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Know-Gimix 05-17-04 08:56 PM

SevenThird vs. 40CaliberHitz---Rematch
 
Iight heres the rematch you requested... 10-20 lines... Verses due by Midnight You know the rules here bro.. Good Luck..

Know-Gimix 05-17-04 09:13 PM

iight dog-- checkin in... where you at?...........

40CaliberHitz 05-17-04 09:15 PM

I'm here dawg! Check-In GoodLuck on both endz dawg!

Know-Gimix 05-17-04 09:19 PM

Yo Good luck on this battle cousin.....

heres 7 bars of nastiness......

This kid is weak as fuck- u already on my K-O-List/
As such- I spit so "dope" they call me "yayo-lips"//
Sevens destined 2 rhyme- While your intentions-to-die/
This kid is a homo- He loves cock, rectums and guys//
Mentioning-Nines- He's Constantly attemptin-to-lie/
Cuz Defeat is the only Celeb hes Ever-Met-in-his-Life//
Ima play like B.E.T and take "Hitz from the Streets"/
and put you down 6 deep- Cuz I keep "Hits Under- Me"//
You hated on this site-dog- like a pedophile in prison/
40CaliberHitz- but his punchlines and rhymes is missing//
I aint Christian-But my lines make me think christ-is-risen/
Twice-I've-Given 40CalHitz Amateur ass a rhymin-lesson//
and Im still spitting- Handing your faggot ass battle-scars/
For you Rappin-Hards rarer than "signed mantle cards"//

40CaliberHitz 05-17-04 10:35 PM

OpEneR:
40CaliberHitz Dissect SevenThird Optic Tissue To Contract Individuals And Detatch Retinal Sclerosis Compacted For Ya Visuals,
Wrapped In Plastic And Served With The Colnels Originals, Finger Lickin Good And Projectin' Tissue Liquids Faster Then Sky Digitals| -1

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Using Ya Fathers Remaining Flesh To Cover Up The Patches Were Iv'e Drained Your Chest, So I Can Stick My Fist In Your Throat To Re-Arrange Ya Neck,
Cardiopulmonary Arrest As I Break Ya Heart Askin Where I Mame Him Next... U Shouldnt Show Your Emotions As I Haven't Tied You With His Pulmonary Veins Yet| -2
|Chokin On Ya Mother's Fetus Not Another Man Alive Could Conceive This Ill EVen *Heave Ya Knees* Through *Ya Teeth* To Keep Ya *SPittin Of Caps* Proceed-in
|As Ill Attatch The Cocking Peice To Your Tail Bone Neice To The Rail Road And Unloading My Bullet (train) Right Through The Center Of Ya Dysplasia Bones| - 3
|Nail Ya Windpipe To the Road-Walk Side Ways, Stick Swords Like A Mohawk In Ya Back For Nine Days Watchin Ya Spine Fade
Confined Blades Designated For Eradicating Combined Gays Ill Serve The SevenThird On A Plate To Hell Child And Have Your ROasted Testicles As A Side Plate |-4
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ClOseR:
|Kidneys Inflated Ill Inject Ya Nervous System WIth SYphillis Till Ya Preliminarily Sedated And Work The Blood Pressure Through Your Cardiovascular System Ya Skin Tested To its Elastical Distance And Then Evenly Spread In Portions Through Your Childrens Existance| -5

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 05-17-04 10:56 PM

AIGHT GOOD BATTLE

SEVEN THIRD

BEST LINE:This kid is weak as fuck- u already on my K-O-List/
As such- I spit so "dope" they call me "yayo-lips"//
Sevens destined 2 rhyme- While your intentions-to-die/
This kid is a homo- He loves cock, rectums and guys//
Mentioning-Nines- He's Constantly attemptin-to-lie/
Cuz Defeat is the only Celeb hes Ever-Met-in-his-Life// NICE PUNCHES AND MULTI'S

WORST LINE:I aint Christian-But my lines make me think christ-is-risen/
Twice-I've-Given 40CalHitz Amateur ass a rhymin-lesson//
and Im still spitting- Handing your faggot ass battle-scars/
For you Rappin-Hards rarer than "signed mantle cards"// THE CLOSA SUCKED HOMIE// NICE OPNER BUT DA CLOSA SUCKED// WORK ON DAT// ITS ALL BOUT OPNERS AND CLOSAS


40

BEST LINE:40CaliberHitz Dissect SevenThird Optic Tissue To Contract Individuals And Detatch Retinal Sclerosis Compacted For Ya Visuals,
Wrapped In Plastic And Served With The Colnels Originals, Finger Lickin Good And Projectin' Tissue Liquids Faster Then Sky Digitals| -1 NICE PUNCHES

WORST LINE:|Nail Ya Windpipe To the Road-Walk Side Ways, Stick Swords Like A Mohawk In Ya Back For Nine Days Watchin Ya Spine Fade


40 HAD GOOD PUNCHES AND NICE FLOWZ// LIKED HIS OPNER AND CLOSA

SEVEN THIRD U DID GOOD ON DA 1ST BATTLE I LIKED YO PUNCHES NICE HOMIE// BUT DIDNT HIT HARD MAN// U DONT HAVE TO WORK ON NOTHIN JUST HIT HARD NEXT TIME//

VOTE= 40

Know-Gimix 05-18-04 01:58 AM

Still Uppin for Votes.... We will return the favor for sure.

DaCROZofHB 05-18-04 02:12 AM

i felt seven third his punches are more piemp...40 u can save ur shit for college hip hop anonymous

i couldnt feel ur flow 40 cuz i had to stop and say wut the fuck is he saying

i vote for seven his opener was really sick also

Know-Gimix 05-18-04 12:16 PM

Still Uppin for votes.... We will return the favor....

