Boaty vs whitey313 *vote please*
 

8 lines
You know the rest
Get it crackin

Aight, ill spit first

You caught be on a bad day kid// you aint wanting to spit, trust me//
Ill bitch slap you like yo mama did// and like 50 ill take it like a man while you beg for mercy//
you aint ready for what Im bout to do//
fuckin dick blowa, youd see a pussy but not have a clue what to do//
I could fight you to the death and youd be the first to die//
Bitch Ill smack you til you be like R Kelly "I believe I can fly!"//
One last thing, then you can blink again//
You wanna step to me, get some skill and a chance to win

ight here my spit

nigga u think u the best but u cant compete with the rest//
im a demon ill have u eating my semon<sperm>//
boaty wat name is that its fuckin wack//
ur a hip hop imposter lookin like the cookie monster//
u think u tough cause u in a crew get the fuck out u fuckin jew//
im taking u out like u a girl scout//
ill love fo this 2 last so i could still be kicking u ass//
this whitey that it i won thats all i have 2 say son

wtf? semon, jews girl scouts? what the hell kind of cartoons did you watch as a kid? Dam son...

man stfu uppin 4 votes and

Aight, i got you

All thoughts aside cause ill be your brain in this son
and Im just trying to tell you "youve got now chance in this one"
You challenge me to a battle, good call on that one B
Imma be like Barry Bonds and hit you further than I can see
4 lines and already ive destroyed you man
You dont wanna move? Fine, ill serve you where you stand
Endin this for now, im sorry to see this stop
But unlike yours, my rhymes will stay on top

easy there
I was just saying, dont gotta be all defensive and shit

This battle was on da weaker side of rippin.
Neither one of you really had good wordplay or structure or punches for that matter.
At least it wasn't a whole bunch of shoot this and stab that.
I'm going with tha person I thought had a bit more talent and that's BOATY

swing thru here and check this out
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...78&page=3&pp=15

boaty's got this, he had better wordplay and whitey doesnt know what the fuck hes talkin about

Boaty u winnin man? just come by to see how u doin against these fake ass niggaz

ayo whitey i want to battle u son cause umm u look like u got weak ass rhymes

aight
 

boaty killed it, if u got ur structure on lock and get a nice flow goin u got mad potential, other cat ur shit was weak as fuck witout even rhymin, jews, girl scouts, cookie monster, i see why ur name is whitey

Boaty got this Whitey tried usin multies but it completly f****d up his verse. None of ur verses rhymed u had a wack ass structure like i said before 8 lines aint enough anyway 10 to me is the acceptable amount. Anyway Boaty had an ok structure and hit good wit punches used ok wordplay too.

V/Boaty

this was boaty's best line "I could fight you to the death and youd be the first to die//
Bitch Ill smack you til you be like R Kelly "I believe I can fly!"//", he had better punches

Whitey best line was"im a demon ill have u eating my semon", but that was still amature. your rhymes were weak.

my vote goes to boaty

srry i 4got i dont think i can vote becuase of the crew thing, unless that just meant i cant vote for him just because were in the same crew, but i wont vote 4 now.

erm both emcees wasnt that good ( even doe im not 1 2 judge ) but imma go wid boaty jst becos i think he punches were alittle better then whitney's.

n o crew votes u retard!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I gotta say Boaty took this 1 this battle is kinda boring and wack but boaty had 1 bar that was ok to look at so i gotta give him the battle