m section vs. macka
 

deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.

Checkin in

Word.

ooooooooohhhhhhhhh damn!!! aight, just to let u know, there was a fuckin HARD, complex punch at LEAST once every two lines, and more than half of those punches had personals. yall gotta read this through twice and carefully.

^^ Hey kid you`ve elevated a with the structure and all just liked to say i got you`re pm aight i aint gonna no show.


Soft pussy cat . . Fuck nine lives I`ll beat you down with one
Dont deserve to view my lines & where the FUCK have you came from?
Put you in plasters bitch , I’ve mastered this & fuck`d up you’re game.
Embarrass you so much , next week you`ll sign in with a different name.
Reading scriptures of dopeness kid , is something I hope ya like . .
I`ll merk you so bad in battles , you`ll take your wackness to open mic.
Don’t deny anything kid , you`ve failed – man I knew . .
Fuck . . you`re used to hoping on herbs , like Australian kangaroo’s
Busting slug`s in you`re pieces & have you squashed like a rodent.
You stank so much & people knew , they decided to make deodorant
I taught you structure but you suck , so I know you fairly well.
You might have got better . . but beating me?! – is a fairy tell . .
Reconginze , I wont let ya rise . . get good or let ya progress.
Fuck shouting & slang , I`ll murder this fake & wont settle for less.

what the fuck so much people have came in here . .
VOTES?

Soft pussy cat . . Fuck nine lives I`ll beat you down with one
Dont deserve to view my lines & where the FUCK have you came from?
weak opener, the set-up was played
Put you in plasters bitch , I’ve mastered this & fuck`d up you’re game.
Embarrass you so much , next week you`ll sign in with a different name.
lol, nice
Reading scriptures of dopeness kid , is something I hope ya like . .
I`ll merk you so bad in battles , you`ll take your wackness to open mic.
another hardhitter, good shit
Don’t deny anything kid , you`ve failed – man I knew . .
Fuck . . you`re used to hoping on herbs , like Australian kangaroo’s
wack!
Busting slug`s in you`re pieces & have you squashed like a rodent.
You stank so much & people knew , they decided to make deodorant
wack!, 2 in a row is bad
I taught you structure but you suck , so I know you fairly well.
You might have got better . . but beating me?! – is a fairy tell . .
played punch.fairy tells line was weak in this context
Reconginze , I wont let ya rise . . get good or let ya progress.
Fuck shouting & slang , I`ll murder this fake & wont settle for less.
wack closer, you get a 29/70

Your crew don’t mean shit, even a mouse rolls with a click
Cheney must be Ptolemaic, coz your world revolves around Dick
decent opener, I liked the set-up
Dissolving your spit, split you in half and leave you to die-section
Going down for attempted Murder, so you best revise Methods
ehhh..weak shit
Australian, but I’m reversing geography, because you’re beneath me
That’s why you modified your name, coz I’m over-C’s G (overseas)
this could have been reworded better, the Over-C's part was good wordplay, but it didnt make any sense
You couldn’t cum with hot shit if your intestines attached to your balls
Getting slapped till u fall, now you’re back’s at the wall
the set-up was sooo fucking played, and the punch sucked ass
You’re lines are so lame it’s like they’ve had all limbs amputated
I’m glad you hate it, your flow aint smooth, it’s granulated
the set-up line didnt make sense at all!,and the punch was blah!
Gradually graduated, smoke you to leave you like your avatar
Battling wack newbies in Front Lines shows how hard you are
nice personal
I’ll carve you up, but I won’t take the pussy way out like a C-Section
Relieve stresses, like a Chinese family of four, you need les-sons
the set-up punch was very nice, but the punch was weak
overall, vote M-Section, for actually making more sense throught his verse than Macka, not a bad match up though

The Kangroo line was only wack , because you dint know that Macka is from australia . . I felt like explaining it but explaining verses = wack.

see, i thought this would appen, i made this shit too complex for cats. that's why i like to use highlights.

^^^^^^^
Dont, the wackest thing a person can do is explain there verse trust me it`s worse than played lines . .

yeah. its just annoying when people miss what is actually a hot punch or personal like Sun U did.

borh of you
stfu
I understood all of your weak lines Macka
I knew he as from Australia
I DID read his verse first, I also seen his profile
I have common sense.
I sticking with my vote
dont bitch!

yes
I agree

^ Lol , nobodies bitching.
I was just replying.
Votes . .

i aint fuckin bitchin. i just know for a fact that u didn't understand everything. stick with your vote, i dont care.

Your crew don’t mean shit, even a mouse rolls with a click
Cheney must be Ptolemaic, coz your world revolves around Dick\

^^6 funny...clever


Dissolving your spit, split you in half and leave you to die-section
Going down for attempted Murder, so you best revise Methods


^^ slick wordplay...punch not that hard


You couldn’t cum with hot shit if your intestines attached to your balls
Getting slapped till u fall, now you’re back’s at the wall

^^ blah

Gradually graduated, smoke you to leave you like your avatar
Battling wack newbies in Front Lines shows how hard you are
I’ll carve you up, but I won’t take the pussy way out like a C-Section
Relieve stresses, like a Chinese family of four, you need les-sons


^^^^ pretty weak...not a good punch...closer is just eh


Soft pussy cat . . Fuck nine lives I`ll beat you down with one
Dont deserve to view my lines & where the FUCK have you came from?

