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N-SIGHT .::VS::. *Tay.G*SinCity*
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NO verse feeding No bs/dr/crew/hate votes all votes explained u check in and drop 1st...agree to terms or w/e 1 |
Why I gotta spit 1st if u made da callout? I think u should be da one droppin 1st since u called me out ya know... Don't worry I'm only a newbee, I will prolly get ripped anywayz right... And I wont feed off ur verse if dat's what u worried about... Holla backk...
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^^^...ya sure...I make da rules in my thread...daz why...u drop 1st..take it or leave it...
Pz bro U daughter is cute by the way...hehehe |
Man, I peeped your battles, and you ALWAYS droppin 2nd on em. It's all gravy, I see your strategy. Fuckkit, I'll drop 1st. I'm leavin work right now, but I go str8 to my other job from here, so I'll log on there to drop ma verse...
G'luckk... |
^^^ lol..i don't always drop first...some are blind spits...and others I drop 2nd...but coo..
holla1..and LMAO@ u not bein able to find this thread to "check in", but finding my old battles...hahaa |
Mmmuuurrrdddeeerrrrr!!!!!!
Aiight dawg... I'm ready to roll...
G'luckk... ... And jus to let ya'll know, I am makin this win ABSOLUTELY UNDENIABLE jus to make sure da d/rs can't fake da funk in this mawfuckka... *Comin Out Da Box Swingin!!!* Reword ya ‘Verbage-Bitch’, U only like holdin’ mics coz it reminds u of ‘JERKIN-DICKKS’// I’ll rip out ya EYES to EAT EM & Rip Out Ma GUTS coz ya “iN”-“SIGHT” aint WORTH-A-“SHIT”!!// Eat a Dick<< To any nigga thinking you ‘Rip-Scripts’, ya spit is ‘Simplistic’// He ‘Fixed-Wid-Lipstickk’ and couldn’t “SPIT” a “PUNCH” swingin both FISTS wid ‘WRISTS-SLIT’!!// *Maaaan! I'm tellin u it's OVER! GAME FUCKKIN OVER!!* I’l squash this Gay Prickk, & makin’ “SENSE” of sellin Brain is ‘Barely-An-OCCUPATION’// (cents) ‘Stop-Playin’, Ya Asshole’s “Filled With More MATES” than ‘AUSTRALIAN-CONVERSATIONS’!!!// KO! Words ‘Join-&-Hit-Em’, I ‘Poison-Victims’, & like JADA u can’t AVOID-THE-“SMITH”n// This ‘Boy’s-Trippin’ coz drinkin “CROWN” on empty Intestine’s da only time he got a ‘ROYAL-SICKKNESS’!!// Make Newbs go 1st? ‘Thought-U-Was-Fast’! but ya verse is more TIRED than NARCOLEPTIC ‘INSOMNIACS’!// I’ll Knockk Ya On Ya Ass wid OFFICE EQUIPMENT & u still couldn’t ‘DROP-THE-FAX’!!// (facts) Tay ‘Spray-Rhymes’ & I’ll cut off ya LEFT arm so u can Spell Ya ‘Name-“RIGHT”’!// No Games I ‘Take-Shine’ & he couldn’t SEE a “slice of the PIE” wid OPEN EYES in ‘CAKE-FIGHTS’!!!// KO!!!! *MWAHAHAHAHAHAA!! FINISH HIM!!!* Nigga, u couldn’t be “twice the MAN” wid SIAMESE ‘PARTS-&-ATTACHMENTS’!// I’ll ‘Slaughter-This-Bastard’ wid PUNCHES dat “break more “CHINS”* than CHINESE ‘CAR-CRASHES’!!!// (*CHIN is a popular Chinese name) … Die slow Bitch…! |
dick.... i sued that siamese shit earlier in a battle wit bombz ...but it was in an entirely different way...but damn thas coincidence good luck to both emcees here that last verse was hot
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muhahahaaa...**walks in..sees comp..dies laughing**
Aiyo, First off, How the fuck you gettin' votes speakin' jibberish..bitch, you are illiterate..- Ur whole verse sounds ignorant..anyone who speaks English won't consider it..- Faggot, u 'force shit' like ur constipated..you're constantly hated..- Not because your plots are great..but because you're drops are played bitch..- I laugh at you thinkin' your spit is epic..nigga, that shit is epileptic..- Punches misfired without discretion..ur text can irritate a Torrets kid..-* LICK SWEATY BALLS!!!!..see, I wreckon I'm wreckin' whatever you're reppin'..- U stink like it's shit u stepped in..before this battle, u forgot to choose ur weapon..- WTF!?! kid I'll rip you like 'junk mail'..toss you 'a 'side' like with a chicken dinner..- Get 'off my dick' cuz I don't need to 'stress my point'..you will NOT be the winner..- Look at 'Tay 'Dig' for his 'Groove Back'..thinkin' he 'The Best Man' with those sleuth raps..-** U ain't 'bustin' those jus loose straps..all ur imagery is like you drew crap..