blackie vs $mokeskreen
 

8 to 10 line max
no crew votes
gl and post is due by 2moz afternoon

Verbal warz sendin' shots and I'm takin' what's yours
Spittin fire at cha "Black" ass nigga burnin' ya drawers
I'm goin' straight for the KO this aint reachin' decision
You seem to be blind for some reason so I'mma give u da vision
"Blackie's" lost in tha SMOKE it's hot and u bout to get roasted
You couldn't find ya way out if a "EXIT" sign was posted
Not on my level step it up I can't deal wit this chump
Lyrics so heavy I'll have you feelin' the "Perpetual Pump"
Head down hand's in ya pocket man you a fuckin' disgrace
Don't even post ya verse "Blackie" you'd just be takin' up space

Let's do this hommie, don't take all day!!!!!!!!!!

Ima vote on this when it's posted... U mind votin on my battle? THanx...
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124000

Vote on battle
 

Uppin for you to spit ya verse!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i was gonna vote...hit mine up if ya can & i'll be back thanx..1

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125122

ok ima spit in bout 2 hours man, by the way nice verse, checkin in..

after this battle u gun be iced n "chilled", so dun go cryin to mummy wen u been lyrically "killed"/
ya space gun be easily "filled", this battle like n air compressed box, victory has been "sealed"
ya proly been verbally "tormented", used n "rented", n will wun stop chuckin bricks till ya heads "semented"/
call yaself "peter" pan coz ya victiry gun be "never"(land), i'll rip ya solid coz u beatin me like nylon to "leather"/
cut ya balls of n chuck em in the air to be "headered", nah i aint as good as davids becks so ima leave the rest "severed"/
see my rhymes there all nicely "structured", but yours is just like "rust" tis brown n "ruptured"/
fumes of my fire gunna leave ya "choked", in all ya battles ya been "dissed n "pissed", n left like ya name, fukin "smoked"/

ok uppin votes yall... dun wry i will return tha favour wit whoever votes

uppin votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125216
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125019

uppin!! can we get some votes in here !!!!!!!!!!!!

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nice i shall vote for smoke since his was more flowabl and entertaining, u werent bad black but not really my thing so well done obth of ya's but vote goes to smoke

how about some votes ppl uppin ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

I see you upped ya shit slightly blackkwell, but ya still got a long way to go! Keep climbin daawg!

Smoke's verse was pretty below average, no offense. Blackk took this wid slightly more complex punches and a smooth flow. Good job to both MCs doe, and congrats to whoever wins!

VOTE=BLACKK

cmon uppin votes plz............................................... .

uppin............................................. ........

$moke = 32/50
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 7/10
Punches 7/10
Humor 6/10

Blackwell = 29/50
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 5/10
Punches 6/10
Humor 6/10



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this battle was close but i think blackwell slipped out with the win with betta structure
and personals

vote:blackwell

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Urm..close battle ..it was an O.K battle blackwell u get 30/50 of this battle u need to work on ur structure..and wordplay....smoke u need to put more power behind ur punches and personals...but i give you 32.50 just becuase i think ya struture won this battle.....it was a very cloise battle

Vote-Smoke

Thanks for the feedback!! Uppin 4 some votes in here to close this.

I felt both of u but I have to go with smoke becuase he rhymed a little more I thought and his versus where crazier. so my vote goes to smoke.

oh yea and I forgot plz check out this battle thanx.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127480

nice i shall vote for smoke since his was more flowabl and entertaining, u werent bad black but not really my thing so well done obth of ya's but vote goes to smoke

Uppin for somemore votes in here ppl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

upin votes............................................. ...

uppin............................................. ...

uppin fo' some honest votes ppl...how bout it??????

IP: 2F05 D129


$moke = 32/50
Flow 5/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 7/10
Humor 7/10

Blackwell = 29/50
Flow 5/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 6/10
Humor 6/10


v=SMOKE