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PoTeNtIaL 05-20-04 12:35 AM

Potential vs. Mercury
 
whatever barz u want ill match it
drop first, house rules


4 get da time limit mayn jus les take our tyme....

Mercury 05-20-04 01:04 AM

Watch out dawg, I'm comin' at ya like a fuckin' bomb,
As far as potential, you don't got that son.
When I roll through your block, all I see are nasty sluts,
I wonder, Why are you the one they are doing up the butt?
Why are your rhymes so whack potential?
Your bitch could do better just get her a fuckin' pencil!
Shit, did I just say that you actually had a girl?
Even Whoopi saw you and she wanted to hurl.
My rhymes will cause your brain to go into submission,
because talent is one of those important things that you be missin'.

Mercury 05-20-04 01:09 AM

There you have ten lines to spit game, let's see it

Mercury 05-20-04 02:07 PM

Dude, you are being ridiculous...Post your shit man.

Mercury 05-20-04 02:21 PM

Potential, advice for next time - If you want to battle someone get your shit together and actually battle them, don't wait a fuckin' day.

40CaliberHitz 05-20-04 03:04 PM

This nigga didn't even so for my battle...........

PoTeNtIaL 05-20-04 05:15 PM

yo i had to sign off mayn mah bad......heres mah verse......

You "classified" as wack so yo rhymes must be of the same "genus"

Thinkin you the "hottest"......

but although you "closest to the sun" I still bring more heat" den venus

You killin me wit verbs is lyke a vet fightin a mute whose tryin to lambast

we aint similar....

Cuz as soon as you try to "compare" us there's already a contrast

All yo spitz "chowder" so i got no choice but to have you "clammed"

cuz wen i called out pros u.....

had no "application" cuz you couldn't "insert" vet "lines" if u wuz a "programme"

shud quit cuz ur...

Alwayz "judged" as shit, so if rappins ur "mission" u shud quit dis "in quest" (inquest)

damn it mus feel bad.....

To not be "silent" yet yo wordz the reason yo bulletz bein suppressed.....


venuse is hotter den mercury but mercury is closest to the sun.....

PoTeNtIaL 05-20-04 05:35 PM

shud quit cuz ur.......take dat out wen u read it.......

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 05-20-04 05:46 PM

Watch out dawg, I'm comin' at ya like a fuckin' bomb,
As far as potential, you don't got that son.
^Weak Opener' ... 0/10 ....Not A Way To Start Off

Your bitch could do better just get her a fuckin' pencil!
^Ok Punch' .. But Not Really Worth 2/10

My rhymes will cause your brain to go into submission,
because talent is one of those important things that you be missin'.
^*Safe Closer* Thats What Im Talking About..!! But This Is The Only Hot Line You Had...!!! 8/10...


Checckity Checck PoTeNtiaL:

You "classified" as wack so yo rhymes must be of the same "genus"

Thinkin you the "hottest"......

but although you "closest to the sun" I still bring more heat" den venus
^Nice Opener' ... 9/10 ...!! But Not Really Feeling Your Structure' Playa' ..

All yo spitz "chowder" so i got no choice but to have you "clammed"

cuz wen i called out pros u.....

had no "application" cuz you couldn't "insert" vet "lines" if u wuz a "programme"
^Nice PunchLine' ...!!! Feeling It ... 7/10

Alwayz "judged" as shit, so if rappins ur "mission" u shud quit dis "in quest" (inquest)

damn it mus feel bad.....

To not be "silent" yet yo wordz the reason yo bulletz bein suppressed.....
^Alright Closer' ..... 9/10 .. Shits All Ova Wit


Vote: PoTeNtIaL

K-Trin 05-20-04 05:53 PM

Well...neither verses were hot.Potential some of that shit didn't rhyme.Merrcury..you had some lines that messed ur flow up as well.Such as this one-
"When I roll through your block, all I see are nasty sluts,"
"I wonder, Why are you the one they are doing up the butt?"
Punches were hard to understand by potintial.So Mercury got this shit easily.

Vote-Mercury

PoTeNtIaL 05-20-04 06:05 PM

wtf kinda vote is dat?what didnt rhyme? if u dont get it dont vote....

*Tay.G*SinCity* 05-20-04 06:05 PM

Vote/Potential

Had better punches, and da flow was easier to follow. Good job to both MCs doe.

Aillight 05-20-04 06:21 PM

Potential rhymed it was just harder 2 follow the rhyme scheme @ times(regardin' whoeva has the blurred out name)

so I don't cause suspense Potential had this one, not by alot by it was 2 the point where it was just kind of there.

I do think that Mercury's closin 2 lines were probably the 2 hottest N this battle but they were pretty much his only hot lines. Every other line in Mercury's verse was out-done by one of Potential's. U can't when my vote with just a closer chief U have 2 have more than that.

Keep ur head up Mercury cause I think if U try a bit harder u'll win alot of battles.1

PoTeNtIaL 05-20-04 06:34 PM

lol.....dis wuz mah 1st battle tryin put dat scheme.......thanks 4 votin mayn appreciate it...if ny of yall need vote illl be hapyp to return d favor

Mercury 05-20-04 06:48 PM

Just uppin the votes, come on guys we need some votes and we'll hit you back.

boaty 05-20-04 07:24 PM

Aight, where to start? Potential, you have just that potential. You picked a perfect name. Youre not there yet, you still got some elevatin to do, but youre doing pretty good. As far as your battle goes, pretty decent spit you just gotta work on your flow. Mercury, you need to step up your vocab, but other than that you had a decent flow going on but you need to elevate as well. Im gonna give this one to Mercury.

Return the favor

40CaliberHitz 05-20-04 08:37 PM

I Felt Potential verse alittle more better! He had better punches & wordplay!

Vote:Potential

Mercury 05-21-04 12:58 AM

Just trying to up the votes here, we want to settle this battle. Thanks.

KillaCamFlow 05-21-04 01:14 AM

Simple Potential took this 1...mercury had some dumb abc rhymes no offense but if u gonna battle someone make the rhymes kinda fun and interesting to do instead of something like this:i got you in a box//busting ur chopps//look atmy rocks lol maybe next time u will win

Vote -POT

NastyEm 05-21-04 07:02 AM

mannnnnnnnn.........clearly.........Potential had better everythang.......punchez flow
blah blah...Mercury need to elevate

vote: Potential


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