- FUCK OUTTA HUUUUUUUUUUUUUURRRR **Shit is Personal Dawg..** U fuckin' buggin' teachin' ur daughter..phonics when you can't even drop logic..- Workin' two jobs?..ur 'lyin', just a..Siegfried and Roy prop bitch..-*** With a 'Trump'ed up battle record..does it even 'don' on you ur talent is wack..-**** I'll spit this verse to beats..the sound in the back is you dying on the track..- Fuck outta huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuur! *Torrets is a condition which causes a person to have uncontrollable body twitches and verbal outbursts **Tay DIggs...actor played in How Stella Got her Groove Back and The Best Man ***He's from Las Vegas ****He claims to have an i-net battle record of 61-2 (hehehe) |
Damn hott battle peeps but ima break it down.
Tay: Good punches and personals ok wordplay but u stretched most of your lines plus all them colours didnt help wit the verse...plus the structure was off (stretched lines 2 blame). N-Sight: Dope verse amazin wordplay hard hittin wit the punches decent wordplay a lil strectched wit the lines but maintained a good structure u got this. V/N-Sight Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. |
FLOW & STRUCTURE
Straight up sight took this with ease man cuz i was definitely feelin his verse a lot more than i was feelin tay's. Tay ure lines were too stretched so ure structure was completely off and that fucked up ure flow to, but u did have a little flow. n-sight, u stretched ure lines to but not as much so u had a far better flow dawg. both y'all need to shorten ure lines and try to keep them the same length u know. PUNCHES & PERSONALS N-Sight took this cuz he came mad hard with his punches in this battle. the wordplay in ure spit was top playa, some of the best i've seen u do so far. Tay, u had some gud strong punches to but some weak ones to whilst N-Sight was consistent from start to finish. tay u had some ok wordplay but u weren't as strong as n-sight so i give this to him. OVERALL N-Sight basically just came harder from start to end. his punches were consistently strong and his wordplay was top form to. his structure was questionable but it managed to pull off giving him gud flow to his spit!!! V/ - N-Sight |
tay won this battle because simply n sight his rhymed more and had better word play, better flow aswell. He ripped you up from the start of his lines and continued the process. He had the better overall performance even though your shit was pretty clse though. N sight you need to elevate on your rhymes despratly. Tay easerly had this one.
vote tay. |
^^^ This vote is being DQ'ed
uppin for real votes 1 |
Tayg Best Lines=I’l squash this Gay Prickk, & makin’ “SENSE” of sellin Brain is ‘Barely-An-OCCUPATION’// (cents)
‘Stop-Playin’, Ya Asshole’s “Filled With More MATES” than ‘AUSTRALIAN-CONVERSATIONS’!!!// KO! N-SIGHTS Best Lines= Ur whole verse sounds ignorant..anyone who speaks English won't consider it..- I laugh at you thinkin' your spit is epic..nigga, that shit is epileptic..-\ PUNCHES=Tayg...Just Look At That Austlain 1 OMG! FLOW=N-SIGHT....Flowed Alot Better Thans Taygs WORDPLAY=Tayg...Wordplay Was Alot Better Than N-Sights Stucture=N-Sights...Taygs Bars Didnt Flwo Of Each Other Personals=N-Sight....Personals Where Stronger Complex=Tayg....Punches Where More Complex Vote=Tayg Hot Battle Best I Seen For A Minute...Tay Gets It Becuase Them Punches Where Crazy N-Sight....Work On Ya Punches,Multis And Complexity Tayg...Work On Structure,Flow Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. |
alright this battle was a lot closer then i thought it would be but here's how i broke it down:
n sight had a nice flow going with some nice vocab intertwined with it. his punches were alright but i wasn't really feelin the flow to it. there were dead spots in his verse. tayg had nice punches n mad metaphors with multis. although most of his lines were streched he still made it flow together smoothly. his vocab was nice as well. vote: tayg Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. |
Are ya'll on Crack.
