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SevenThird Vs 20 GraND
Ight u spit first
10 bars max no crewvotes/ no dickriding.. basic rulz ight spit 1 |
Checkin in.... Verse will be up within the hour...
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within da hour huh? its past 8...
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Ya styles like missin "homework" with ya writtens-wheres-the-"science"?
Your whole "20Grands" - "Counter-fit" like a "Kitchen-Air" appliance My-Flows Hard-to-Break with your soft rhymes like Im Virgin-Hymen The only time "20" can come-hard is when he Flirtin-By-Men Ima bout to smoke LL like a "Cool-J"- Ya rhymes Don't-"IM-press" like you aint chattin with news scoops about ya "broken-text" (LL = Lyrical Legendz -Read that again cuz u missed it) Drenchen you with a sickness of baths in Clap-infested-piss-n-syphliss The Only time ya crew excell has-been-when-Tested-For-Bittin-Scriptures SevenThirds the Only Lyrical Legend here- I kill fools with thumb-holds 20Grand aint "Half of me" But his chest still got more'n one-"whole" (Just start over again I know it's hard) Wishin everyone of our members would join ya crew Postin-n-Gettin-Pissy You wishin you were down wit D2R so you put Tony-Self in ya Siggy You Couldn't Take out one of us- That's why You left-Tonys-Name-In Ya Sig maker can't rhyme or even do the job you homies-gave-him I spit-Flurries- Ya sig says "Call Me Tyme Cuz I Cant Be Stopped" But 7Thir(d) hault ya flow like rippin batteries outta-clock |
Its time to take action, sick of these fake niggas actin//
my ryhmes sicka than the rolls on ricki lake smackin// Mac-10 ejects rounds, betta yet inspect clowns// Think your on blessed grounds? your "realality check bounced"// Ill through "blessed rice", cuz we "engaged" in a battle// Make u the "laughin stock" of RB, like "humerous cattle"// Your metas make no "sence", couldnt "pay" to put it in words'' All ur ryhmes are "irrational", thats why u "seventhirds"// Got "dick on ur brain"? cuz ur mind aint "straight"// U tryn to battle 20 GraND, U know u a flyweight?// Like a tornado through mobile homes, im about to blow u away// None of ur shit flys, so keep it off the airway// You challange me? Ill come to ur door like UPS and deliver// Ill rip you to shreds, crush u, and cut u like "rock paper scissors" There i just killed u and no one will report it// Cuz a story about death is only a story if the victim is important// ight a lil more than 10... but its ight |
Ight, good spit
Lets get some votes |
1 with that... respect on this... now votes please
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creativitie:seventhird punches:20 grand flow:20 grand structure:20 grand opener:seven third closer:20 grand seven third u had a dope opener Ya styles like missin "homework" with ya writtens-wheres-the-"science"? Your whole "20Grands" - "Counter-fit" like a "Kitchen-Air" appliance DOPE^^^also u had great creativitie....but thats it.... 20 grand....u had a nice verse ur best line was.... You challange me? Ill come to ur door like UPS and deliver// Ill rip you to shreds, crush u, and cut u like "rock paper scissors" u also had good structure,punches,flow,and a decent closer v/20 grand |
no doubt... 0-1 uppin..and by the way
Wishin everyone of our members would join ya crew Postin-n-Gettin-Pissy You wishin you were down wit D2R so you put Tony-Self in ya Siggy You Couldn't Take out one of us- That's why You left-Tonys-Name-In Ya Sig maker can't rhyme or even do the job you homies-gave-him These lines referenced the Graphic in his sig that had one of Destined 2 Rhyme members in his signature as a crew member which was never in the crew...He took it out right after the verse. |
actually it was funny, b4 we both spit i had to remove my sig cuz g duece is makin a new one for our crew, i didnt like just take it out for the hell of it. 1
UppN |
Aiight seven you started out hard and came with soem hella good punches but it seemed to me like you ran out of steam. Ya structure was good and ya flow was aiight.
20 Grand Y apunches weren't as string but there were more of them. Ya had a pretty good finisher, and you had flow and structure on lockdown. SevenThird-7.5/10 20 grand-8.5/10 Peace and Props good battle ya'll Return da favor (in ma sig) |
no doubt 2-0... Nah I wasn't tryin to say you took it out for no reason... It just that the verse dont make sense without that tid bit of info so I threw it up so people would know wtf I was talkin about.
