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BigTony.Self 05-21-04 12:13 AM

TonySelf /vs\ lil-trip VOTE...THIS
 
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I Set
U Spit
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Lil-trip 05-21-04 12:32 AM

aight..
 
Quote:
Originally Posted by TonySelf
10-20 Lines
No Crew
No Hate
No D/r
I Set
U Spit
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aight im back, lets go..

Lil-trip 05-21-04 12:48 AM

lol..
 
Quote:
Originally Posted by Lil-trip
aight im back, lets go..


Lets break it down bitch i can tell you aint the smartest
Theres no way a no name pussy can ever be n artist
Don' be frontin callin me a Noob n say that im unable
You want me to show how you will be signed to a Label
Is if you drop dealin "Blow" lickin yo Managers Navel

The way im spittin now you wont contend to this flo
Im flippin bills in this game like Monopoly jus passin go
Listen to me god said liein is a sinnin bro why you sinnin?
You never had a chance beatin me right from the beginnin
do yo self a favor flip yo skirt up n stick to yo fistin...

aight, spit it back...

Lil-trip 05-21-04 12:53 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Lil-trip
Lets break it down bitch i can tell you aint the smartest
Theres no way a no name pussy can ever be n artist
Don' be frontin callin me a Noob n say that im unable
You want me to show how you will be signed to a Label
Is if you drop dealin "Blow" lickin yo Managers Navel

The way im spittin now you wont contend to this flo
Im flippin bills in this game like Monopoly jus passin go
Listen to me god said liein is a sinnin bro why you sinnin?
You never had a chance beatin me right from the beginnin
do yo self a favor flip yo skirt up n stick to yo fistin...

aight, spit it back...


Shit i didnt kno we where allowed 20 heres Part 2
The closest youll come to reppin is for Payless Shoes
Rebok don need another Spock reppin his Fav Cock
Beam him up this pussy fish needs a New Line to be Cop
I could easily end you like yo career here, its a Not

Lookin at this pussy more like a Native bein reserved
Ushers song for you he loves makin Pussy feelin "Burned..'
Your right dogg outta the two of us you got the better Abs
Who else on this forum can rep choosin Tampex as his Fav Pad
Do us all a favor when Usher says it again Realize you got it Bad...

BigTony.Self 05-21-04 01:10 AM

Case closed son , your trapped you've just been closed in
ya thought that rap meant lips around dicks from old men
u might think that givin brains just makes ya smarta
harder... i see ya suckin on it like "akuna mattata"
ur lines stretched like elastic.. like my dick in profalactics
your just a pussy gettin high off my lyrics like fuckin cat nip

i put the brakes on the bitch and nickname him stopsigns
so stupid he drop 4 nickles thought it was like dropin dimes
your just fruity like loops your ass gets laid like tracks
from trains "Self"named, your kaboos has now been jacked
So the conclusion of dillusional confusion from you
your not gangsta and you'de starve tryin ta rap for food
when peeps see me in forums.. they'll be feenin for more
cuz ill be hittin u like foreman.. leave ya grill on the floor

now lil trip took a big fall messin with tony
stressin lil flip your name + game equals phony.........

Jacket 05-21-04 01:37 AM

this was a tight battle..both ya'll had good punches and good flow..tonyself you had a little better vocab and a couple harder punches, which is why my vote goes to tonyself

Prodigy 05-21-04 02:01 AM

Yeah good battle but T still merked him...

Ha ha

i put the brakes on the bitch and nickname him stopsigns
so stupid he drop 4 nickles thought it was like dropin dimes

Triple_N 05-21-04 02:10 AM

Good battle Breakdown for: Lil trip......that was a sad verse, you had no punchlines, no personals, you had some of the most basic rhymes I've seen on this site, yo man you need to seriously elevate
Flow: 5/10
Structure: 5/10
Punches: 2/10
Personals: 1/10
Creativity: 0/10
Overall: 13/50 it was really wack man

Breakdown for tonyself......pretty weak drop from you, but you didn't need much to take that shitty verse, fair punches,a few personals, decent vocab
Flow: 6/10
Structure: 6/10
Punches: 7/10
Personals: 6/10
Creativity: 5/10
Overall: 30/50...coulda been better but wasn't necessary
Vote: Tony

DaCROZofHB 05-21-04 02:14 AM

bigs up to both y'all...i was feelin both flows very tight battle....but when it comes down to it i think tony had a better flow, and funnyfuckin punchlines pro-digy already pasted da line, that was fuckin hilarious....this one could of gone either way but im pickin tony

BigTony.Self 05-21-04 10:25 AM

uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ................

Prodigy 05-21-04 01:35 PM

Uping some votes...

BigTony.Self 05-21-04 05:25 PM

uppin this bitch!

MARVOLoUsJ1009 05-21-04 05:40 PM

word dis shit was type week but fukk it

opener-tony
structure-umm a tie
punchlines-tony...trip u aint have nun dunn
creativity-tony
multis-nun
personals-nun
enjoyed-tony...both of u dudes came real weak not dat much creativty no punches really tony had a few and he had a betta ryhme scheme so he gets my vote...

my vote-tony

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BigTony.Self 05-22-04 12:39 AM

aight uppin this bitch one last time ..

Prodigy 05-22-04 05:19 AM

people come on drop a vote on this battle...

t-storm 05-22-04 06:36 AM

Upin
 
^^^^^^^^^^^^UPIN DIS SHIT MAN^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
get sum honest votes in.....

Killah Bwoy 05-22-04 11:15 AM

ok this was an ok battle i wasnt feelin it that much but i think tony self got this easily..lil trip u jus beginnin u still gotta lot of elevatin to do but u;ll get there..n tony that swas aiight ive seen hotter from u..tony self had wordplay,punches, i didnt see a lot of personals,multies...creativite flow...he had it all lil trip ur gettin there keep elevatin


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