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t-storm 05-21-04 11:54 AM

wrenegade vs t-storm
 
house rulez
8-12 linez
u spit first

Wrenegade 05-21-04 12:12 PM

fuck it..

yo..fuck playin-wit-words, ill beat they fuckin-ass/
and fuck slayin-this-herb, ima be comin-back//
you huffin-gas, but still couldnt spit flames if you struck-a-match/
this punk-is-wack, your freestyles takin outta hip hop, quit bummin-raps//
cuz gettin fucked by broomsticks the only time you "gave something-back"/
come on you aint even a light drizzle, just be honest-wit-me//
you couldnt drop knowledge on me if a payed off flyin scholar-hit-me/
ima beast, formed-and-released, swarmin-this-peep like T's warrin-wit-bees//
this whore-bein-weak, two words that sound alike and you got hip hop..accordin-ta-T/
im forcin-ya-teeth, down ya throat like my dick when t storms-at-his-knees//


fuck it just a lil 5 minutes for ya peace and good luck to you too dog

t-storm 05-21-04 12:51 PM

u
 
wrenegade lemme give u sum advice ur skillz wack, way-u-play/
u so wack...stop the rap-game, go back to ur vanessa-may/

remind me of golf...u cum on real strong wen u up n "front9"/(frontin)
...........but ur "swing" has no "aim" wen u try n "punch-in"

all u can say is blah,blah,blah,ima cap u bitch,n rant/
weak"..u cudnt even draw ur gun wit "ants" in ya pants/(antz is fukin strong!)

u only on dis site coz uve no friends.."i dnt wana b alone no more"
bad move kid....coz u fucked against me..im on "another level"

even if u cum wit more aim than tha jfk killa... id still duck-n-swerve/
no way u can fuck wit ma lyrically "assasinating"...warped n-twisted-verbs/

ive won wit less "plays" than it took seattle to see off tampa-bay/
next time u should take ya time...coz u not in it, aint even had-a-say/

Wrenegade 05-21-04 02:27 PM

how you gonna act like you fuckin got multis and shit in that so people think you do that dont know wut tha fuck they talkin about?? it was .....wack actually.. i was gonna say ok but i dont fuckin like you

Lyriclesolja 05-21-04 02:30 PM

Yo to both of you nice spit, for Wrenegade good vocab. punches it was a allaround good spit.......T-Storm same for you but the only thing wrong wit yours was that you need to stop makin your lines so long and make it easier to read.....so my vote goes to

V/Wrenegade

aaight i droped an honest vote on your now its your turn...help me KO this wannabe mcee na mean......be honest like the rest of them....

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123677

demobx 05-21-04 02:47 PM

Yeah
 
Well wrenagade had better structure and better punches and multis. t-storm work on your clarity but you had some good punches and I agree with the person that last posted. It was an aight battle

My vote goes to wrenegade
One Love to all

Wrenegade 05-21-04 04:10 PM

i aint really got beef with this kid...someone break it too him that all those - between words does not mean they are multis damn dudes hittin me up sayin they are..thas bullshit....good battle anyway tho kid

vinman 05-21-04 04:16 PM

naw i disagree this battle suck big time but im gona have vote fort storm cuse his shit was beta only thing is he rhymed beta either of you had punches or good vocab and the strutere was okay ill give this battle a 2/10 but my vote goes to storm

Wrenegade 05-21-04 04:20 PM

ite i guess we said no dickriders but fuck it ill let it slide i aint tryna start beef

vinman 05-21-04 04:26 PM

who fucking said i was a dick rider i dont even the the uy fuck u

Untold 05-21-04 04:26 PM

i was really leanin in favor for wrenegade, even though t's was good. i really like both of them. but wrenegade hit harder. so my votes gonna go to wrenengade. but yea, i dropped an honest vote, so can ya'll drop 1 to here!> kre-z vs. met-a-4

Action 05-21-04 04:41 PM

Flow - Wrenegade's Verse Flowed Better. Wren's Structure Was A Little Better And I Think That Helped The Flow.
Punches - Niether Cat Had Real Strong Punches. Both Seemed Forced A Little.
Personals - Not Many Good Personals From Either Emcee.
Multies - Wrenegade Clearly Had Way More Multies, Which Also Contributed To his Flow Being Better. T Only Had A Couple In His Whole Verse, While Wren Had Multiple Multi's In Most Of His Lines.
Vocab - The Vocab Was Simple From Both.
Originality - I Thought Yall Was On The Same Level Wit The Originality Of Ya Verses.

Overall, This Was An Okay Battle. Both Yall Got Some Skills, But I Think Yall Both Need To Come Wit Better Punches And Personals. I think Wren's Verse Was A Little Better All Around. It Was Also More Consistent. My Vote Goes To Wrenegade.

:) 05-21-04 04:46 PM

renegade won this battle props to you my man now hit this battle up with a vote man

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125747

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125748

Wrenegade 05-21-04 04:57 PM

yo ohio represent! look i told dude i aint tryna start any beef.... but if you woulda explained your shit like dude did with the breakin it down and shit....i wouldnt have said shit, i still prolly wouldnt have agreed

Aillight 05-21-04 05:22 PM

"u only on dis site coz uve no friends.."i dnt wana b alone no more"
bad move kid....coz u fucked against me..im on "another level""-T-storm

did I miss the rhyme? Let me know.

wasn't the greatest of battles but it wasn't the worst, ya know?
didn't really like n-e of the punches put wrenegades flow n rhymin was pretty damn good(if I may say) He got my vote cause storm didn't really spit n-e-thin.I mean he had "punches" but if they aren't good 1's then it really doesn't matter 2 me, his rhymes were all basic n so he didn't catch this vote.

much love though.


I'm OUT!

Replay 05-22-04 12:35 AM

ok it was one sided
it was wrenegade
YOU KILLED HIM WITH STYLE FLOW PUNCHES PERSONALS


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