Mercury Vs KillaCamFlow
 

6 barz min
10 barz max

No crew votes
no d/r votes
5 votes wins
3-0 KO

Check in Due:10 mins
Verse due:12 hrs

hey sorry man i am checking in, i didn't know how to do it

Ok spit something u got 25 mins

This nigga claim that he can flow, but he bought his rap from a cat for ten blows.
You must have a chemical imbalance or somethin', only Viagra keeps the blood pumpin'.
My rhymes will make you terminally ill, no one cares if you're dead but I'll secure the kill.
To be real in this game you gotta have heart, not be some dumb nigga wit' a brain fart.
My words cut through you like a machette, you think you're dope but you were born not ready.
You call yourself KillaCam, but the only thing you're killin' is your brain cells when you be sniffin' SPAM.
You say you're fly and that you're the shit, but dawg, your game is over like Lil' Flip.

Come on man, let's see what you can bring. Spit that shit.

My Verse
 

fam leave ya A B C rhymes at the Door//
evn if i gave you a free win you'd still want More//
nigga im like lloyd but witout tha Banks//
if we compare us, then your the lil bike and im tha Tank//
this isnt MTV im not aston kutcher and this battle aint a Prank//
when another loss is added to ya column i'll be the one to Thank//
now come on dawg, do u really think i'll be sniffin on some Spam//
i just "murder pictures" and live up to tha name "Killacam"//
Son,just click on community and go to front Lines//
you couldn't even win if u could punch Rhymes//
is ya fat ass havin a fun time waitin in the lunch line//
its crunh-time keep talkin shyt and i'll make you munch-mine//
I would love to see you running fastier then RoadRunner//
Only thing people think when they see my rhymes is"OneCold Hearted Stunner//
:thefinger the one :thefinger

Just trying to up the votez on this thang herr, we'll hit you back

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Just trying to up the votes on this one fellas, we will hit you back, SO VOTE!

this was a close battle. Pretty decent at that. Im goin to have to break this one down.

punches-Tie
wordplay-tie
multies-Mercury
creativity-Tie(Not much from neitha)
flow-Mercury

Vote Mercury

Sorry dawg. But he just topped you on this battle. But nice verses from both. this battle came down to flow.

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We still need some more votez on this shit herre, come on!

i think i'm feelin killas shit. mercury's wasnt bad either, but my vote's for kam!

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killa cam get my vote he came harder wit his punches

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125740

i gotta give this to killacam...his punches were harder and i hardly saw any punches from you mercury but you got potential...your structure was off by a long shot and killa's your was straight you both need to elevate work on personals and harder punches...multies...wordplay...and you got a chance of beating better people...decent battle

vote: KillaCamFlow

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No more fucking unexplained votes!!! If you don't got something intelligent to say, then don't vote at all.

allrite imn gonna give it 2 cam he came harder good verses from both both need 2 work on structure especially mercury both need 2 work on ovcba multis and personals also

Humor~ Fam
Metas~ Fam
Multis~ Merc
Vocab~ Merc
Flow~ Fam
Finisher~ Fam

Overall Vote~ KillaFamFlow

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rofl both yall dudes need to work on your rhymes alot this battle is garbage.. grade a at that

mercury your verse was childish it wsa filled with a bunch of conry lines nothing hit hard at all.. your shit was just plain asscrack..lmao that lil flip line was the only bright spot in your whole verse

killa- your shit was garbage also but i think yours was better than mercury you had some weak shit aiight but wordplay of yours was better than mercuries

vote- killa for commming less herbish than mercury did

This nigga claim that he can flow, but he bought his rap from a cat for ten blows.
You must have a chemical imbalance or somethin', only Viagra keeps the blood pumpin'.
My rhymes will make you terminally ill, no one cares if you're dead but I'll secure the kill.


^^ Work on your structure by shortening up your lines dawg...also, work on complexity of punches and rhyme scheme


fam leave ya A B C rhymes at the Door//
evn if i gave you a free win you'd still want More//
nigga im like lloyd but witout tha Banks//
if we compare us, then your the lil bike and im tha Tank//
this isnt MTV im not aston kutcher and this battle aint a Prank//
when another loss is added to ya column i'll be the one to Thank//


^^ Simple...u need to make ur lines more complex with metas/wordplay...but, it was good enough to beat MERC. because your punches actually hit

Vote: Killa

yo dis battle wuz kinda one sided mercury did have good structure but hands down killa took dis one but on da onerall dis battle wuzn't all dat great i seen better stay up and elevate

vote-killa