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[Paranoid]Feat Potent
HeXeN Paranoia a feeling incognito its exploits ignorance to hate, Resent appealing occurred in the minds of tho’s who debate Paranoia combines self with belief gathering like microbes, Inclines dignity feared by intruder as information enters lobes, And Vision taken twisted like cyclone and resented on others, Incision fact paranoia controls vision and twist reality kills lovers, Proclivity to betray and obtain and re-say in darkness and slay, Privacy shattered and re-flexed and anger splits over milk today, Attached to combat fear but jump conclusion and story is un-read Detached truth for reality as there unique like So~fake take lead Insane but still strain strain on body like pain causes visual fake, Inertia complain of foolish scorn of immortality for own sake, Back to hemisphere like time machine we forget our age but it passes, In to the atmosphere our memeroy of happening reflect like glasses, Paranoia a combines factual and reality trick of the mind. Rewind, Back to point blank range for insanity paranoia vision of wots behind……… Potent Lets break it down, I'm in-a-cent, As metal does Escapes not found, I'm in repent. A petal was... Parted, From the stem and blown into the whisked breeze Started, On my friends once you knew you could frisk me Would list these, Harmless matters as something so wrong You gave me looks The Sort that made the cringe: prolong Infringe hold on; Us two between cupids arrow If you did think, Your ways would seem stupid; narrow Chance eye lids blinked, At another girl; Infact None Your mother nature to me with worlds impact brung. But i'm just like, The next man now, Not caring for her Stop sharing my word, I want to start scaring in slurr: If You Ever. Gave me your heart again I WOULD Play it as a, bag pipe; Flag site maintains the good Shame it stood. Off the pole, Same as you on axis You was walking stick; Never a spine to back me Confined to taxi's, I could never ride my own rides Shame you didn't, Like me a sphere when shown sides |
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dats well gd :)
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free post...omg...i have the right to get u banned
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Wow!! homey Hex this was tight you both stayed on topic thats whats good. Potent i kno what he is capable of. But this was fluent some imagery in this but could be done betta
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Thas deep i wish MCs would lay off the dictionary rap though.. So Textish.. the only Audio heads who spit lyrics like that are A.Rock n shit.. And no, your not as good as them..
Still a good peice though i was feelin it, just wish it hadnt been so ?dictionaried? Pz |
fuck u ^^^^
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Aight.... the whole thing flowed nicely... was a simple rhyme sceme.. but when i read it it still had a bounce to it nah whut i mean? i was feelin ya concept... u wasnt just spillin out bullshit like the usual stuff that goes around but u send forward a message... good shit boyys keep it up... ima keep ma eyes open>>>~
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pretty hott shyt i was dewf feelin it keep it comin............................................. ...............
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Yo Peeps Is Dis Good Enough To Be Open Mic Of The Mouth???If So Please Nominate it..thanks
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fuck there is no replyieso n dis site
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Mafia Soldier
Damn dat was great!!I could kinda see a mental picture of what u where sayin,your on your way to greatness if u keep this up!!!!
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aiight upp
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uppin
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Similar styles on that.... pretty hott shit... would have liked to see Potent incorporate multis in on that tho...
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incorporate mulits<< wtf, that piece had fuckin' loads multis. i dont' know what you think is a multi. but with 2 posts, your just a joker, so fuck off.
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lol....he is a fuckin joker
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lmao you have what 6 posts? I have 1600 on sixhsot.com... come over there and i can give you an ass whoppin.. both of you...
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and you dickhead potent's lines had only one rhyming word per line... no multis at all
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PARTED FROM the STEM and blown inTO the WHISKED BREEZE
STARTED ON my FRIEND once you knew YOU COULD FRISK ME WOULD LIST THESE, Harmless matters as someTHING SO WRONG You gave me looks The Sort that made the CRINGE: PRO LONG InFRINGE HOLE ON; Us two betWEEN CUPIDS ARROW IF YOU DID THINK, Your ways would SEEM STUPID; NARROW Chance eye LIDS BLINK, At another GIRL; INFACT NONE Your mother nature to me with WORLDS IMPACT BRUNG. But i'm just like, The next man now, Not CARING FOR HER Stop SHARING MY WORD, I want to start SCARING IN SLUR: If You Ever. Gave me your heart aGAIN i WOULD Play it as a, BAG PIPE; FLAG SITE mainTAIN the GOOD SHAME it STODD. Off the pole, Same as you on AXIS You was walking stick; Never a SPINE to BACK ME ConFINED to TAXI'S I could never ride my WON RIDES Shame you didn't, Like me a sphere when SHOWN SIDES ^^ does that look like one fucking rhyme word per line you moron. And who cares if you have 1600 posts, that doesn't mean you got skill It means your a internet junky. Fuckin' Owned. |
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