R.A.M VS. Wildfire
 

10-40 bars
no dick ridin
no hatin
no crew votes
no time limit but please get the verse up asap
you drop first

good luck and much respect

Aight:

Wildfire? Come on you ain't even hot as a match,
12 and 1 on your battle stats how you do dat?

Ok/It seems like you been around for a minute,
Seniority on RB tha only way that you winnin,

And this is just a quick keystyle,
I'm a pro so dat means I don't bring my A game to scrimmage,

You just singein em while I blue flame lyrics,
You wouldn't be hot I you was writitn in hells kitchen,
You bouta lose tha same way da Blazers lost pippen.

Before you even start R.A.M force you to retire,
Smokey bear told me only I could stop Forrsest Fire,

You're more like wus started in da microwave wit aluminum,
Nothin really serious like arsenists without tha lighter,

My shits hotter than boiling water and melted cheese,
Only time yous a wild fire is when you burnin trees.

(aight homie it's all you)

Before you even start R.A.M force you to retire,
Smokey bear told me only I could stop Forrsest Fire,

good drop man...i liked that line....but when i get back off work I got somethin for you..don't worry..holla

good look i'm still waitin to hear you tho. I'll swing back thru later and see wus good homie. 1

Yo come on dog I know you got a life to live and shit but this battle been open for like 3 days and you ain't posted yet. Should we close it up and try another time. Let me know wus good.

let me tell you this, you made a mistake tryin to compete with me/
I'll rip you indecently/I can kill you 5000 ways I'll pick whats conveniant fa me/

and i feel i need to let you know son/smokey was smokin that dro son/
and high off that blow son/even smokey knows you can't stop this fire so I'll give you a few seconds to go and run/

1...2...ahh fuck it you'll never make it...I'm too quick to the punch/
I havn't spit for a while but now I'm eatin you for lunch/
but i need to eat more, you don't fill me, so I'ma eat your lyrics too/
asked your moms if i could kill you she was like "your his dad...decisions on you"/

which explains why you battled me, your thoughts are suicidal/
i hope you don't regret this but i'm feelin homacidal/

Beacause I'm willin to stay killin cats by drillin em with pure adrenaline/
as it flies outa my mouth perfection to my rhymes is considered a synonym/
this isn't mortal Kombat cause I'm Inhuman and inhumane yet i'm still hearin "FINISH HIM!"

But i can't do it...it's too early in the show/
I want the judges to enjoy this so I'ma kill this homo slow/

after i beat him speechless/ I'll cut him up, make him lay on beaches/
cut off his fingers than cover his hands with leaches/

that'll teach him to even think about typin or rhymin again/
if he still doesn't get it I'll rip his tongue through his chin/

don't take this to heart, i mean this metaphorically/but this cat is boring me/ with these rhymes bout Boiling cheese/

come on man, honestly, what the hell were you thinkin?/
you verse was so bad I didn't have to fire for your ship to start sinkin/

Now that I'm rappin this up let me tell you what RAM stands for/
you forgot a letter but it's cool it means please "ram my ass more"/

But i don't swing that way, I'll leave you for the birds/
because i know i get nothin outa smokin this herb/

hey yo sorry it took so long man...My comp has been fucked up lately..and work...thanks for bein patient and not bein rude like some of these other ignorant cats in here...win or lose....you still cool...much respect...and much love


Holla

yo i liked this battle fo sho both had good structure and flow but when it came down to it ram didnt do his A game...ram ur punches didnt hit hard and u could of did a little better on ur word play overall c.....wildfires ur verse was slightly better than his i liked ur word play and shit and flow was cool..overall it was a B so wild gets my vote at least u tried

Wildfire? Come on you ain't even hot as a match,
12 and 1 on your battle stats how you do dat?

^^ funny...so u mean he lost 12, won 1?

My shits hotter than boiling water and melted cheese,
Only time yous a wild fire is when you burnin trees.

^^ U have the right Idea with ur Imagery..it just needs to be way more complex and creative...u already said u were hot...do we need to hear it again with another weak analogy?

NO

let me tell you this, you made a mistake tryin to compete with me/
I'll rip you indecently/I can kill you 5000 ways I'll pick whats conveniant fa me/

^^ DATS HOT...and honestly, that 1 punch killed RAMS entire verse

1 problem tho, WILDFIRE...ur lines are a bit stretched...Plus, what the hell is up with an ESSAY for a verse...shorten it man...shit could be dope

Both...elevate with metas and more complex punches

Vote: WIld

thanks for the advice..i'll take it to heart homie...uppin for more votes

yo wildfire nice verse doggy. At least you ain't spit some garbage after all dat waitin i did. Much respect back nigga

uppin this shit yall don't sleep hit tha polls....

uppin...come on..just vote and get it over with people..I'll reurn the favor if you link me up

Wildfire? Come on you ain't even hot as a match,
12 and 1 on your battle stats how you do dat?

man he just out punched you dude that is all man

v/wild fire

you return the favor links in the sig

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dis wuz a str8 battle nothin 2 spectacular but if i had 2 give it to somebody i would have 2 say Wildfire cuz sum of his punches wuz fire

vote=wildfire

wildfire had strong punches and a better rhyme structure. i think your flow was a little off but that was still a hot verse.
R.A.M. your shit wasnt bad but you could have rhymed it a little better. after all, rap is about the rhyming. good shit both of you
vote. wildfire

iight..i lied wilfrie rhyme better because i think it was not a ran ban san type rhyme,.,,R.A.M u need to use some more complex words..like UNconditionly stuff like that if u would have use bigger words u would have won ..Nice battle but..wild took this 1
Wild