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"elite League (my Crhymies)"
(i know the song seems off due to the structure, but trust me.......when its read properly, it all flows. enjoy this keystyle r.b.)
"ELITE LEAGUE (MY CRHYMIES)" (this is a song for my crhyme sindicate comrads. this is from me to you. my soldiers, my peers, my loved ones........my crhymies.) (hook x2) i got you...and you got me// we got us...and us got we// all we got is team......(say what!!! say what!!! say what!!!)// alls we need is team......this elite league// (supervillain) LOCK cant be decoded, opened, picked, snipped or broken// close in and get blown in......never coast in the zone this dudes known for patrolin'// since obviously BABYLON played a big part in the slaying of Jesus Christ// from the ages of eden to the latest with heethins, he's been deceasin' your breathin' rites// i the prodigy, feel honestly that i should be obviously honoring our rotten THIEF BLACK// for comradery, for armed robberies...you should see him steal votes and then sneak back// WILL A PEER, cherished first lady of the SINDICATE.....our honored princess// you sit with dignity and innocence until the time to conquer...then you slaughter princes// ANXIETY has already proven improvement................// he went from a confused loud mouth muthafucka, to slick...and knows what he's doooin'// MADD HATTER, my little crhymie, just know your heart makes up for your battle rec.// just handle your challenges, travel treks and i bet you'll rattle vets...just handle steps// ECKO gets his name for a reason, believe this...its like once he gives you a beatin'// your recievin' a second and third this evenin' like it was in sequence// MENTALZ is psychological, with psycho logical linguistics shipped to youths// its like he's a nauseaus polygraph machine, haukin' some sick spits of truth// CHALK CLOROX is my right hand mad man, jumpin' out of trashcans with back packs// packed with black mac straps and cappin' any captains that need clappin' for yappin'......mista perform actions and leave 'em has beens// MR. ENYGMA, my underboss........the young prince of the throne// "behold your options foes!"....you pick...get bit by the lions lips, or just get clipped by the chrome// (hook x2) i got you...and you got me// we got us...and us got we// all we got is team......(say what!!! say what!!! say what!!!)// alls we need is team......this elite league// SUPERVILLAIN of the CRHYME SINDICATE!!! |
yo that was some....ill.......ill........ill.........ill...... .....ill...........SHIT!
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uppin' for some honest feedback please.
supervillain........c.s. |
yeah uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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since obviously BABYLON played a big part in the slaying of Jesus Christ//
from the ages of eden to the latest with heethins, he's been deceasin' your breathin' rites// that line was dope nice spit, flow was perfect |
awesome madd sick shyt ya got there long but worth every fukin second madd props keep writing.................
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thanks fellas. much love.
this verse is hella slept on.........so im uppin' it again. s.v...............c.s. |
this verse is hella slept on.........so im uppin' it again.
s.v...............c.s. |
Damn that verse is hott as a mutha fucka more peeps should be able to key like this...props to ya STOP SLEEPIN ON THIS CHECK IT
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thanks my man. it means alot brotha. stay up cutty. one love.
UUUPPPPPPIIINNN'''!!! s.v...............c.s. |
uppin' for some honest feedback please.
supervillain........c.s. |
thats sum tuff shit haha
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You think that was a good freestyle I am challegeing you to battle I show you who runs the ropes now that I am here. I am the present and future. I will destory. Dont pussy out like Ja did. You start and I will finish it.
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^^^^^^first off you called out somebody by sayin' dont pussy out like ja did.........
LMFAO............ mabe you should try a newb..........after that I'll battle you............ |
yeah overall that was the ill shit
hottest line: since obviously BABYLON played a big part in the slaying of Jesus Christ// from the ages of eden to the latest with heethins, he's been deceasin' your breathin' rites// -this line right here, its in a completely different league, your linguistic peak right chea, keep every line @ this level and your getting a deal for sure weakest line: ECKO gets his name for a reason, believe this...its like once he gives you a beatin'// your recievin' a second and third this evenin' like it was in sequence// -obviously it might sound better when your flowin it but to be honest with you i can see you drop tighter rhymes within the same track so personally i'd work on that part overall though it was definatly hot, props to you and im sure your crew shown you love for a tune that hot. keep up da good |
thank you for the feedback my man.
uuuppppppiiinnn'''!!! s.v.................big bad c.s. |
omg that is the hottest shit i have read on this site in mad long you had mulits personals that shit was fucking hot flow was there you had everything of a great song right there in that shit ma nkeep doin shit like that
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trapt rage u r a fukin idiot u aint even got a win or any ligit posts so get the fuk out of here u aint worth this forum let me upp this shyt for yall......
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uppinnn for my homie S.V.
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SIIIIIICKKKKK shit west coast homey... its spits like this that make me wanna join yo crew. I'm handlin some battles right now to show you cats so that ya'll migght let me in. But absolute fire i feel how you broke down each of yo crew members. From this spit it sounds like ya'll run shit... i want in...1
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Mafia Soldier
That was some hot ass shiiiiiiiiit!!!!!!! Once you get into it it flows well and I like how u give an intro to all the cryme members!!!!
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^^^^^im all smiles. thank you.
s.v.................c.s. |
that wuz sweet ass once u got into it and saw how it flowed like that, and i like the cryme memba intros, rite on man
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thank you much fellow battlecats. uppin'.
s.v. |
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