is fun as hell |
Yeah i`m here DV.
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I rap Casual… but still remain Smarter than 99% of the board
Better than most… Cos the other 1% are alias`… made when I was bored See I would only have to use the minimum lines To make impacts… An kill more kids than Anti–Personnel mines Creatin` a stir every time I type… y`all fuckin` love me I love the hype… Cos when net-thugs get busy it`s time to knock `em Casually Got it down to a T… I provide more drama than Casualty rooms Leave scripts scorched… It`s like givin` work to Lara… the way I`m always fillin` Tombs. |
Aight...............
Ok kids watch me' get hype N'Comin up in this function.. Get ready Relaunch' prepare for me to show yall somthin.. DeadlyV brings quality, fake Mcs suffering from homosexuality.. In reality there is no equality, I'm better then you so respect my faculty.. Rb Relaunch I already bar coded Mcs who need a G scan.. When i type i'm faster then a broadband that’s why your crew ran.. I'm hyped up,wish that everyone could read between the lines.. You got to be dope,you could post 100 times, and still get no replies.. Everyone have u ever seen an MC that do tricks with his lips?.. I guess am so talented' when i spit i make my tongue do backflips, Wow..check and Don't neglect eclectic sources of my superb word play.. Dont ever fuck with me like Casual, and be careful about what you say.. Blah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! am hyped..........................UP. |
I rap Casual… but still remain Smarter than 99% of the board
Better than most… Cos the other 1% are alias`… made when I was bored ^^^ slick...good An kill more kids than Anti–Personnel mines Creatin` a stir every time I type… y`all fuckin` love me I love the hype… ^^ not feelin..or jus dont get it Ok kids watch me' get hype N'Comin up in this function.. Get ready Relaunch' prepare for me to show yall somthin.. DeadlyV brings quality, fake Mcs suffering from homosexuality.. In reality there is no equality, I'm better then you so respect my faculty.. ^^ daz hot rhyme there..good Everyone have u ever seen an MC that do tricks with his lips?.. I guess am so talented' when i spit i make my tongue do backflips, Wow..check and Don't neglect eclectic sources of my superb word play.. Dont ever fuck with me like Casual, and be careful about what you say.. ^^ yea..thats Hubris...lol..nice Vote: Deadly...more complex..and wrote to the topic better |
"Got it down to a T… I provide more drama than Casualty rooms
Leave scripts scorched… It`s like givin` work to Lara… the way I`m always fillin` Tombs." That shit, and the opener from casual, won this shit. That was really tight, nice job, and I liked the way he snuck a lot of wordplay and shit in there like it was a regular battle. v/ casual |
breakdown for illtalic: flow was working alright the structure took abit to get into but alright job. pretty good use of volcab for the type of verse too, some nice lines here also my fav,"I rap Casual… but still remain Smarter than 99% of the board
Better than most…" good line and great way to open the verse overall i'd give this verse 7/10 breakdown for deadly visionz:flowed well no off spots through the peice overall nice job there, volcab was a highlight from your verse really made your verse more readable,best line would be,"When i type i'm faster then a broadband that’s why your crew ran.." thought it was kinda different good job overall 7.5/10 vote-- deadly visionz takes this he just worked the match idea alot better and had his verse mechanics down too. |
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Here's My Vote....
Casual: Opening was decent. Honestly man I really didn't start feeling your verse until it got near the end of the verse. Your flows and multi's was decent but you really didn't have any hard hitting punches until the end of the battle when you said the punch about Lara Croft and Tomb Raider. I liked that shit though. My mistake... I also liked the casualty rooms punch as well. Keep spitting kid.
DeadlyVision: Your verse had multi's and flowed pretty good but where was your punches at man? You trying to hype yourself up here? What better to hype yourself wit than a PUNCHLINE!!!! Thats the reason in my opinion you lost this battle. If you even would've snuck one punch in here you could've took this battle because your multi's were better. Vote: Casual http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124731 (CLICK ON THIS LINK AND PLEASE VOTE ON MY LYRICAL LEAGUE BATTLE, GOOD LOOKING OUT) |
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And of course N-Sight didn`t get it.. he broke it down into the wrong parts. Idiot. |
Punches?? dude..........this battle is hype yourself up and not diss yourself?
Dirtyboy should dq that dudes vote...lol he thaugh it was a regular battle..hahaha |
I thought this was a good matchup but what really did it for me was Casuals opener...
I rap Casual… but still remain Smarter than 99% of the board Better than most… Cos the other 1% are alias`… made when I was bored ^^^That shit was pretty hot. The rest of the verses were ok but this is what stood out to me.... Vote - Casual |
I rap Casual… but still remain Smarter than 99% of the board
Better than most… Cos the other 1% are alias`… made when I was bored ^^^that line won this, both ad gud verses but that bar stood out as bein the best, rest of ya verses were o.k but that bar was tight.....pz v/casual |
I rap Casual… but still remain Smarter than 99% of the board
Better than most… Cos the other 1% are alias`… made when I was bored ^^^Hot shit. I think Casual had this overall...his shit was hyping himself more I think. Deadly came pretty hot too, but damn...that bar was fucking dope...no hate, but Casual got this for overall titer shit. Vote- Casual |
..............Ummm..............strange reason that most of them didnt really even read. They just post after Enygma comments and copy and paste.
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^ haha true. it wasn't even his best line.
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Agree...lol^^ but ooh well...........More dyckryders welcome.
