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DeaDly RhymeZ 01 05-17-04 10:39 PM

Mixxed MC 24 vs Lyrical Demon 04
 
Battle Rules

No Crew Votes
No Hate Votes
No Dick Rideing
No Unexplained Votes

5 Bars Min
10 Bars Max
You Spit First

Verse Due by 20th of May



Lyrical Demon = Big Man = Unknown Assassin = DQed.

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 05-17-04 10:40 PM

Yo Dis Nigga Been Callin U Out Man// Merk Dis Fool

Lyrical Demon 04 05-17-04 10:44 PM

me get murked quit playin

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 05-17-04 10:49 PM

Naw U Think Iam Laughin Man

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 05-17-04 10:52 PM

yo Toxic how tha fuck does ur thing say offline when ur online i dont get it

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 05-17-04 10:58 PM

Well can u atleast Check in tonight nigga shit homie No Pre-writtin shit

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 05-17-04 10:59 PM

Is Dat Important Right Now//

Its On Invesible Mode I Am Online But Really Its Just An Illusion Sayin Iam Offline

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 05-17-04 11:01 PM

Naw But this nigga aint spittin i chouldint whent to Saturn then came back shit

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 05-17-04 11:04 PM

This nigga talking about Gettin murked when he lost 3 times and he bout to lose against Da Magician ma bro yup

Lyrical Demon 04 05-17-04 11:09 PM

Me im like a thesaurus, cos I can match all ya verse
With meaning you couldn’t equal even if ya rehearsed
At 14 seem bit young to be playing can you up the pace
Ya droppin lines like paraplegics in an able bodied race
he thinks hes black...but know one cares what he thinks
Plus my PUNCHES be Serving you like UnLimited Drinks
let me teach this dude a quick lesson, a merkin in session without hesitation
lets face it kiddo, look in my direction i wont deny ya if ya lookin for elevation
Take a hint, find another hobby, stop dropping that crap...
G, ya couldn't make crowds pop if they were wearin bubble wrap.

Lyrical Demon 04 05-17-04 11:10 PM

ur turn :thumbup:

gl
ou
oc
dk

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 05-17-04 11:14 PM

What Da Fuck Who Is U Talkin About Me Or Lyrical Demon

Da MaGiCiAn 7 05-17-04 11:31 PM

PPPPPPPostin sorry i need mo posts holla (: ~1~

Lyrical Demon 04 05-17-04 11:32 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mixxed MC 24
This nigga talking about Gettin murked when he lost 3 times and he bout to lose against Da Magician ma bro yup



check dat again man

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 05-17-04 11:34 PM

YO MIXXED COULDNT SPIT CUZ HE UPPED DIS BATTLE TOO MANY TIMES

SO HERES MIXXED VERSE

..:|:.. Yo who dis kid wantin to battle the legend dont fuck wit me ..:|:..
..:|:.. IM To hott nigga u da defition of Whack Emcee..:|:..

..:|:.. Flows hott u should Re-Think about spittin that whack Verse ..:|:..
..:|:.. U a GAy bitch think of SPiky u worst,ill catch ya witta Purse,so i concider u The First, Gay Nurse, n if ya rhymes was Explosives they still whouldint Burst ..:|:..

..:|:.. Well nigga u was fuckin Destined to GEt murked ..:|:..
..:|:.. IF you Spit on Open mic Strobe Whould delete it and state it the worst, n it whould neva pop up if u put it in Search ..:|:..

..:|:.. Ur a Blind Ass ho who cant battle good ..:|:..
..:|:.. Im str8 outta jersey if u was from Newark u still whouldint be hood ..:|:.. ( Newark the worst place in Jersey )

..:|:.. YO ill shift the stick to hot flamin Spit cause im 2 sikk and 2 rhymes u definetly not fit ..:|:..
..:|:.. Im of the top so u allready know im sikk,Ur the Worst Emcee n ur the top at being a BITCH ..:|:..

..:|:.. Imma beat this cat lyrical demon ..:|:..
..:|:..Ur Rhymes are Comfurtibule u belong at Seamons..:|:.. (( seamons Furniture Store git it ))

..:|:.. Rhymes to hott im complitmenting MYself ya heard what i said ..:|:..
..:|:.. If u busted 15 clipz in me i whould say fuck 50 i got shot wit 15 and still aint Dead..:|:..