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UppN
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Upin
^^^^^^^^^^^^UPIN DIS SHIT 4 MA MAN ^^^^^^^^^^^^^
gud drop 7 u ripped dis cat |
UppN.... t-storm... whats wrong wit u...
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Still Uppin this shit....... Eeeeeooo Weeeeoooo... Chosen
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Uppn, dont let dis sleep...
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UppN
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UppN...
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Yo UppN, dont let this sleep dawg COME on.
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Ya styles like missin "homework" with ya writtens-wheres-the-"science"?
Your whole "20Grands" - "Counter-fit" like a "Kitchen-Air" appliance nice... My-Flows Hard-to-Break with your soft rhymes like Im Virgin-Hymen The only time "20" can come-hard is when he Flirtin-By-Men nah...played Ima bout to smoke LL like a "Cool-J"- Ya rhymes Don't-"IM-press" like you aint chattin with news scoops about ya "broken-text" aiight...a lil vague (LL = Lyrical Legendz -Read that again cuz u missed it) Drenchen you with a sickness of baths in Clap-infested-piss-n-syphliss The Only time ya crew excell has-been-when-Tested-For-Bittin-Scriptures ok...no rhyne SevenThirds the Only Lyrical Legend here- I kill fools with thumb-holds 20Grand aint "Half of me" But his chest still got more'n one-"whole" (Just start over again I know it's hard) again vague..not straightforward Wishin everyone of our members would join ya crew Postin-n-Gettin-Pissy You wishin you were down wit D2R so you put Tony-Self in ya Siggy nice You Couldn't Take out one of us- That's why You left-Tonys-Name-In Ya Sig maker can't rhyme or even do the job you homies-gave-him nice....original I spit-Flurries- Ya sig says "Call Me Tyme Cuz I Cant Be Stopped" But 7Thir(d) hault ya flow like rippin batteries outta-clock not much flow..but pretty nice your verse had aiight flow, good vocab, complexity, and attempt at wordplay but its too vague. Like you gotta make sure everyone understands it. Its time to take action, sick of these fake niggas actin// my ryhmes sicka than the rolls on ricki lake smackin//ok...basic Mac-10 ejects rounds, betta yet inspect clowns// Think your on blessed grounds? your "realality check bounced"// Ill through "blessed rice", cuz we "engaged" in a battle// Make u the "laughin stock" of RB, like "humerous cattle"//ok.... Your metas make no "sence", couldnt "pay" to put it in words'' All ur ryhmes are "irrational", thats why u "seventhirds"// nice personall.. Got "dick on ur brain"? cuz ur mind aint "straight"// U tryn to battle 20 GraND, U know u a flyweight?//ok... Like a tornado through mobile homes, im about to blow u away// None of ur shit flys, so keep it off the airway//ok.... You challange me? Ill come to ur door like UPS and deliver// Ill rip you to shreds, crush u, and cut u like "rock paper scissors" nice nice.... There i just killed u and no one will report it// Cuz a story about death is only a story if the victim is important// nice ending........, k honestly this is a enough vote cause 20 grand had A multie and his flow and understanding was better. he didnt use elevated vocab and not as complex, so seventhirds got it there. but I gotta give the vote to 20 grand for clearer punches. here are some examples Your metas make no "sence", couldnt "pay" to put it in words'' All ur ryhmes are "irrational", thats why u "seventhirds"// nice personall.. There i just killed u and no one will report it// Cuz a story about death is only a story if the victim is important// |
A... vote or ill cut yo throat lol holla
UppN |
severn 3rd won this because of his punches hit harder and had better performance overall. I could read his more easerly because of his structure and flow was spot on and beat the other guy by his rhymes, multies and flow. The other guy did ok but not problebly his best rap, try better next time.
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UppN
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Pretty Nice Battle, This IS How I Break It Down:
creativity:seventhird punches:20 flow:20 structure:tie opener:seven third closer:20 seven third Ya Opener Was Hott and Had Not Bad Flow, But The Rest OF Ya Verse Was Average Ya styles like missin "homework" with ya writtens-wheres-the-"science"? Your whole "20Grands" - "Counter-fit" like a "Kitchen-Air" appliance 20 Ya Verse Was Bangin!Good Punches, good flow, and a good enuff closer to pull out the win vote = 20 Grand |
dis wuz a tight battle but ummm i felt dat 20 came wit dat fire shit so he get my vote
vote=20 |
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