White Powder vs fine mind
 

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this is gonna be awesome!!!!

white-power... is the wackness with a bag of cocain, when really it's sherbet/
this-bitch-gotta-learn... tryin to learn in school... before he's unemployed/
this boy's being dusted... clearing up the his fucking mess/
i'll choke you up, like I was strangleing you for fun/
with a fuckin tight rope, stopping your circulation pumping/
you wanna come across and challenge me... you gotta think twice who your steppin 2/
you'll gettin fucked up worse than people in detroit town/
now it's too late-now... fuckin torched all your family in spiteness/
the evilness blows you away to white powder, shitness, leaving you spitless/
turn you into a fossal fuel, you'll be a new methane gass lol/

Wow that was gay... checkin in yo..ill spit next class (10 mins)... cause theres no time limit to this anyway...

Aight imma key it up right bout now.... gimmie like 10 - 20 mins...

You wanted to battle me, you didn’t know im on a winning spree//
You ain’t gonna stop it that’s a guarantee, and im pretty damn sure everyone will agree//
Cause you cant rap, your lyrics are wack, imma fill u fulla more holes then 50 and Pac//
You obviously don’t know jack, you think you spit hot shit but all your lyrics lack//
Im about to make you lose quicker then Roy Jones, I just mangled you, like I was spitting stones//
Yo I just crushed every one of ure bones, ripped out ure rib cage and played it like a xylophone//
Yo bitch you stepped to the wrong cat, cause you ain’t ready for this lyrical combat//
Fuck you your done wen I pull a gat, cause ill leave a hole in this fuckin brat//
Yo I just commited a lyrical crime, yo you couldn’t beat G-unit101 even if you was in your prime//
This bitch can’t rhyme, he thinks he had a chance but got dominated in ten lines//

White Powder u da man......and a fit one at dat!! My votes wid u!!
Peace ;)

Fine mind, u check ur lyrics well but uve bitten lyrics....bare lyrics!! Cut dowen on dat
Elivate
But all in all.....gd

Aight... Uppin...

Both verses sucked, not one really great punch in the battle, but first guy sucked so bad that second guy didn't need much. Second guy wins... his verse didn't have this:

"
this boy's being dusted... clearing up the his fucking mess/
i'll choke you up, like I was strangleing you for fun/
with a fuckin tight rope, stopping your circulation pumping/
you wanna come across and challenge me... you gotta think twice who your steppin 2/"

.. no rhyme, no punch, nothing. terrible.

v/ white

hit back the battle in my sig with an honest vote.

lmfao man evertime i fuckin see this dudes shit i picture em standin in front of a crowd and after the first 2-3 lines they all just staring like what the fuck is he doing

i mean-i didn t know shebert and unemployed were rymes AAAAAAHHHHHHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA THIS DUDE IS THE NEWEST THING YALL COMEDY RAPS!

Aight.... forgot to poll on votes... but w/e anyways UPPIN

Lmfao @ Fine Mynd..!! Alright' ..



White Powder Got This Shit' .. For Real.. Haha' .. !!!

-Both Verses Were Weak- ... Over All I Was Dissapointed!!

Vote: Powder

eh?
 

They were both kinda wack...they both needed more work but White powder did come out better though

white powder has my vote


http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125389

powder was a lil bit betta cause he had betta punches dats it
v/powder

yo it was white powda without question he took it beyond far

haha that kids style is so fucking out there its not even funny

Yo... when you vote, please make it longer and a bit more indepth, I know this kid didn't rhyme, but at least write

Multis -
Flow -
Structure -

Stuff like that cause then it won't get banned, and it may give us better ideas on ways to improve..

Anyways UPPIN.......

Votes Conducted On!!!

Punches: Powder
Flow: Powder
Structure: ----Otha Cat
Multies: Neither
Character: Neither
Creativitie: Neither!!!


You wanted to battle me, you didn’t know im on a winning spree//
You ain’t gonna stop it that’s a guarantee, and im pretty damn sure everyone will agree//
^Weak Openener But Yet Better Than Any Of The Other Cats' SHit!!... 6/10

Cause you cant rap, your lyrics are wack, imma fill u fulla more holes then 50 and Pac//
You obviously don’t know jack, you think you spit hot shit but all your lyrics lack//
^Did Really Have A Rhyme Scheme.. On This Bar'/Lines' .........!!! Etc; ..


Weak Verses..!!


Like I Said.!!

Vote: Powder.....................

powder got dis... Dude fine mind... wtf was that? ur first verse didnt even rhyme... i had to read it twice. ur structure and flow was horrible, but its not the worse ive seen.
powder nice job, not ur best but good enough to win. good flow, structure and much better punches den fine mind.

vote : Powder