Tay G you had good verses but ya flow and structure sucked in my opinion. better personnals would suffice. N-sight you had good multi syllable flow, punches landed but no personnals Tay G-6/10 N-7/10 Return da favor in ma sig Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Reword ya ‘Verbage-Bitch’, U only like holdin’ mics coz it reminds u of ‘JERKIN-DICKKS’//
I’ll rip out ya EYES to EAT EM & Rip Out Ma GUTS coz ya “iN”-“SIGHT” aint WORTH-A-“SHIT”!!// Serious use of wordplay to construct a nice opening bar and punchline... Your verse was definately correct... You came harder than I usually see in battles so Ima have to give you an 8 outta 10... Good wordplay- decent structure and some funny punches.. I’l squash this Gay Prickk, & makin’ “SENSE” of sellin Brain is ‘Barely-An-OCCUPATION’// (cents) ‘Stop-Playin’, Ya Asshole’s “Filled With More MATES” than ‘AUSTRALIAN-CONVERSATIONS’!!!// KO!- My fav bar.....from you. and then there awas nsight-- WTF!?! kid I'll rip you like 'junk mail'..toss you 'a 'side' like with a chicken dinner..- Get 'off my dick' cuz I don't need to 'stress my point'..you will NOT be the winner..- this was ur first really nice punch in the verse... You had a good flow in this and it made your punches almost an afterthought... I really enjoyed your verse and the ending bar was a good closer... This was a close battle-- real hard to choose a winner here but Ima have to go with... N-Sight... He had more personal punchlines... and I really just felt the flow-- I thought Tay-G was gonna win until half way through your verse when it just became apparent that you wasn't having it... Good battle- Vote Nsight. |
Damn Good Ass Battle...
Flow - Tie, Both yall verses flowed real real nice. Good use of multi's and the rhyme scheme was tight from both yall. Punches - Tay, not even close. Damn near every line in Tay's verse was a ill ass punch: I’l squash this Gay Prickk, & makin’ “SENSE” of sellin Brain is ‘Barely-An-OCCUPATION’// (cents) ‘Stop-Playin’, Ya Asshole’s “Filled With More MATES” than ‘AUSTRALIAN-CONVERSATIONS’!!!// KO! Personals - Tie, Again both yall came hard. Both emcees was hittin hard wit the personals, I saw it about even. Creativity - Tay, he had some unbelievably original punches. Sight's shit was creative too, but Tay got him: Tay ‘Spray-Rhymes’ & I’ll cut off ya LEFT arm so u can Spell Ya ‘Name-“RIGHT”’!// No Games I ‘Take-Shine’ & he couldn’t SEE a “slice of the PIE” wid OPEN EYES in ‘CAKE-FIGHTS’!!!// KO!!!! Structure - Tie, Yall had different ways of structurin ya verses, but both was effective. Multi's - Tay, both had multi's in ya verse, but Tay had more, and his were a little better. Overall - TAY G. This was definitely a hot ass battle. Props to both yall. I just felt like tay came harder. It seemed like every line was hot, Sight's was tight too but no as consistently sick as Tay's was. Tay had overwhelming punches and creativity and i think that really put him over the top. Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. |
^^^ Aiyo...Pimp Rawb is Tay Sin City or some shit cuz he doin D/R favors for votes on dis shit
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Yo its battles like this that make me wanna read both yalls shit more good battle i mean it...shit was good......SinCity..nice word play and vocab. the best line was
"I?l squash this Gay Prickk, & makin? ?SENSE? of sellin Brain is ?Barely-An-OCCUPATION?// (cents) ?Stop-Playin?, Ya Asshole?s ?Filled With More MATES? than ?AUSTRALIAN-CONVERSATIONS?!!!// ^^thats some dope shit Worst Line:"Reword ya ?Verbage-Bitch?, U only like holdin? mics coz it reminds u of ?JERKIN-DICKKS?// I?ll rip out ya EYES to EAT EM & Rip Out Ma GUTS coz ya ?iN?-?SIGHT? aint WORTH-A-?SHIT?!! ^^even its the worst line its still dope Advise try to make it flow better dats bout it. N-Sight's best line:"Faggot, u 'force shit' like ur constipated..you're constantly hated..- Not because your plots are great..but because you're drops are played" ^^nice word play wit dat shit... Worst Line:"WTF!?! kid I'll rip you like 'junk mail'..toss you 'a 'side' like with a chicken dinner..- Get 'off my dick' cuz I don't need to 'stress my point'..you will NOT be the winner."\ ^^it didnt relate at all but it was still a aaight line. im gonna vote for sincity cause his shit was too nice to just not like it..N-Sight try to use better words and make it relate better. V:SinCity I droped one for you now you do the same for me...its on the first page LyricleSolja Vs. Cinco |
@Whoeva's DQin My Votes: Suck A Dick And Stop DQin My Votes. I'm One Of The Few People I've Seen On Here Who Actually Puts Thought Into Their Votes. This Some Fuckin Bullshit I Swear.
