DeadlyVision vs. Daclassic
 

Quick key. good or wack
i can care less
same rules as the first thread which
will be getting closed.
no crew
no hate
no d/r

blindspit...due in 3 min after both check in....so check ....and same rules apply

Check.........................time is tickin,.

The classic verse
 

some quick key shit...and don't really care if i win or lose. but let's go

ladies and gents please rise for this unwanted special occasion of the man with no vision and the classic sensation.

Well here is your free eye exam..............

It's going to take a little magic,There's no hocus pocus
I'm bout to make this Deadlyvision get his eyez focused
You steady thinking and typing a verse you thinking of biting
No biting, Don't take me as a peace a cake when you writing
Lyric incision coming through you as sharp as a cleat be
Even if you cut my legs off, You still couldn't defeat me
he's not even close to lyrical, bragging that he a miracle
I'm a have this dude retire from rapping to being spiritual
I'll baptize you for rapping religous in the shit that you wrote
If that was the case, Then I'll physically beat you into a pope

You getting a victory is invisible, I can't even see it.

some quick easy shit....lol you like....i think its' wack or aight but i don't care if i win or lose....fair game...

^^Kid 1st ur punches are like female hits they all sound whack/
How u claiming ur tough? is like mannequins it's all a fake act/..
Kid face it i'ma above u, skill is what u lack, Put uneven #'s in ur head to show how the odds are stacked/...
Bitch I punch ya line and ya 4s-been-met....steping up 2 Me u get smacked da way bitches-get-checked/..
Only time dis kid fly is up in a bird nest, My punches will leave ur organs by ur heart now he really 'Up-Set'/..
IQ of a Genius?? I leave ya mental capacity in catastrophy, squeezin ya brain an slam ya head,I've damned-ur-cred/
Profane Frees,Explain Please...how the Tip of ya Dick is ur 'Main Squeeze'/..
Comin at Dv U - fag - now how u gonna spit rhymez witta Brain FreeZe/..
It's like im throwin stones at At "blueprint", cuz I'm "rockin-yo-dome"/..
Classic? I Leave ya frame like a pocket-of-bones... u think your electrifyin? when really your "sockets-is-blown"/..

blah!! 15min Keyd...........

Let The Voting Start............................................. ...............

lol....good one.......

...................Um........VOters Dont Sleep....................

hold up let me tell you something don't go around boasting like this was for the crew battle when this is not my best....cuz if you want to go ahead and set up for a crew battle between me and you we can.....and i would take it more serious.....

daclassic um not your best or even close to what u can do but your opener was pretty nice good wordplay decent punch and your closer not to good punch didnt really connect to me it was ight though the rest of your verse was around or below average not really any solid punchs after that opener rhyme scheme was nice though no need to say what u did wrong u already know what it is

deadlyv your opener was pretty nice good shit worded better an it woulda been real sick your closerwas nice as well pretty creative and good wordplay dont think many more peopleare gonna catch that shit though and the rest of your verse was tight at first 4 lines then didnt feel much of it till the last 4 lines those lines were all sick though nice punchs nice verse be more consitant next time though

vote deadly visions

fuck i dont even know but imma give it to deadly vision because he had a sick flow but lemme break it down real quick

Deadly vision: ur hottest line was:
Profane Frees,Explain Please...how the Tip of ya Dick is ur 'Main Squeeze'/..
Comin at Dv U - fag - now how u gonna spit rhymez witta Brain FreeZe/..


that was a sick flow n i was feelin ur flow through out ya whole verse....but you need to shorten your rhymes cause that stretched shit is killin it...if u didnt have as good punches i wuldnt of gave u this win cuz that stretched shit is sort of an extra line really

daclass ur hottes line was:
I'll baptize you for rapping religous in the shit that you wrote
If that was the case, Then I'll physically beat you into a pope

and that shit was aiight..but i understand it was only a quick key..but ya the flow was good on this one too but i think DV barely beat u though bra cuz of da punches

i think DV gets personals,punches N flow
n daclassic gets effort...lol i dunno

but the intro was kinda gay LOL sall good though

vote:DV

c'mon people vote so this thing can get closed......................

