swampsouljah707 V.S. white craca
 

rules:10-15 lines
no hate, crew or d/r votes
drop in 30 mins. after you check in
you spit first.


swampsouljah707 = soldiersnake = dqed for cheating

c'mon white craca are you gonna check in and drop yo shit or what? :huh: :huh: :huh: :huh:

fuck it ill spit first then but no feedin off my shit.

swamp vs white craca
 

I cant believe im battlin a typical white boy//
ima *SNATCH* you, *FIGHT* you in a *CLUB* and stab you like *TROY*//
you gettin amazed by my rhymes im leavin you sayin narley//
i bet they call your father hill billy with a leather jacket cuz he's rollin on a harley//
i'll confiscate your vehicle from you and drive away far//
leavin you wit your buddy, cryin sayin *DUDE WHERES MY CAR*//
im a beast and you my prey and im choppin ya meat like butchers//
dawg you just got *PUNK'D* by me like that host named *ASHTON KUTCHER*





:shoot: :shoot: :shoot: :shoot:

shit i gotta go i cant spit tonight but i wont work on the fuckin lyrics all day ill be working ight so ill spit tomorrow night

why you get offline. well you better drop your shit as soon as you read this.

nice lines, but im not feelin ur flow too much dawg

cehckin in gluck

check it.........

call that a good rap man that shit was weak/
betta add another one to my winning streak/
u use the same technique on-ur-brother like u do in here/
ur mother tries to be proud but i just ruined-ya-fuckin-career/
u ya head's in the cloud and dont care so ya life just disappeared without a trace/
bout to put this fool back into his place and erase his life/
grab'em by the throat and stab with a knife/
now ya goat ass is gone i can go fuck with ya future wife and laugh doin it/
after that we threw yo ass in the grass and hammered u for fun and made ya body split/
yo i dont need to anymore im over with this shit

yo people, ^^^uppin dis battle for votes so we can close diz thread :thumbup: oh yeah and ill return the favor fosho

sorry white cracker but yours didnt really make sense and swamp yours was dope i liked how you put all 3 brad pitt movies in th second line and i was feelin that dude wheres my car put so.....

vote=swamps707

yo thanks snake,c'mon peeps ^^uppin dis battle andill return the favors :thumbup:

ayo white man u need to step ya game up a little bit my vote goes to swampsouljah707

thanks nightrida,^^^c'mon yall uppin for votes and ill return the favor :thumbup:

aight to be fa real....neitha one of ya'll would be able to even post if it was up to me but its not so do ya thing...the thing is that swamp...um...the only good line u had was the movie thing and that wasn't even good cuz i didn't know wut the hell u was talkin bout till the otha cat explained it....

White u did have some aight lines but you also need to elevate....but its my vote and imma give this one to White

uppin the battle come on people

uppin ^^^^^........................................

White Craca at first you had this battle but the endin of your shit was wack. so swampsouljah707 gets my vote. both yall verses was shit but swampsouljah707 gets my vote b/c even though he was wack his shit was better than yours. return the fava

vote=swampsouljah707

Vote Goes To Swamp


White Craca U Were Dropping Laim Punch Lines And So Was Swamp But Swamp Made Me Laugth Cos The Kids Name Is White Cracker And He Said Typical White Boy..... Anyway It Was Pretty Shit

Swamp Took This On Punches And Flow

thanks yall, c'mon peeps we need more votes on diz aight peace. :thumbup:

White = 30/50
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 6/10
Humor 6/10

Swamp = 32/50
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 7/10
Humor 6/10

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

c'mon yall uppin ^^^^for votes so we can close dis thread aight peace :thumbup:

ok white your drop wasn't really making much sense to me your verse
was all over the place so I couldn't really think straight when I was
reading your drop but your structure & flow was aight wasn't feeling
the punches...............swamp hmmm......you did good but your structure
wasn't all that good & your flow was at best average but your punches
really hit harder than white's so my vote goes to......swampsouljah707

do a honest vote on my battle: it's in my signature

c'mon yall uppin dis shit so we can get rid of dis thread peace out :thumbup:

dis battle wuz ight nothin spectacular white had good structure but overall i feel swamp did his thing so vote goes 2 swamp

vote=swamp