..:|:..Ur rhymes is gay so go down wit da old Range Rova ..:|:..
..:|:.. when i diss ya like this u kno its Game OVa ..:|:..
__________________
~~~Born Again~~~
"No FUCKIN wit mE"


UNTOUCHBLE


Lyrical Legends

Wins
Spiky2k8 [5-0]
Vinman [5-0]
Da infamous [5-0]
FallingAngel2k4 [5-0]

Losses
Discharge 5-1

ReKoRd 4-1

Triple_N 05-18-04 01:03 AM

Battle could have been better

Lyrical.........weak verse man real newbish, your punches were undeveloped setup completely wrong an your punches were weak, you had no personals at all, your vocab was really basic, you lacked any real multies, your flow was a lil off, structure was best part of verse an even that was just ok, you really need to elevate.

Mixxed.........Your was a little more of an experienced verse but could still have been better, you had alot of multie use which was good but doesn't replace real hard punches, you had a few punches that connnected, an like one personal which was weak but it connected, vocab use was pretty good, an decent wordplay, your lines were really strecthed though, gotta tighten up your structure, flow coulda been better, but you had the better verse so you won.
Vote: Mixxed MC

Lyrical Demon 04 05-18-04 08:10 AM

yo missed why you lie you told me 10 BARS MAN i had so much moew i could have wrote down but i stuck 2 da rules

.::N-Sight::. 05-18-04 11:51 AM

This was a decent battle...there were some standout lines. I would have liked to have seen a more evenly matched structure. BUt, it was okay the way it was.

Here's the breakdown


Opener: Lyrical
Flow: Lyrical
Rhymes: Tie
Disses: Lyrical
Punches: Mixxed
Structure: None
Vocab: Mixxed
Wordplay: Mixxed
Metas: Mixxed
Closer: None...Lyricals was gay...Mixx was weak

Overall: Vote/Mixxed...but barely

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 05-18-04 11:57 AM

its 8 bars dumb ass i didint say LINES i have 8BArS

Black Haze 05-18-04 03:29 PM

Dat was a good battle

*Breakdown*

-Lyrical Demon-

Flow- 5/10
Structure- 7/10
Punches- 6/10
Rhymes- 6/10
Total- 24/40
u started off iight but den u fell off i dont have nuttin to really say...

ya best line
Take a hint, find another hobby, stop dropping that crap...
G, ya couldn't make crowds pop if they were wearin bubble wrap...

-Mixxed MC 24-

Flow- 7/10
Structure- 7/10
Punches- 8/10
Rhymes- 9/10
Total- 31/40
Good rhymes, and punches u did good keep spittin...

ya best line
..:|:.. Ur a Blind Ass ho who cant battle good ..:|:..
..:|:.. Im str8 outta jersey if u was from Newark u still whouldint be hood ..:|:.. (Newark's the worst place in Jersey )

Lyrical Demon 04 05-18-04 06:07 PM

uppin 4 votes

Unknown Assassin 05-18-04 06:26 PM

i felt this battle was too damm short but from what ive seen i thin demon won this shit his little flow was good u cheated mixxed u said 8 bars your ass spit 8 million but it was good though but i think demon won i liked his flow

Big Man 05-18-04 06:35 PM

mixxed you cheated when you said 8 bars but hos flow was still better than yours i liked the elevate line really much i also like the wordplay in dis battle also i think that demon had no multies so he loss points for that

Da Solution 05-18-04 08:57 PM

dis battle was garbage ive seen both of you have better battles than this
mixxed u better than dat and demon also but i guess i have to choose one of you so its gonna be the demon only becaues your punches were good not great but good
mixxed you should have beaten him but u took him lightly and her beat you

vinman 05-18-04 09:12 PM

hey mixxed u beta watch out cuse he a d/r he uses another name to vote for himself he already did it aginst me and xtoxicverbs his nmae is unknown assassin he uses it to vote for himsel he did it aginst me and xtoxicverbs im trying to get his ass banned

vinman 05-18-04 09:13 PM

and i think big man cuse he votes on every single battle of lyrical demons

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 05-18-04 09:56 PM

Yo i TOld Strobe that niggas BULLSHITTIN


Got um thas how u won against Da MagicIan 7

Da MaGiCiAn 7 05-18-04 11:04 PM

if anybody lost against lyrical demon den jus tell strobe because dat nigga got 4 user names and he votes for hisself...erybody tell strobe so dat nigga gets banned...i was wonderin y i lost...

Lyrical Demon 04 05-19-04 12:15 AM

thats not me


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