discharge VS 20 GraND
 

Ight 10 bars...
blind spit

no crew votes/ no dickriding... basic rulz

due 10-15 mins after U check in.

Holla. Gl

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Check dawg

I aint gonna lie, I bet ur drop will be hot//
but ur time is now up like an expired shot clock//
When u crap I bet u stand, you think ur hot but ur skillz r bland//
And ur ryhmes are streched out like reuben studdard's waistband//
I spit so realisticly, sharper than a hologram be//
so everything i spit you can see vissualy//
I bet u sound like a bitch when u rap, u know its true//
I guess u went through puberty but forgot to take it with you//
Discharge u think ur #1, but ur "shit" is "#2"//
Ill "discharge" you through my system then pull the latch to flush you//

Ight 1

20 grand be prepared to get ripped up litteraly and lyrical...
ive got the so called"lyrical-legend" hopin for a miracle....
lyrically inferior he cannot match up to the rest of us.....
he spits a cuple lines make us sick we heard enough....
chewing up his weak rhymes cuz they sweet and edible....
to tell you the truth if wack was good 20'd be incredible....
say your crew cant be stoped ive beat evry 1 in ur crew..
u want honest truth? that crew is bout as-wack-as-you...
ur not a ~LEGEND~but im a legend in the making....
your wack vesre equals another win for the taking..

UppN, explained votes plz

UppN

yo this was a tight battle no doubt, but i think 20 came with some knock out punches."pull the latch to flush you" was a great way to end it. discharge you had some hot shit too, but i think 20's was just a little hotter this time.

Vote: 20 yo please vote on my shit http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125321

Discharge u had a pretty nice drop Good shit homie 1

Discharge u had a pretty nice drop Good shit homie 1 NETS LOST 69-90 GAME OVER

^^ yea apreciate it dawg thanks we coo mixxed?? ok anyway that vote up there will be contested
it was wack

UppN

yo UppN, explain votes plz..

uppn

yo tight battle real close all the way thru but
yall want votez and ill help ummmm hmmmm
really i have no clue what the fuck to do here but ill give it a try
yallz was close as fuck.....
20 g's good flow ....structure i wish that this line wasn t there-I aint gonna lie, I bet ur drop will be hot//
it aint lyin if it aint there or ever said alot of peeps
know yallz is solid rymerz its a battle no compliments should be there

discharge i thought yall had to much friendship or sumthin there wasn t much swinging i kept a mental image of two guys goin"u sswing first" "no you swing first"
but someone gotta win and someone gotta vote so here it is
v-discharge i thought his flowed more fluent thats all i got for this good luck feel free to drop a vote on sumthin of mine please no hate votez.............would like to see a rematch

Aiight I felt it like this.
20 grand dropped some kill apunches but he had some filla. The punches landed, and rthe flow and structure were good.
Discharge had punches aimed at 20 greand whole crew, and he had flow and structure on lockdown.

Aiight-
20 grand-8/10
Discharge-9/10

Good battle no elevation needed

Return da favor (in ma sig)

vote= discharge

he had a nicer rhyme scheme he had more advanced punches . I liked the way he presented his a lil more nice battle though.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125740
can yall return da fava

Well i thought this was pretty weak, not your best for sure...
Im voting for Discharge here, because i thought his was overall better,

Heres the break down

20 - you flowed alright, but your opener...

I aint gonna lie, I bet ur drop will be hot//
but ur time is now up like an expired shot clock//

Doesn't Rhyme. I didn't see any good punches at all, this needs to be elevated.

DISCHARGE - You had good flow, good structure, you had some good punches.

Your best line -
say your crew cant be stoped ive beat evry 1 in ur crew..
u want honest truth? that crew is bout as-wack-as-you...

That was pretty good....

OVERALL - Alright, I thought it was weak from both of you, You both didn't follow the rules, 10 bars, not 10 lines. Discharge u took like 20 mins to spit that.... in a 10 - 15 min time limit, but that doesnt really matter. Discharge came better with punches, and thats what wins these battles..

Vote - Discharge

20 GraND: yo aight ima be honest your verse was kinda lacking
everything was just half of decent nothing special at all.....so I
got nuthin else to say bout chu.....

discharge: well everything from you was mostly on point flow,
vocab, structure creativity & I a couple of your punches my personal
favourite has to be:

"chewing up his weak rhymes cuz they sweet and edible....
to tell you the truth if wack was good 20'd be incredible...."

my vote goes to: discharge

if u could do a honest vote on my battles i'll appreciate it thx:

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125133