^^ decent opener


Put you in plasters bitch , I’ve mastered this & fuck`d up you’re game.
Embarrass you so much , next week you`ll sign in with a different name.

^^ not hard...but decent

I taught you structure but you suck , so I know you fairly well.
You might have got better . . but beating me?! – is a fairy tell . .
Reconginze , I wont let ya rise . . get good or let ya progress.
Fuck shouting & slang , I`ll murder this fake & wont settle for less.
__________________

^^ decent closer


Breakdown

Rhymes Mack
Flow Tie
Punch Mack

Vote: Mack

1-1 ^ No comment on that vote.

breakdown for macka:

flow:alright nothing too complex but it worked 6/10

volcab:pretty solid use not overly basic at all 6/10

punches:some alright lines for the most part played ideas best line includes some played ideas but still,"You couldn’t cum with hot shit if your intestines attached to your balls" overall not too bad 6/10

overall:18/30

breakdown for m section:

flow:worked pretty good same problems as your oppenent nothing to make it special 6/10

volcab:i don't think it was quite at your oppenent's level here slightly less 5.5/10

punches:nothing too direct best line,"Fuck . . you`re used to hoping on herbs , like Australian kangaroo’s " kinda weak here try harder next week 5.5/10

overall:17/30

vote--macka gets my vote

Embarrass you so much , next week you`ll sign in with a different name.

man i aint votin on this m will say its a hate vote... but that line comin from the guy who changes his name weekly

Get the fuck out of here idiot , damn even the league runner is a herb.
The point of signing in with another name is making an account . . Not nick changing you fool. now shut up.

wot? is he a herb just coz he voted for me?
..............

yo im a vote macka, that shit woz hot man i woz feeling that. i ddnt really like m section coz of his punches against australia,not coz i come from australia ma self but dissing tha stereotypical aussie as a punch is quite wack unless you make it unique and that woznt. macka came down hard, nice punches and worldplay, not much to say bad bout it really.
vote = macca


hmm hmm i juz edited this post coz i realised there is no poll :huh:

Soft pussy cat . . Fuck nine lives I`ll beat you down with one
Dont deserve to view my lines & where the FUCK have you came from?
7/10 hot
Put you in plasters bitch , I’ve mastered this & fuck`d up you’re game.
Embarrass you so much , next week you`ll sign in with a different name.
haha 7/10
Reading scriptures of dopeness kid , is something I hope ya like . .
I`ll merk you so bad in battles , you`ll take your wackness to open mic.
6.5/10
Don’t deny anything kid , you`ve failed – man I knew . .
Fuck . . you`re used to hoping on herbs , like Australian kangaroo’s
8/10
Busting slug`s in you`re pieces & have you squashed like a rodent.
You stank so much & people knew , they decided to make deodorant
8.5/10 lol
I taught you structure but you suck , so I know you fairly well.
You might have got better . . but beating me?! – is a fairy tell . .
6/10
Reconginze , I wont let ya rise . . get good or let ya progress.
Fuck shouting & slang , I`ll murder this fake & wont settle for less.
7/10

nice drop



Your crew don’t mean shit, even a mouse rolls with a click
Cheney must be Ptolemaic, coz your world revolves around Dick
8/10 hot
Dissolving your spit, split you in half and leave you to die-section
Going down for attempted Murder, so you best revise Methods
hmm 6/10
Australian, but I’m reversing geography, because you’re beneath me
That’s why you modified your name, coz I’m over-C’s G (overseas)
lol 6.5/10
You couldn’t cum with hot shit if your intestines attached to your balls
Getting slapped till u fall, now you’re back’s at the wall
played 5/10
You’re lines are so lame it’s like they’ve had all limbs amputated
I’m glad you hate it, your flow aint smooth, it’s granulated
huh lol 5/10
Gradually graduated, smoke you to leave you like your avatar
Battling wack newbies in Front Lines shows how hard you are
6/10
I’ll carve you up, but I won’t take the pussy way out like a C-Section
Relieve stresses, like a Chinese family of four, you need les-sons
6.5/10

v/-m section, for a good consistant drop

hit up the championship mtach yo

yea. just for the line u said "huh" to, lame means being unable to walk or somethinhg. Like, if you say a dog is lame, it means it can't walk properly. Also, gnanulated means having grains in it, ie. not smooth. lol. respect ur vote though man.

Sorry ^ But Herb`s are voting for you & vets for me , incase you havent noticed

IS this guy even in the fucking league it`s
2-2.

vote - m-sec

Better verse

3-2 . . I win.

3-1 . .
N sight aint in this league either . .

the fuck man? get the fuck outta here. votes from people outside the league count this week. check it right here.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124719
last post on first page. and Native's vote? LMAO!!! dickriding to the extreme.
So ACTUALLY, I win, 3-2 to me. eat a dick.
And even if Native's counted, I still had 3 before u did, so I win anyway. Go and bitch.

Shut the fuck up herb buddies outside the league to help you out look at Kingz Vs Engma`s battle You got you`re herb buddies to vote here . . LMAO how am i D/r with native.

You suck i win 3-1.

http://community.rapbattles.com/new...reply&p=1298418

LOOK you fucking moron for this week people OUTSIDE the league cannot

i win 3-1
Closed.

Look. Faggot.

thats for next week faggot. check my link. In a battle THIS WEEK, Dirt Boy SPECIFICALLY said that people outside the league can vote. simple as that. I win 3-2.

it's 2-1 for m section native's vote isn't really explained at all

2-1 m-section wins