CJ vs. t-storm
 

Ima show niggaz that you really don't belong here

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no d/r, hate, or CREW votes, no d/rz to save your ass like against Frost
check in
one more stipulation: Take your sonnin' like a man, not the bitch you are.


~CJ~

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aiight checkin in


i already know i dnt belong here...
but its u that gona b cryin dog

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fuck this cat ...mus b pre-writing


this guys a freeposter...claiming im wack/
whats up bitch...u gona cry...coz i hit back?/
no wonder u dissalusioned..country boy ur inbred/
surprised u know ur mother...oh sorry shes waiting in ya bed/
call me a herb n ima get sonned?...wit ur weak verbs?..ur gona get gonned/
jus like king-kong think u on top... nigga fell off... u wrong!/
all u can do is bark...well now u got me to "bite"/
ima drop ur jaw fasta than a run in wit "iron-mike"/
this cat delayed the battle for 10 mins-guess he needs 2 pre-write/
u were neva in it...wit ur weak shit, think u gona need 2 bite

Came into my my thread, talkin' shit to me and my peers,
Now you cryin' to back down, t-storm is a storm of tears.
Like you said, you know that you don't belong in elevated,
Throw you a goin' away party, so you can be most celebrated.
Cryin' L.I. merked you, you already supposed to be banished,
After this, your Harry Hudini, niggaz gonna see you vanish.
You know, you got a big mouth for a herb, wit not spit,
This ain't a toilet bowl, so can I hear a flow wit no shit?
Lil' bitch from England, and you pretendin' you a "hood-guy"
You's a bitch, be gone, I'll be the first to say......
.................................................. ................Good-Bye.

Didn't even spit hard and you still about to be gone. Pussy. Don't run your mouth.

~CJ~

that's why I post two minutes afta you? Pre-writin' is accpetable, but I don't need to for your weak ass pussy.

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oh rite...didnt know pre-writin woz acceptable......stop swayin votes......if u wana go again sumtime n feel sum o my pre-written...u wnt win thats 4 sure
u started runnin ur mouth postin ion my threas first boy..dnt cry coz i returned the favour

Bitch, shut the fuck up and let the votes do the talkin', pussy. You stupid ass herb.

Yo im stayin the fuck outta this beef the votes goin to Country Jay coz he had decent punchlines and kept the structure basic n all. T-Storm u put in quite a basic verse seemed kinda newbie i think the beef between u two kinda got in the way wit this i have seen u do better than this (Like between me). U need the consistancy and u need to further ur vocab and structure but this occasion 1 sided.

V/Country Jay.

P.S Return the favour the links in my sig!

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shut up pre-writer...n wot the fuck is a herb?that a country thing...u shut the fuck up bitch

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ herb. 'Nuff Said.

~CJ~

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cocksukin jumped up hillbilly^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^nuff said

Uppin' 4 Votes ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

T-Storm was wack as hell.....there was no thought put into anything that he wrote, and if there was, he needs to stop writing......Countree Jay came OK but I have seen a lot better from you. It was still enough to beat the wackness from T-storm though....

Vote - CJ

i ain't even votin' but u know that u suck when ya own crew willingly votes against ya ass... T-Storm ya talk a lot of shit but can't even flow, get luck wit' ya crew (Destined 2 Rhyme)... *herb* England niggas still don't know their English... work on ya vocab- disallusion 2 l's nigga... lol

one sided battle..t-storm u should go back to front lines i dont think your good enough to be in elevated half ya verse made no sense the other half was just ass...no hott punches bad structure no flow no wordplay no multies u didnt have anything worth reading...CTJ...u had a decent verse which is understandable seeing as u were battlin someone that was weak...easy win for you...good personal good punches decent flow OK structure

vote: CTJ

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Fuck U Missfiya.......u Fukin Hoe Stop Fukin Postin Shit Bitch...ya Fuckin Wack.......started Sum Shit U Cnt Finish.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,ya Crews Fucked Fukin Wit D2r Beeeeeatch

wuteva nigga try to get some votes... ya crew's fucked cuz u in it...

battle me when u think ya ready... i'll get an accent fa ya...

Uppin' 4 votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

~CJ~

Uppin' 4 Votes ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Aiyo Check It..

T-Storm: 3/10
Your Shit Was Herbish...Don't Know What You Was Spitten or What Concepts You Were Trying To Get Across but You Failed..Miseribly. Just Elevate With Your Punches, Word Play, and Metaphors Man.

CJ: 6/10
Nice Drop, Your Punches Were Pretty Decent, Especially The One About Hudini...Haha. Nice Metas and Punches Packed Into Your Spit Man. Props.

Vote - CountreeJay

~R~

T-Storm:3/10
Not very good man..Work on evreything..Multies
was aight and more..balance..This was a worst battle
LOL work on everything

CJ-6.1/10
You Came decent..Atleast to have the
Structure which both had.You had the flow
and the metas..You Take dis vote...
v/CJ

yo showin support 4 my boi u got that fo sho
uppppppiiiiiinnnnnn

upin.............
 

get this closed sumone............................................ ..................................

Can someone just close this damn shit out, so I can do more battles?

~CJ~

ok countree jay had a better flow i think structure and metas work on personals and vocab
gurl ur verse wasnt that good work on vocab personals structure metas