!!! scarface87 vs. jacket !!!
 

dawg i think right now, you better go and take a crap.
cuz when you swallow my lines boy your shits gonna splat.
you try and make yourself hard by takin a name from a movie.
but shit, your about as hard as my grandmas boobies.
and i bet you prolly like dudes, cuz when you see a guy you got wood.
and your rhymes so fuckin bad you make bizzare look good.
and i only mention this, cuz i heard you came out of the closet.
cuz when you see another guy your fuckin dick is like a faucet!
you call yourself scarface, maybe you got a scar from the past.
but the way i see it, you only got scar's in your ass!
maybe ive gone to far? and i should stop before i discuss,
how your dumbass is so dumb that you ride the short bus.
so i think im gonna stop now, cuz i got my jelly.
so why dont you quit rappin, and go jerk off to R. Kelly!

a yo ya need to hurry up n battle doggies

yo scarface87, get goin on this man. try to get it done soon!

yo man! you forget about are battle or what?? you've had more than a day dawg..come on!

yo lets get some votes on this shit. help me bring this bitch down where he belongs

i think this was decent battle god punches from both and yall both made me laugh sumwat but i thank jacket had a lil more stuff wit his grandma boobies lol
but it was close vote=jacket

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yo uppin for votes!!!!!!! --yo man Jacket

uppin for votes....put down your site and i'll vote on your shit too...yo man Jacket

yo lets get some votes on this! i'll return the fava

lets get some votes! da fava will be returned!!!!

imma give this shit to jacket he had hotter lines and scarface87...barely had none nice job jacket

i say jacket cuzz he said sum stuff datz wuzz funny azz hell. scarface u did ur thing but im givin it 2 jacket so good luck 2 both of u in da future and keep doin ur thing!!!

break down

punches:scare
flow:both
structure:scare
wordplay:none
personals:scare
overall:scare

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scar face won this because his shit had more punches and was a better overall but scarface even though your gettin my vote, you should play wid words more, throw multies and and word play ect and then move on to iternal rhyming just givin you a tip. Vote scarface

flow- jacket, better structure and more fluent
punches-both had some but scarfaces were a bit better
personals- both were pretty good, jacket were a little weak but scar went 2nd so its a tie
multis- both were weak but jacket took it
vocab- jacket took this
originality-both were lackin but scar took it

vote-jacket

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good battle but ima go wit scarface cause he was more complex wit it, both of yall syt flowed good tho.


V=scarface87

yo dis battle wuz st8 scareface had sum tight personals and structure and jacket had better punches and humor so i would have to say on overall flow it would have 2 be jacket

v-jacket

yo that was a close battle good punch lines and everything but i think jacket took it at the end
my vote= JACKET

Jacket had overall better punch lines then scarface did and jacket also added the humor with his grandma's boobies LOL scarface had some grat personals and structer but like i said over all its gunna have to go to jacket

We Need Votes..this Shits Been On Here Forever!

dawg i think right now, you better go and take a crap.
cuz when you swallow my lines boy your shits gonna splat.
Not a great punchline- I see where you were trying to go here but it was a little off, maybe different wording would have helped.
you try and make yourself hard by takin a name from a movie.
but shit, your about as hard as my grandmas boobies.
lol- this was a good punchline here, creative.
and i bet you prolly like dudes, cuz when you see a guy you got wood.
and your rhymes so fuckin bad you make bizzare look good.
not a great punch- first line kinda stretched a little.
and i only mention this, cuz i heard you came out of the closet.
cuz when you see another guy your fuckin dick is like a faucet!
decent punch.
you call yourself scarface, maybe you got a scar from the past.
but the way i see it, you only got scar's in your ass!
iight playin the gay stuff is gettin played now- not a great punch here either.
maybe ive gone to far? and i should stop before i discuss,
how your dumbass is so dumb that you ride the short bus.
hehe, used concept but funny punchline.
so i think im gonna stop now, cuz i got my jelly.
so why dont you quit rappin, and go jerk off to R. Kelly!
Not a great closer here- I think all in all you had a couple good punchlines though not a bad verse.


I Can't Believe This Guy's Callin Me Gay
First Look At Ya Name, It Be As Corny As Rap Is Today
not a great opener, the punchline was basic and not very funny or clever.
You Probably Got It 4 Yearz Ago When You Had A North Face
Were You Sleepin All This Time?, Wake Da Fuck Up And Get Yourself An Update
The second line stretches here- it lacks in flow and its all filler.
I've Been In You Since You Were Born Cauze I Be You Pain
And I'm Wearin Ya Ass Cauze Here In NYC Waz Rainin All Day
I see where you were tryin to go with this, but I think you could have worded it better, decent though.
We Both Newbies But At Least I Don't Act Like One
And You Probably Stressed Out To Rap Cauze You Can't Make Ya Own, Son
weak bar, very stretched on the second line
Fuck Blowz, I'll Throw You Some Atomic Bombs
You're Is Weak, And I Don't Know What's Da Difference Between You And A Little Girl's Arm
Second line stretches even more... the punch was basic, decent.
You A Faggot, You Got Ya Whole Personality From Ya Moms
I'm Lethal And Rare, As You With A Girl And Don't Know How To Cum
this doesn't make sense, you didn't word this right.
I'm 8+8 Years Old And You Still Can't Knock Me Down
You Had Enough, And Whenever You Want A Rematch Just Give Me A Shout.
I Think all in all Jacket had a better flow, he had a couple punchlines that were good while I think Scarface didn't really have any good punchlines and his structure stretched alot... Decent Battle, Good Luck to both in the future but I vote for Jacket.
Return the favor please.... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356

scareface had sum hot shit he came hard with his punches and flow and jacket had better personals and humor but if i had 2 give it to one dem i would have 2 say it would be jacket jus because his structure wuz betta

Scarface87 can't be;eave i said Rap is Gay yo whats wronge ur flow and Structure was ok but the rest was WHACK
ELAVATE

JACKET i thinku where the Elavated Mc in this battle flow personols and Punches packed in Great Action

Break Down

Scarface87

flow 5/10
rhymez 5/10
punches4/10
structure 6/10
20/40

Jacket

Flow 7/10
Rhymez 6/10
Punches 6/10
Structure 5/10
25/40

v/Jacket