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Metaskriptz 05-22-04 10:54 AM

L.X. .Vs. Killah Bwoy
 
10 lines
no d/r
no hatin
no feedin
no crew
no bitin
no recyclin
You spit first aight

Killah Bwoy 05-22-04 10:55 AM

lol at me alwayz spittin first...aiight imma spit right now...good luck..checkin in

Metaskriptz 05-22-04 10:57 AM

checkin n...............
Might have a chance at losin but its a risk Ill take....LOL

CHEck in

Killah Bwoy 05-22-04 11:09 AM

Kids Name Fits His Skills 'Cause He's Lyrically Xcellin Backwards-
Like A Weed Plant In A Veggy Garden Im Gettin Rid Of Dis Bad-"Herb"-
You Couldn't Have An Advantage On Dis Kid Even If You Was R.kelly-
Face It Dawg You Couldn't "Get By" Me Even If You was Talib Kweli-
You Retarded Even Your Mom Agrees You An expirement gone wrong-
If You Was A Receiver For A football Team You Still Couldn't "Go Long"-
Like A Horrible Pitcher Lines Are Comin Straight For Your Face-
Kid Gone Holy Have him In front row of a church session..Next To Mace-
I Can See Your Wackness Right Through You Like Night Vision-
Have This Kid Glued To My Rhymes Like Porn On Television-


BOOM Nigga fucks good

Metaskriptz 05-22-04 11:29 AM

aight check it.....
Killah whats Killah about you I nutted on ya mom and she said it was just frost..//
SO go to FAQ and look up L.X. and Black theif and ask why you lost..//
Damn I give ya props ya lil kid like 3 years old playin wit indee cars..//
Killah the only one in Lyrical Destruction without his name on his avatar..//
Nigga your not a vet....more like a workin with a animal vet..//
Becuz I taunt this bitch so much he mile well be a rapperzz for my pet...
I like ya stlyle, but I can see ya ass crack more then screen tenson...//
My rhymes make ya yellow and fat..So we call can call ya homer simpson..//
Niggas like you dont have to drop..Bury ya bitch ass in ya grave deeper..//
Becuz bitch ass niggas like you get ya heads cut off like if I was the damn grim Reeper

Killah Bwoy 05-22-04 11:35 AM

why is everyone usin dat black thief line...im gonna cry :( lmfao j/p good shit uppin

Metaskriptz 05-22-04 11:53 AM

yea same with you......uppin with this....Lets get some votes

t-storm 05-22-04 12:30 PM

gud battle
 
first off.....tight battle

both ya`ll flow n structure woz good easy to read n gud set up...
not much init.....
L.i had the edge on multies i didnt see any from killah boy....l.i had a few
yall had a couple of personals but they werent the best...killahs opener woz prob the best personal
but it comes down to punches.....i felt killahs more...he had the beta metas n wordplay in his punches...
l.I yr punches were good i jus feel killah edged it coz his were beta set up

so tight battle wit killah jus havin enough

vote-killah boy

FlowIntelligent. 05-22-04 11:37 PM

breakdown:

killah bwoy:

Kids Name Fits His Skills 'Cause He's Lyrically Xcellin Backwards-
Like A Weed Plant In A Veggy Garden Im Gettin Rid Of Dis Bad-"Herb"-
^^good opener nice punch 7/10
You Couldn't Have An Advantage On Dis Kid Even If You Was R.kelly-
Face It Dawg You Couldn't "Get By" Me Even If You was Talib Kweli-
^^didnt flow too well and r.kelly lines are played 2/10
You Retarded Even Your Mom Agrees You An expirement gone wrong-
If You Was A Receiver For A football Team You Still Couldn't "Go Long"-
^^ok punch not too hott 5/10
Like A Horrible Pitcher Lines Are Comin Straight For Your Face-
Kid Gone Holy Have him In front row of a church session..Next To Mace-
^^good punch kinda strong 6/10
I Can See Your Wackness Right Through You Like Night Vision-
Have This Kid Glued To My Rhymes Like Porn On Television-
^^hott closer your best bar 7/10

overall: 27/50 (54%)

L.X.