UppUN..................and Classic relax homey this aint for no damn....crew battle...........

Aight Check Dis...

DaClassic: 5.5/10
Your Shit Was Decent, Had Nice Metas and The Punches I Was Feeling. Your Flow Wasn't On-Point Throughout The Whole Piece But You Still Had Sum Decent Lines. Nice Drop, Stay Dope.

Deadly Visions: 6.5/10
Your Shit Was Nice, Your Punches Were Hitting Hard and Sum Had Me Laughing. Nice Flow and Your Structure Was Nice ThroughtOut This Whole Piece. Stay Dope, Nice Drop Cuz.

Vote - DV

Stay Dope, Props To Both

~R~

End this battle yo.

i don't care who you'll vote for i just want it closed and out the way.............

^^I agree...


Can we get some votes.

..............................This Still Not Ended......................................

breakdown:

daclassic:

It's going to take a little magic,There's no hocus pocus
I'm bout to make this Deadlyvision get his eyez focused
^^hott opener good punch 7/10
You steady thinking and typing a verse you thinking of biting
No biting, Don't take me as a peace a cake when you writing
^^lolgood meta but bad punch 5/10
Lyric incision coming through you as sharp as a cleat be
Even if you cut my legs off, You still couldn't defeat me
^^defeat me lines are played no respect for that 0/10
he's not even close to lyrical, bragging that he a miracle
I'm a have this dude retire from rapping to being spiritual
^^good wordplay strong punch 7/10
I'll baptize you for rapping religous in the shit that you wrote
If that was the case, Then I'll physically beat you into a pope
^^another good punch hott closer 8/10

overall: 27/50 (54%)

deadlyvision:

^^Kid 1st ur punches are like female hits they all sound whack/
How u claiming ur tough? is like mannequins it's all a fake act/..
Kid face it i'ma above u, skill is what u lack, Put uneven #'s in ur head to show how the odds are stacked/..
^^hott opener good wordplay and metas bad structure 7/10
Bitch I punch ya line and ya 4s-been-met....steping up 2 Me u get smacked da way bitches-get-checked/..
Only time dis kid fly is up in a bird nest, My punches will leave ur organs by ur heart now he really 'Up-Set'/..
IQ of a Genius?? I leave ya mental capacity in catastrophy, squeezin ya brain an slam ya head,I've damned-ur-cred/
^^good bar nice shyt but structure once again is off but still hott 7/10
Profane Frees,Explain Please...how the Tip of ya Dick is ur 'Main Squeeze'/..
Comin at Dv U - fag - now how u gonna spit rhymez witta Brain FreeZe/..
^^lmfao hott shyt here 8/10
It's like im throwin stones at At "blueprint", cuz I'm "rockin-yo-dome"/..
Classic? I Leave ya frame like a pocket-of-bones... u think your electrifyin? when really your "sockets-is-blown"/..
^^dam hott finisher best bar 10/10

overall: 32/40

vote: DV...overall better verse and the last 2 bars ended it

v/ DaClassic.

More original.. both of you came with mad played punches an concepts.. Classic less so.. `odds stack up` an `mannequins` lines were bad.. Classic flowed better an structure made it easier to follow.. DV was lookin` stretched thruout.

Vote on this:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121685

I agree with casual....

I thought DaClassic won this one with his better flow and his punches semmed to hit a little harder. Deadly came OK but his punches seemed to lack strength. I understand it was a quickly keyed piece but I think that DaClassic's just came off a little bit harder. Also, DV's flow was off in some spots.......

Vote - DaClassic.....Sorry I couldn't help you close this but could you guys drop a vote in this battle between me and creativitie?

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...16&page=4&pp=15

thinks for the votes but keep them coming

Ok.

UppUN>

yo, this was a pretty good battle. But I think DV came harder on this one.

Daclassic, you had a tight spit an all, but this was not one of your best battles. You had some good punches, but only a few hit really hard. Your flow was aiight, but it went off in a few places. But overall it was a pretty good spit. Not yo best though.

DV, you had a nice spit, man. You had some nice hard hittin' punches. I also felt your flow for the most of it. Good spit. Not the best, but it was nice.

V/ DV