40CaliberHitz 05-18-04 12:23 PM

Uppin For Votes Niggaz Dick Lickerz Hard On This Site!...lol

*Tay.G*SinCity* 05-18-04 12:31 PM

HHHOOOOOTTT BATTLE!! My vote goes to 40 doe... He was more complex, and his verse was jus had sickk, and i mean sickk punches...

|Chokin On Ya Mother's Fetus Not Another Man Alive Could Conceive This Ill EVen *Heave Ya Knees* Through *Ya Teeth* To Keep Ya *SPittin Of Caps* Proceed-in

Dayum!

SevenThird yo shit was tight dawg. Hella tight. It was real close, and since I can't choose tie Ima have to say 40cal edged it out. Congrats to whoever wins doe.

NastyEm 05-18-04 12:33 PM

ummm real good battle.....'



seven third was good but i think hits came a little stronger... his punches were crazy


so there fore

vote: 40

boaty 05-18-04 12:36 PM

40 cal had a good verse mainly cause of his hits and I just wasnt feelin seven third as much. This one goes to 40

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

LusciousLeftfoot 05-18-04 02:26 PM

dayum....after re-readin' his battle again it wuz close cuz 7/3rd came basic but nice while 40 came complex....stretched his lines llike a muthafucka but still wuz ill....

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

kEtCh~22 05-18-04 02:34 PM

40 was straight off the hook....

40CaliberHitz Dissect SevenThird Optic Tissue To Contract Individuals And Detatch Retinal Sclerosis Compacted For Ya Visuals,
Wrapped In Plastic And Served With The Colnels Originals, Finger Lickin Good And Projectin' Tissue Liquids Faster Then Sky Digitals|

&

Chokin On Ya Mother's Fetus Not Another Man Alive Could Conceive This Ill EVen *Heave Ya Knees* Through *Ya Teeth* To Keep Ya *SPittin Of Caps* Proceed-in

..dat dude ain't no newb...1

Know-Gimix 05-18-04 09:41 PM

Yo why is it that you and ToXiCVerbz Got the same IP address in a few posts in this thread, and you got TWO different IP addresses showin up in this thread 40????-- WTF?

40CaliberHitz 05-18-04 10:50 PM

Yo why is it that you and ToXiCVerbz Got the same IP address in a few posts in this thread, and you got TWO different IP addresses showin up in this thread 40????-- WTF?

Nigga Don't come wit that bullshit niggaz cuz I blast your azz! Nigga u lost the battle & live wit it. You beat me once by a fluke nigga & I want whining like a bitch. Just accpet the lost & move on dawg! I don't even know that nigga u talkin about...WTF excuse's ...excuse's is what we use sometimes to make our self look good...I won now move the fuck on dawg!

Know-Gimix 05-19-04 01:23 AM

It takes 5 votes to win bro... your verse here is -- nevermind, Your IP changed 3 times so far in this thread alone, and it matched one of the voters- I'm just askin a question, you the one gettin all upset like you got somethin to hide.

40CaliberHitz 05-19-04 04:59 PM

Uppin this battle up for more votes....................

KISI 05-19-04 06:42 PM

first of 40caliberhitz, you are set for the underground scene lyrically, if you arent' already, you should be making tracks. but maybe you don't have a voice, who knows, but as long as you got flow and that excellent use of vocab, i'd like to here something from you.

40-has vomit flow, which is why he doesn't put ------these>// after lines, and i'm thinking maybe i should do the same because people don't seem to get my flow for some reason. anyway, excellent wordplay, very descriptive kill verse, greatly structured and flowed verse...

that lacked personals.
i treat everything as if it were a real battle(because i battle publicly) and if i were to see this i would've felt 40's verse on a lyrical level, but known that the disses were more exact and personal on SevenThirds stuff, so that's who i'll give it to.

SevenThird had good structure flow and metas, and PERSONALs, so i will go with seven third on this one.

but again i wanna hear something from 40 though.

Beyond Logic 05-19-04 07:05 PM

daaamn 40

40 ripped this in multis wordplay n punches

seventhird came hot but damn 40 tore it completely through

fav line from each:

73rd:
This kid is weak as fuck- u already on my K-O-List/
As such- I spit so "dope" they call me "yayo-lips"//


40:
Confined Blades Designated For Eradicating Combined Gays Ill Serve The SevenThird On A Plate To Hell Child And Have Your ROasted Testicles As A Side Plate |-4

DaCROZofHB 05-19-04 08:38 PM

40-i couldnt understand ur shit half the time, im pretty sure it wa good but didnt flow with that as smoothly

seven-i loved ur punchlines and structure, ur opener was also da shit i think, i givin you this vote cuz i flowed wit ur shit better it was a tight fuckin battle but i givin it up to seven third



return da fav like u said

M&rk 05-19-04 09:41 PM

40 i think came a lil harder wit this, i felt his wordplay was more complex and made his puches see more elevated, good battle ya'll got some odd structure and topics but pretty nice,
vote-40

maz 05-21-04 11:45 AM

ok seven won dis in my opinion because he had more of a flow and i understodd it yet the other guy wasnt too bad, but really it was easy to vote

pimp rawb 05-21-04 12:35 PM

BEST LINE:-

40CaliberHitz Dissect SevenThird Optic Tissue To Contract Individuals And Detatch Retinal Sclerosis Compacted For Ya Visuals,


Punches=40 Cal
Personals=7/3
Flow-7/3
Complex=40Cal
Best Lines=40Cal

Vote=40Cal

Very Nice Battle 40 cal Came With More Intelligent Pucnhes Where As7/3 Was More Witty
40 cal Was More Clever That Qhy he Takes It


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