Killah whats Killah about you I nutted on ya mom and she said it was just frost..//
SO go to FAQ and look up L.X. and Black theif and ask why you lost..//
^^lol hott opner black thief line played i would know i used it 7/10
Damn I give ya props ya lil kid like 3 years old playin wit indee cars..//
Killah the only one in Lyrical Destruction without his name on his avatar..//
^^nice personal 1st line is gay 5/10
Nigga your not a vet....more like a workin with a animal vet..//
Becuz I taunt this bitch so much he mile well be a rapperzz for my pet...
^^first line bad 2nd line nice personal 4/10
I like ya stlyle, but I can see ya ass crack more then screen tenson...//
My rhymes make ya yellow and fat..So we call can call ya homer simpson..//
^^your hottest bar good metaphor and punch 8/10
Niggas like you dont have to drop..Bury ya bitch ass in ya grave deeper..//
Becuz bitch ass niggas like you get ya heads cut off like if I was the damn grim Reeper
^^grim reeper line played and bar looks forced 4/10

overall: 28/50 (56%)

vote: L.X...i think he took this battle with the homer simpson line and all the personals..
killah u never throw personals start using them and u will get alot more K.O's
decent battle rematch would be good cuz this one was close

~!1!~

Metaskriptz 05-23-04 12:50 AM

Thanks you lets get some real votes instead of that D/r stuff

MARVOLoUsJ1009 05-23-04 01:51 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Killah Bwoy
Kids Name Fits His Skills 'Cause He's Lyrically Xcellin Backwards-
Like A Weed Plant In A Veggy Garden Im Gettin Rid Of Dis Bad-"Herb"-
^^hott opener..dunn
You Couldn't Have An Advantage On Dis Kid Even If You Was R.kelly-
Face It Dawg You Couldn't "Get By" Me Even If You was Talib Kweli-
^^good concept but chill with dat even if u was shit
You Retarded Even Your Mom Agrees You An expirement gone wrong-
If You Was A Receiver For A football Team You Still Couldn't "Go Long"-
^^^whut da fukk do dat mean lol
Like A Horrible Pitcher Lines Are Comin Straight For Your Face-
Kid Gone Holy Have him In front row of a church session..Next To Mace-
^^okay
I Can See Your Wackness Right Through You Like Night Vision-
Have This Kid Glued To My Rhymes Like Porn On Television-
^^^weak as fukk

BOOM Nigga fucks good


umm u had some creativity,no personals and a few punches...i give dis shit a 6/10

MARVOLoUsJ1009 05-23-04 01:55 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by L.X.
aight check it.....
Killah whats Killah about you I nutted on ya mom and she said it was just frost..//
SO go to FAQ and look up L.X. and Black theif and ask why you lost..//
^^^first line wass madd dumb...weak ass opener dunn
Damn I give ya props ya lil kid like 3 years old playin wit indee cars..//
Killah the only one in Lyrical Destruction without his name on his avatar..//
^^^sound like a little ass kidd lol
Nigga your not a vet....more like a workin with a animal vet..//
Becuz I taunt this bitch so much he mile well be a rapperzz for my pet...
^^^no
I like ya stlyle, but I can see ya ass crack more then screen tenson...//
My rhymes make ya yellow and fat..So we call can call ya homer simpson..//
^^LMAOOO wow yo u fukkin suck nigga
Niggas like you dont have to drop..Bury ya bitch ass in ya grave deeper..//
Becuz bitch ass niggas like you get ya heads cut off like if I was the damn grim Reeper

^^^okay finisher

ummm u had no creativity,wun personal,ya verse was madd trash dunny how u be KO'in niggaz 4 real..killah got dis shit

MARVOLoUsJ1009 05-23-04 01:56 PM

damm i voted 4 da wrong nigga yo killah tell strobe da change my vote dunn..i made a mistake and voted 4 dis weak ass nigga

Metaskriptz 05-23-04 02:09 PM

Marv shut the hell up you just mad becuz you caint organize your crew right..and stop with the dunny shit becuz thats the wackest thing on earth..And nobody else on Rb is usin the wack ass lines...What a wack nigga...you worry about ya crew bitch now you worry about that..YOu fuckin dunny...LOL what the hell is a dunny

Killah Bwoy 05-23-04 02:23 PM

lol aiight imma holla at strobe wit dat..............good vote playa much respect

2Face 05-23-04 09:06 PM

my vot L.X
best rhymes i ever read yo shit was cool
cool flow it all went along with eva thang
cool structure u went all out good
no punches
overall 8/10

Killah u had nice rhymes perfect
but u had punches that here good
flow was weak but u couldnt did better
structure also weak
overall 7/10

Metaskriptz 05-23-04 09:16 PM

Thanks spiky Uppin this

MoTiF 05-24-04 09:21 PM

Im not voting b/c it will be called Hate...but Spikey is D/R'in b/c he said X had 0 Punches and Killa has doem New's Flash Punches win Battles.

