!!!!ITS A FUCKIN BATTLE!!!! LyricalMethod vs.Aillight
 

10-16 lines
no hater, crew or dick rhydin votes
no bull shit
check in and drop your fuckin verse.
good luck
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me 1st again? if u really want me 2
check n 1st 2 let me know u still there

im right here son, just stop bitchin and drop dun...

my bad my bad slow ass computer i'mma post n a minute

alrigth make it quick son. i don't got all day....

3rd battle 2day so i'mma challenge a vet//
rip 2 shreds n then i'll seperate em like a marriage that's stressed//

u heard I wanted 2 battle n u got quite frightened//
cause I'll expose u as a fag who hit more men than Mike Tyson//(hit-slept with)

rappers is always postin last, cause they scared 2 battle me first//
but I still stick my foot N they ass like footlocker havin a cavity search//

go get a crew so u'll have d/r votes 2 help, r//
get busted on wit more facials than a health spa//

a savage, bout 2 show U the lyrical method 2 my madness//
this faggot is about 2 B paper r plastic?//

I don't understand why he challenged me, Lyrical just sucks//
he style is vertically butt fucked//cause I fuck shit up//

I have 2 2 show emcees that I master flows with ease//
plus I'm the sickest, U just a pussy with a vaginal disease//

yo I apologize kid my internet is an ass N I kick gettin kicked off so I had 2 keep startin my verse ova cause it would kick me off then I had 2 start ova.

LyricalMethod?

okay?

lets goooooooooo..........

why the fuck you boastin, cuz i can serve your ass without even postin/1 with my verses, i make the most kid, cuz i know niggas get burned like counrty roast man/2

congrats little queer, you get the award for worse verse of the year/3
and naw dude i ain't wack i spit so hard my words get tattooed to your lap/4

excuse yourself, recharge your battery cuz you need life/5
im cuttin through your verse with a ginsu knife, your fame is sinkin like a 9-11 flight/6

and i am that nice,i smoke more emc's than indians who hold peace pipes/7
and you wanna battle, in this tale you lose, now go fukin tattle/(get it) 8

and you sayin i suck you couldn't get bouty even if you & prince ass fucked/9
and that verse was luck my fame goin up like white bitches with butt/10

i ain't a girl, i don't have a pussy , but i leave your legs wet like a reuable doush b/11
you can't move me,im resizin your skill like adjustable boobies/12

u don't get it , you can't win, you st8 a fag like that dude off friends/13
don't depend on me 4 your first win, cuz your verse ain't even half real, like fake kin/14

imma leave yo ass lost like i left my date, its a verbal caution when i spit- put up yellow tape, cuz this kid is gettin fucked up like i slipped him date rape/16

uppin for votes ppl..............................................

hmmmmmmmm interesting battle honestly.........


Multiez: not really any but Lyrical Meth
PUnchez: i think Aight
Flow: Aight
Structure: Aight'z was better
Overall: Aight


it was a ok battle. Lyrical method.....u kept forcin in rhymez.....on each bar. Pertainin to dat......u had no flow.....ur flow was off ......and in sum partz u aint even rhyme...........

congrats little queer, you get the award for worse verse of the year/3
and naw dude i ain't wack i spit so hard my words get tattooed to your lap/4

excuse yourself, recharge your battery cuz you need life/5
im cuttin through your verse with a ginsu knife, your fame is sinkin like a 9-11 flight/6


^^^^^^^^^ naw mean.......

i know wat u was tryin to say but ur structure was all fucked up naw mean... next time dont try to hard.

aint no hate......just speakin da truth......and pleaze drop a honest vote on my 2 battlez on my sig.........i am takin namez on wat battlez i vote on, and if favor is not returned u aint gettin no votez in anyonez battlez in da future.......not to yall personally.......to everyone. matter of fact im puttin dis shit in da sig

uppin'

i though this battle could have been better but any it was alright
It was close but i give it to lyricalmethod he had a little bit better flow
too bad he is a fag

Vote: lyricalmethod

This was a pretty fire battle both of you came strong... Since I can't vote I'll just UP THIS BITCH so someone else can....1

uppin'

uppin

Aight, hit up my battle for me. Thanks

Naw, i thought Lyrical Method had this one easy. He came out hard and I liked his punches. Aiiight, you did good, I just thought that Lyrical had you beat.

why the fuck you boastin, cuz i can serve your ass without even postin
^^BEST LINE^^

This one goes to Lyrical Method

mann ez aiight had better everythang,better raps,better flow,and better structure and more sense.

so my V=aiight

yeah, and Im uppin this shit again like its mine.... holla

v/ Ailight
 

I thought this battle was kinda close but Aillight had the edge on this one.... v/Ailight

Lyrical Method...I don't know if all your battles are structures like this but I could imagine it will effect your votes if they are. My advice to anyone who writes numbers at the end of each line or bar is STOP. The reason is, if you are numbering the lines usually one of 2 things are happening...either your structure is making your flow hard to follow so you have to "instruct" everyone on where the line ends....or the other case is the lines are to long or stretched..

I think Aillight had a couple decent punches..





This was decent, especially the footlocker line, even though I would have changed "havin" to "doin"

Both of yall had some lines that didn't make sense or didn't rhyme

LM
Ail this didn't rhyme

and the last thing..USE MORE PERSONALS....

stay up yall peace

3rd battle 2day so i'mma challenge a vet//
rip 2 shreds n then i'll seperate em like a marriage that's stressed//

^^ that's weak

u heard I wanted 2 battle n u got quite frightened//
cause I'll expose u as a fag who hit more men than Mike Tyson//(hit-slept with)

^^ lol...if u really have to explained your punch in this line, it's a weak punch to begin with...hit? are u serious


I have 2 2 show emcees that I master flows with ease//
plus I'm the sickest, U just a pussy with a vaginal disease//

^^ ur talking about urself more than dissing your opponent


why the fuck you boastin, cuz i can serve your ass without even postin/1 with my verses, i make the most kid, cuz i know niggas get burned like counrty roast man/2

^^ longish lines...but works because of ur rhyming..punch was only eh


and you sayin i suck you couldn't get bouty even if you & prince ass fucked/9
and that verse was luck my fame goin up like white bitches with butt/10

^^ uh..name one

imma leave yo ass lost like i left my date, its a verbal caution when i spit- put up yellow tape, cuz this kid is gettin fucked up like i slipped him date rape/16

^^ not so sure i like the set up here...

LM, ur punches needed to be stronger, with better metas and wordplay. But, this was enough to be aiight.


Vote: LM

omg finaly a good battle on this shit man

aiight- just like your name your shit was allright man you need to work on them punches hittin harder man those played ones is what killed you

lm - nice man word play was your key to success word man period that was how you pulled this off not to mrnthion the fact that your punches were stickin nasty

god job gental men

v/ lm

return the favor links in the sig

Vote Lyrical Method but whats up with my battle?
:shocked: :huh:

lyrical method got hiz flow waz betta punches came harder both had good verses but lyrical methods waz the betta one