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v/casual
cause Im his dickrider |
yea. Dirty....aint this a hype match why they votin on punches while there are none..lol
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I rap Casual… but still remain Smarter than 99% of the board
Better than most… Cos the other 1% are alias`… made when I was bored FUCKIN SICK 8/10 See I would only have to use the minimum lines To make impacts… An kill more kids than Anti–Personnel mines ight 6/10 Creatin` a stir every time I type… y`all fuckin` love me I love the hype… Cos when net-thugs get busy it`s time to knock `em Casually stretched 6/10 Got it down to a T… I provide more drama than Casualty rooms Leave scripts scorched… It`s like givin` work to Lara… the way I`m always fillin` Tombs. kinda stretch but still way effective 7/10 your structure is awesome maye we could battle some time Ok kids watch me' get hype N'Comin up in this function.. Get ready Relaunch' prepare for me to show yall somthin.. hmmmm 5/10 DeadlyV brings quality, fake Mcs suffering from homosexuality.. In reality there is no equality, I'm better then you so respect my faculty.. hmm 6/10 Rb Relaunch I already bar coded Mcs who need a G scan.. When i type i'm faster then a broadband that’s why your crew ran. hot 8/10. I'm hyped up,wish that everyone could read between the lines.. You got to be dope,you could post 100 times, and still get no replies.. hot 7.5/10 Everyone have u ever seen an MC that do tricks with his lips?.. I guess am so talented' when i spit i make my tongue do backflips, lol 7/10 Wow..check and Don't neglect eclectic sources of my superb word play.. Dont ever fuck with me like Casual, and be careful about what you say.. 7.5/10 VERY VERY CLOSE if i have to vote its goes to deadlyV he jus had a few extra lines which swayed my vote but is this was audio then im SURE causal would win cos of the flow v/ DV |
Yo DV.
Sssssh. You tried dissin` me in your verse you idiot. 5-3. Not includin` Kryo.. lol. |
Blah!!^^dude with 1000 dyckryders..lol
its 3-3 Premanition/ and Limited dont count they didnt vote the right way..............they just went wit Enygma decision. hoe. |
Aight Check Dis..
Casual: 6/10 Your Verse Was Alright, Punches Were Hitting Fairly Hard But I Didn't Like The Lack of Originality Of Your Verse. Your Flow and Metas Were Decent...Nice Drop, Stay Dophe. DeadlyVisionz: 7/10 Your Punches Were Hitting Harder Than Casuals and Your Flow Was On-Target. Metas and Mulits Were Decent and Structure Was Nice. Stay Dophe Kid... Vote - DV Stay Dope You Two...Props. ~R~ |
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ok check its a hype match not who had better punchs
casual your opener whas whitty but didnt see much of anything to hype yourself up the closer again nice shit creative some what of hypin yourself up an the rest of your verse was nice but still i didnt see how u played the consept of the battle into your verse much this was about the best played in to the concept Creatin` a stir every time I type… y`all fuckin` love me I love the hype… Cos when net-thugs get busy it`s time to knock `em Casually deadlyvisions your opener was a decent set up for the beginin of this concept your closer wasnt really much in them lines to me but the rest of your verse was pretty nice for the type of battle pretty creative in areas and nice wordplay these lines was nice Rb Relaunch I already bar coded Mcs who need a G scan.. When i type i'm faster then a broadband that’s why your crew ran.. Everyone have u ever seen an MC that do tricks with his lips?.. I guess am so talented' when i spit i make my tongue do backflips, vote deadlyvisionz |
5-5.
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I love the hype.
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Dawg, I didn't even read enygma's reply. I said what I thought...simple as that.
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I kno yo vote is already counted so relax.
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Don' worry dawg, I wasn' freakin' out or anythin'...its tied between you two right now...you both had dope verses dawg, no doubt about it. Close as hell...
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we need more votes.
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I rap Casual… but still remain Smarter than 99% of the board
Better than most… Cos the other 1% are alias`… made when I was bored See I would only have to use the minimum lines To make impacts… An kill more kids than Anti–Personnel mines Creatin` a stir every time I type… y`all fuckin` love me I love the hype… Cos when net-thugs get busy it`s time to knock `em Casually Got it down to a T… I provide more drama than Casualty rooms Leave scripts scorched… It`s like givin` work to Lara… the way I`m always fillin` Tombs. ^^ casual, that was garbage structure i guess that was your verse lmao wack man your capable of better your shit didnt even rhyme lmao ur structure was really bad and made your not ryhming verse worse keep elevatin overall *6*---- not bad- not god either ---------------------------------------------------------------- deadly vision: your shit made way more sense structure was good and good line yiou kept it flowin well but your stuill capable of better bestline:Ok kids watch me' get hype N'Comin up in this function.. Get ready Relaunch' prepare for me to show yall somthin.. DeadlyV brings quality, fake Mcs suffering from homosexuality.. In reality there is no equality, I'm better then you so respect my faculty.. that was more than 4 lines but overall it was good i liked that part after that your verse fell downhill my vote: deadly vision |
5-6 We have a winner ppl.
*Ding....Ding...Ding* |
6-5 votes continue till 9:00 tonight it's only 5:00
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lol i kno am just fuckin around.
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ok...i don't know either of you
I gotta go with Casual on this. He used every line to hype himself up and followed the theme well. Had some nice lines, opener killed it, his flow was on-point too. Deadly you forced vocab and multies waaaaaay too much, fucked your flow up. Had some nice lines too, but didn't focus the whole verse on hyping yourself up like Casual did. Cas just had more clever lines. Vote = Casual |
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