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Nigga stop actin like a bitch DQ'n all my votes! I aint said shit about r d/rs comin up in here. Nigga, u lost str8 up. Ya verse was wackk as fuckk, and I wrote more complex shit in da 5th grade! I knew u was gonna try and pull some hit like this! Fuckk dat... all my votes COUNT!! |
Fuckkdatshit cuzz...! I got 5 votes already and u DQ'd 3 of em?????? WDF??? U on some gay shit dawg... U already lost, jus take it aint stop bitchin. I aint asked nobody to vote on this shit...
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tay-ur verse r really complex...u have multies...sum crazy metas....
gud wordplay.... only thing wit u though dawg....is ur structure is hard to follow....n that counts a lot in a text battle...coz i found myself havin 2 read ya linez twice to get tha punch....u need structure that people can follow coz it ruins ya flow. i also think ur punches are 2 weak ‘Spray-Rhymes’ & I’ll cut off ya LEFT arm so u can Spell Ya ‘Name-“RIGHT”’!// No Games I ‘Take-Shine’ & he couldn’t SEE a “slice of the PIE” wid OPEN EYES in ‘CAKE-FIGHTS’!!!// KO!!!! i mean thats a great beta n very creative..but u cnt hit cats wit shit bout cake-fights! i mean it makes sense..but u gotta cum harder..its a battle! n-sight...ur structure woz more basic..but thats all thats needed it flowed well. punches maybe wernt as creative as tay`s but they hit a lot harder like this How the fuck you gettin' votes speakin' jibberish..bitch, you are illiterate..- Ur whole verse sounds ignorant..anyone who speaks English won't consider it..- gud punch basically n-sight takes this on punches n personals..also he had beta flow creativity n metas/multies goes to tay....... but its a battle n punches n personals r wot count n-sight jus keep bringin it like that tay-cum harder n u`ll b a sick mc my vote n-sight... |
Yo N-SIGHT had some good puches, and well dilivered, Tay.G had better flow so I'm going for N-Sight, since he had good puches
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n-sight prolly got more d/rs..u can tell cuz he got a vote or two his shit wasnt even comparable to tay gs
hi flow was not off and n-sight just upset cuz hes not as skilled...not sayin u suck but ur not gonna win this with out d/rs kid.. n-sight your shit was hot and had good punches and flow but wasnt as consistent with those as much as tay gs was.... my vote is for tay G |
^^^ STFU...I'd rip ur herb...
LMAO @ noobies wit fucked up structure...suck a dick now uppin for votes 1 |
i liked this battle but i gotta go with n site on this one i definitly think he got it
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this was an okay battle
tay-your shit was okay but only that.........you came okay wti your punches but you need to elevate and work on re-wording them.........pc.........oh and work on your structure it is mad fucked n-sight- your shit was good........you also need to work on your structure but it was alot better then his..............you came hard wit your punches and they hit hard.......keep it up man......pc v/Nsight |
*Tay.G*SinCity* best punch- Stop-Playin’, Ya Asshole’s “Filled With More MATES” than ‘AUSTRALIAN-CONVERSATIONS’!!!// KO!
structure was on point as well as ya flow .::N-Sight::. best line U fuckin' buggin' teachin' ur daughter..phonics when you can't even drop logic..- ya wordplay was tight and ya had more personals but u need to up on ya vocab v/ n-sight |
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