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King Solo 05-18-04 09:26 PM

KiNg SoLo vs. Falling Angel
 
yo playa
check da rulez:

10-15 lines max.
30 mins for spit
no d/r
no crew
no hate

***NO FEEDIN***

I spit first!!

vinman 05-18-04 09:27 PM

im sorry angel u fin to get merked he like one of the best on here

FallingAngel2k4 05-18-04 09:30 PM

who cares i'm here to get better so i need to go against the best people to get better

FallingAngel2k4 05-18-04 09:31 PM

and really if i was on the worst list in battle rap

King Solo 05-18-04 09:39 PM

just a thought
but it dont matter who spits first cuz its no feedin
so lets make it blind spit instead
u cool wit dat

FallingAngel2k4 05-18-04 09:44 PM

sure

King Solo 05-18-04 09:54 PM

aight playa
30 mins.
STARTIN NOW BITCH!!!

FallingAngel2k4 05-18-04 09:58 PM

King u want to challenge me but i'll put in a hell hole grave
u ain't worth shit because your damn grave in a no name grave
after i buirrd you alive i pissed on your grave
u talking about u a king after i finish with you u become a queen
u gayer then the gays in the united state u a fucking queer
I'm the fucking king around here i'll make u my bitch
once i finish with you u and ur damn friends will be my bitches
I'm going to bring the damn pain like the damn wrestler
they only way u win is wrestler these bitch to make them scared
but i'll tell u right now who in the fck you thing u scaring

King Solo 05-18-04 10:09 PM

ok here it is
pretty quick...not my best
but i think it'll be gud enough

Facing this bitch, check this battle...his fuckin rhyming is a joke
So you get me I’ll strangle you cuz the only word u know is ‘choke’
U an angel who can’t beat kings cuz I just stripped ure fuckin wings
I’ll control all ure movements like u a puppet and I pull ure strings
Vinman knows I’m gonna win, so let’s get down to your royal merkin
I’ll snap both ure arms, when u get home ya mom’ll have to do the jerkin
Give u 6 days…no 6 months…no 6 years to spit, u’d never reach my level
That’ll be 666 nigga, u a lyrically retarded angel dealin with the damn devil
This bitch only knows how to lose but after all Falling is in Angel’s name
U building on ure record…a few more losses and u’ll be in the Hall of Fame
U can tell I ain’t tryin on this cat how my rhymes lack a certain originality
I could be the armless Kano from MK and still give the heart-rip-out fatality
So this is my spit I’m sendin u so u better open ure ears and fuckin listen
This’ll be ure only moment of glory because it is the King who ure dissin!!

FallingAngel2k4 05-18-04 10:14 PM

upping for votes yalll vote if u have over 75 post

King Solo 05-18-04 10:24 PM

Uppin On This Shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

FallingAngel2k4 05-19-04 08:05 AM

Uppping For Votes Yall Need 75 Votes

King Solo 05-19-04 09:07 AM

Uppin On Thi Shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Drop Honest Votes!!!
I'll Return Tha Favour!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

FlowIntelligent. 05-19-04 11:13 AM

one sided battle....king solo's opener killed falling angels verse....angel u said the said thing over and over and over again...the :grave" part and everything u said u just made it plural exm. "bitch"...."bitches".....thats not a hott rhyme scheme...well king solo your oppener killed this battle hott punch/personal...u won this hands down...the rest of ya verse was hott to but the opener got me

vote: king solo

~!1!~

LyricalMethod 05-19-04 11:38 AM

fallin angel weak verse period. your punches sucked, u need to elavate son. king solo nice verse. better punches and structure.multi's were aight but needs imporvement. return the fava:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124908

vote=king solo

King Solo 05-19-04 12:11 PM

Uppin On This Shit Again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

.::N-Sight::. 05-19-04 02:02 PM

King u want to challenge me but i'll put in a hell hole grave
u ain't worth shit because your damn grave in a no name grave

^^ that's poorly worded and not that strong of a diss

after i buirrd you alive i pissed on your grave
u talking about u a king after i finish with you u become a queen

^^ then, u repeated the rhyme for the next bar...NO NO...and tried to rhyme it with QUEEN...wack

u gayer then the gays in the united state u a fucking queer
I'm the fucking king around here i'll make u my bitch

^^ WTF is a "gay in the US"...are gays in the US gayer than gays anywhere else...that was wack.period

they only way u win is wrestler these bitch to make them scared
but i'll tell u right now who in the fck you thing u scaring

^^ kid,...this is garbage...the rhyming is asanine...and the punch is weaker than hell...WTF!?!


10/40


Facing this bitch, check this battle...his fuckin rhyming is a joke
So you get me I’ll strangle you cuz the only word u know is ‘choke’

^^^ Ur opener is enough to beat this joke

30/40


pssf...

Vote: King

King Solo 05-19-04 04:11 PM

Uppin On This Shit Again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vote Honest And I'll Return Tha Favour!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DON 05-19-04 05:09 PM

ok this was an easy decision
falling angel-i think u need to work on ur stuff a lot more the only suggestion is that u need to improve everything u said grave 3 times at the end of 3 lines in a row

king solo-u easily took this punches were good u really concentrated on makin fun of his rhyme i thought the rhyme scheme worked out and u had a good opener

yo vote on these battles please
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124727

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124620

my vote-king

$ike 05-19-04 05:15 PM

king nice flow and puchns
otha guy nice job but king was betta


vote-king solo

King Solo 05-19-04 07:59 PM

yo get uppin on this shit man!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Metaskriptz 05-19-04 10:15 PM

Solo-Nice quik murk....You beat him/She
Very easy and quick battles...Had everything
including similies and metaphore also structure
Nothing need to be worked on but flows a tad more

Angel-You need to elevate more
structure was aight but need to come harder.....
you Need to work on alot of thing though
keep elevatin

v.King solo


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