Metaskriptz 05-24-04 09:36 PM

LOL.....AIght but If ya say so..But he still thinks who wons..

MARVOLoUsJ1009 05-25-04 07:52 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by X
Marv shut the hell up you just mad becuz you caint organize your crew right..and stop with the dunny shit becuz thats the wackest thing on earth..And nobody else on Rb is usin the wack ass lines...What a wack nigga...you worry about ya crew bitch now you worry about that..YOu fuckin dunny...LOL what the hell is a dunny


lmaooo yo how fukk old r u dickhead..and u know whut a dunny is a nigga like u a lil fagget dont get madd at me cuzz u rap like lil jon nigga step ya fukkin game and i got da best crew on dis dumbs ass site nigga

Killah Bwoy 05-27-04 11:19 AM

yo LX dont be dissin Dunny if you was raised in the area you would know what the fuck it means......thats like me makin fun of yo ass when you come on like "HI"

come on now str8 stupid..UPPIN DIS DOE

.::N-Sight::. 05-29-04 11:20 AM

First of all...this battle str8 up goes to Killa because his verse flowed better and hit much harder

X's verse seemed like he was talking or arguing with someone, like he was trying to prove his punches...work on FLOW and delivery dawg


Killa..the line about the bad herb was funny...but could have been worded better


Flow Killa
Rhymes Killa
Punches Killa

Vote: Killa

Killah Bwoy 05-29-04 01:20 PM

uppin............................................. .....

-bODy CoUnT- 05-30-04 04:59 PM

My vote goes to killah for one reason... both verses were hard and the punches were comin non stop but lx killed it for himself wit that weak ass homer simpson line, sorry yo...

HoPe 05-30-04 05:04 PM

ight..this battle was aight..but x..forealz..ur spit wasn't as good as killahs...im not sayin ur suck cuz u don't..jst it wazn't good enough..umm...well both of ya should use alot more personals...da punch was aight..but not ur best...

spit: killah
punch: killah
flow; killa
multi: none

vote: killah

E Looch 05-31-04 03:26 AM

how do he get votes wit hverses like that got madd dr

but um x shit was to simple them wack punchs aint getti nu know where u tryin creative aproach an that shti is really wack stop rappin for real u make rap look like country music give it up an killah nice spit on this battle pretty much murked his verse with the openin lines nice personal there u need to use those more often though in all ya versez like that nive drop though
vot killa

Metaskriptz 05-31-04 03:35 AM

umm dont get mad becuz you thought you ould beat me by kOin but ya really cant..So you going to get mad and cry to mommy and Vote against me in battles becuz you mad that we are tied up..Well thanks n e wayz..uppin nice spit killah...And E Looch dont come hatin on me like dat again..you do it too much..

E Looch 05-31-04 03:36 AM

umm i dont like people who get people to vote for them i aitn hatin u just wack u eve nsaid u lost u fuckin herb

Killah Bwoy 05-31-04 07:54 AM

lol ^ i feel ya dawg.........................UPN....

LyricalMethod 05-31-04 08:15 AM

X nice opener but your verse kind of fell off towards the middle an ending.

ex:I like ya stlyle, but I can see ya ass crack more then screen tenson...//
My rhymes make ya yellow and fat..So we call can call ya homer simpson..//

I hope you don't see to much of his ass crack dun. anyway killah nice verse, nice punches and structure.

killah's best punches:Kids Name Fits His Skills 'Cause He's Lyrically Xcellin Backwards-
Like A Weed Plant In A Veggy Garden Im Gettin Rid Of Dis Bad-"Herb"-

Like A Horrible Pitcher Lines Are Comin Straight For Your Face-
Kid Gone Holy Have him In front row of a church session..Next To Mace-


X your pumches weren't hittinas hard as these ^^^^^^
X step your punches up, nice flow u just need to work onconsistency.
Killah nice verse, punches and milti's, work on better lyrics.

vote=Killah

Killah Bwoy 05-31-04 04:45 PM

uppin this...will return favours...whats good yall/...

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 05-31-04 05:12 PM

Killah bwoy came away wit da Vote cause his flow was better and his rhymes makes mo sence and

l.x. ur rhymes didint make that much sence but ur flow was decent heres the

Break Down

L.X.

Flow 7/10
Rhymes 5/10
Punches 6/10
Structure 6/10
Vocab 6/10
30/70

Killah Bwoy

Flow 8/10
Rhymes 7/10
Punches 7/10
Structure 8/10
Vocab 8/10
38/70

V/ Killah Bwoy


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