spul vs. pimp rawb
 

deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.

Signing In Yo...Waiting For Tha Other Dude To.....

yo yo....SPuL cant get on RB right now....so he told me to check in for him.....but he will be able to get on by battle time.....so checked in for SPuL.......

SPuL's verse...
 

aight here is his verse....he cant get on RB cuz its blocked.....heres his spit....

In this rap game you be considered a loser/
Gay ass mutha f**ka, be considered your luber/
You say that you ain't crooked, but you damn ain't straight/
You look at f**kin' Captain Crooker just to masturbate/
Now, what the f**k you doin'?/
Who the f**k you screwin'?/
Damn! Stop lookin' at me…Now I should be suein'/
For all you got, and no, I won't be foolin'/
You need to get some cool whip, so you can start coolin'/
When you be getting it wit a man, it's fun, f**k, and lie/
But when you be seein' my van, it's run, duck, and hide/
Cuz I'll be there to w-rap you up…It's Christmas time!/
Man, you say you got 132 wins, but they all must have been wussies/
Cuz your dumbass rhymes are as tight, as Paris Hilton's pussy/
You call yourself straight, but you're always wit a man/
You call yourself a pimp, yet a girl has you in her command/

......LETS GO!......

Thiz Lil Bicth-Spul Makin Me Twitch-N-Pull N Ditch-Till-He-Full/
Your Good! Yea A Smell Some Bull…
Dawg U Aint Ready!...Cuz I Hurt-N-Hex, Squirt-Wit-Tecks I Dont Know Whats More Pussy You Or Ya Purple-Text/
I Merk-Vets Like Mercedes Dealers Servin-Old-Headz…Iam Bring Flamez To Thiz Cold-Thread/
Ma Flow Dropping Acid-Rain And leaving U Wit A Flaccid-Brain In Massive-Pain/
Don’t Make Me Tell Your Ass-Again Ya Couldn’t Be Explosive If U Put Gas-To-A-Flame/

....MURDER!......

Ya A Lil Off Balance Like 1 Legged Tables And You Couldn’t Put Holes In Ma Verse Wit Staples/
Best Emcee In APRIL?...
Please Bicth, Even If Ya Masturbated To Da Turtles Ya Still Couldn’t Be Hot On April/(LMAO..Tha Chick In Da Turtles Called April)

......FINISHER!!!......

You'll Never Glow-In-Da-Street, Am A Blow-Ya-Meat....
Ma Flow-Is-Neat, I Sway Forth-Wit-Heat To Victory And Like Siamese Twins In A Car Crash thiz Your 4th-Defeet/DAMN!

I Forgot About Tha Time Limit So I Dropped A Quick Verse..... :shoot:

Ma Flow-Is-Neat, I Sway Forth-Wit-Heat To Victory And Like Siamese Twins In A Car Crash thiz Your 4th-Defeet/

HOLY SHIT!! Dat line jus murdered LI's whole shit! Nice verse LI, but Rawb's wordplay, punches, and personals jus rockked you mayne. Good job doe! Congrats to whoever wins!

^^Sorry I meant Spuls, not LI... LI is da one dat posted spul's verse... lOl

Yo It Wasnt LI It Was Against Spul Anywayz


1-0 Uppin For Votes

Ma Flow Dropping Acid-Rain And leaving U Wit A Flaccid-Brain In Massive-Pain/
Don’t Make Me Tell Your Ass-Again Ya Couldn’t Be Explosive If U Put Gas-To-A-Flame/

^^^^^^
Rawb had better punches & excellent wordplay. I felt Rawb's verses more! DirtyBoy brought some ill as punchlines but overall Rawb took it!


Vote:PimpRawb

Yo Spul Ya Shit Was Str8 Man, But Rawb Killed It:


Rawb's Best Lines
Dawg U Aint Ready!...Cuz I Hurt-N-Hex, Squirt-Wit-Tecks I Dont Know Whats More Pussy You Or Ya Purple-Text/

^^lol. Hit Flow, Nice Personal.

Ma Flow-Is-Neat, I Sway Forth-Wit-Heat To Victory And Like Siamese Twins In A Car Crash thiz Your 4th-Defeet

^^Sick. Just Plain Sick.

Spuls Best Lines
Cuz your dumbass rhymes are as tight, as Paris Hilton's pussy/

But when you be seein' my van, it's run, duck, and hide/
Cuz I'll be there to w-rap you up…It's Christmas time!/

Spul You Got Some Skills, But Rawbs Verse Was Stronger.

Punches: Rawb
Flow: Spul
Wordplay: Rawb
Personals: Rawb
Creativity: Rawb
Structure: Tie

VOTE: PIMP RAWB

Pimp Rawb's punches was played the fuck out
but he still did good enough to get the win
v/pimp

Pimp got this piece of piss sry spul but ur verse was weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek as i wasnt feelin it at all period nothin impressed me structure was prolly the best part of it all and that was off badly to...elevate dawg.

Pimp again another ok verse could do better ur lines are still a lil stretched and structure could do wit improvement but another comfy win.

V/Pimp Rawb


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rawb killed it but whats up with the line "Am A Blow-Ya-Meat...." that doesn't sound to healthy to me

check me out
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125942

.......It Wasnt Meant Like Dat....It Was Like Blow Away....U got A Dirty Mind Son...LoL

breakdown for spul:

flow:choppy in spots some of the lines got abit big 5/10

volcab:mah average nothing to say 5/10

punches:you addressed your oppenent everyline but it was all pretty weak the punches fav line,"Cuz your dumbass rhymes are as tight, as Paris Hilton's pussy/" aside from that nothing too great 6/10

overall:16/30 hoped to see better from you

breakdown for pimp rawb:

flow:alright 6/10

volcab:average nothing to say 5/10

punches:best line,"And Like Siamese Twins In A Car Crash thiz Your 4th-Defeet/DAMN!" everything else was pretty average 6/10


overall:17/30

vote--pimp rawb

2-0 pimp rawb wins