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FLooZe 05-17-04 11:11 AM

dawgfatha_13 V/S pictureperfect2
 
rules are

No D/R or crew votes
Minimun 10 lines maximum 40 lines
You spit first
3-0 knockout or first to five
i forget the others so the other house rules.

FLooZe 05-17-04 10:12 PM

check in before you spit............................

M&rk 05-17-04 11:17 PM

yo i'll spit first if i know how many lines u ganna be puttin up, i only wanna do ten. but if u wanna do more i could expand sum thought. i'd prefer jus gettin our ten verses up sooner

FLooZe 05-17-04 11:51 PM

yeah ok lets make it 10-15.you up to it?holla back

M&rk 05-18-04 12:42 AM

pedophiles-child molesters (big word makin sure u know what it means)

Damn unlucky thirteen I know what u mean
I double-teamed last week your daughters
Shit no wounder why they call u the dawgfather
All these cats babblin bout gats, I murda u wit a pen
Max of 40 lines I’ll take u down wit ten
Your elementary lines are a bust, just take a look your find
Like putting pedophiles are us, up on a sign at school time
“cant touch me” shit, I don’t wanna
after fuckin weak emcees, I leave I don’t cuddle
can u read, if not look at my sig, I try not to come suddle
“FUCK YOU”

FLooZe 05-18-04 01:26 AM

k here i go
ayo....
Bitch max of 40 lines,i changed it to 15
Oh sry,i forgot,your illiterate,like Alvin Toffler cept no as mean
Read yo sign?its just a pic copied twice
If you wanna get far,listen to tha dawgfathas advice
Ill shut ya down like an infected computer system(with a virus)
You tellin me to list my enemies,but bitch.........i already shot em
Sorry for the violence here
With those words,ill have a livin in constant fear
2 more lines to merk you
But wait I dont need em,I already had enough to


there.uppin for votes

M&rk 05-18-04 02:05 AM

"im glad i called(pm'd in this case for a battle) that guy" billy madison, haha upppin

FLooZe 05-18-04 11:09 AM

wha.....

M&rk 05-18-04 03:18 PM

ups like mike

kEtCh~22 05-18-04 03:21 PM

i gotta vote picture perfect.. dawgfather needs some serious elevatin..that shit was waked..just an opinion tho..1

-O- 05-18-04 05:41 PM

yo, wasnt too impressed with this battle, Picture had more and better punchlines...Dawg, like Ketch said u need to elevate, but i cant hate, your doing your thang, the more you battle the more you'll catch on. try to work on ya structure a bit also...
Pz
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Vote= Pp2

FLooZe 05-18-04 07:04 PM

ok.congrats on those votes.uppin...

Enhance 05-18-04 07:16 PM

LMAO

perfect you said my verse was played well at LEAST IT DINT SUCK like you`re did & i thought you were an undercover vet that was RIDICIOUSLY WACK.

M&rk 05-18-04 10:46 PM

i put that up in like minutes, and knew i didn't need to come strong, so dont worry bout talkin shit to me bitch.

FLooZe 05-19-04 12:19 AM

yeah whaterver try not to freepost people i hate going through 50 billion pages.uppin for votes

M&rk 05-20-04 11:21 AM

upppin, yo drop a link, jus help get this closed out ppls.

M&rk 05-20-04 03:40 PM

hey, this should get voted on. yeah, definately get voted on

M&rk 05-22-04 10:40 PM

uppin. jus help get this shit closed, drop a link.

HELLonEARTH 05-23-04 12:59 PM

Aiight Dawgfathers line were weak and paleyed. But so were Picture perfects, but he had punches that might have landed if I wasn't fallin asleep readin em. PERSONNALS DAMMIT. PP had one but it was weak. Ok Structure nad fucked flowed on fathers part.

Dawg-5/10
Picture-6/10

Peace and PRops

FLooZe 05-23-04 03:07 PM

up.

M&rk 05-23-04 09:26 PM

up.

.::N-Sight::. 05-24-04 12:00 PM

Damn unlucky thirteen I know what u mean
I double-teamed last week your daughters
Shit no wounder why they call u the dawgfather
All these cats babblin bout gats, I murda u wit a pen
Max of 40 lines I’ll take u down wit ten

^^^ I do not like ur rhyming or structure at all

after fuckin weak emcees, I leave I don’t cuddle
can u read, if not look at my sig, I try not to come suddle

^^ Focus more on dissin ur opponent...not braggin

20/40


Bitch max of 40 lines,i changed it to 15
Oh sry,i forgot,your illiterate,like Alvin Toffler cept no as mean
Read yo sign?its just a pic copied twice
If you wanna get far,listen to tha dawgfathas advice

^^ ur flow is off...and ur punches weak...but they do hit more than Pictures

Vote: Dawg

1

FLooZe 05-24-04 01:38 PM

ok.uppin.

cityboi 05-25-04 12:01 PM

you 2 let both of ya know dis battle wuz wack but i'm gonna have 2 give it perfect cuz his punchlines were stronger

M&rk 05-25-04 11:38 PM

ya i know, but who cares jus get one more vote on this bitch ta close it out, upp

roop 05-26-04 12:59 PM

ok weak battle over all, both of u i know could've brought it harder, but o well

Flow-Same
Punches-Picture
Complexity-Same

Vote pictureperfect2

return da favor and vote at my battles

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

M&rk 05-27-04 09:23 PM

yo one more vote get that up on this.........................

Big Kountry 05-27-04 09:28 PM

picture you supprised me on this one man you came thorugh with better punches man i like that this seemed sort of one sided the only thing i condrags the other kid on id flow you did have that man thats it though

v/ picture

return the favor link in the sig man


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