accomplishment vs. L.I.
 

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checked in...yo dirtby check ur fucking PM's.....

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gyea accomp when you gonna have your verse?....im done 3 bars of mine already....we could get this shit done early if you want....i will prolly drop tommorow night...

yeah me too prolly or maybe even tonight cuz i gotta work on some shit for that other tourney

aight ill try to get it tonight but ima be hittin the books for this huge italian test tommorow....we'll see what happens....

aight yo i'ma post my verse like at 11 59 just so you can't look at it and try to make urs better...

lol okay you do that....ill finish keying mine up in a lil bit...gotta get a shower first....good luck accomp......

the better verse
 

Accomplishments a hypocrite cause he aint accomplished shit…
Found our no one likes him so he hopped on the reject’s clit…
Stop stating that your good, your wack and that’s how the statement goes…
With all them damn losses………it’s no wonder your known for KO’s!!…
Your careers goin downhill……..like Ja’s did when he decided to sing…
And how you expect to win when no one even likes to read what your bring…
Hand him a loss, when battling me that’s what you get dude…
I understood why people commit suicide after I met you…
Spit that weak verse and all you get from voters is the herb stare…
He’s not known so he starts beef with vets to get his name out there…
Lines I spit are like fire cause they leavin you engulfed like flame machines…
Beat wit that played line, oops forgot you dont even no what that term means…
I have this bitch paranoid, too afraid to even drop his verse…
Obviously he wouldn't understand that real emcees spit first…

like a paper eraser, my brain waves, deface ya verse like deflection
not a hater,you show up late, after gettin off re$tricted's erection
D.R. Disses are played, but this kid is even on the anomyous dick
shit i gotta battle this bitch and he remains to rock my name in his sig
Losing Inclined, could give b.j.'s for three days and still couldn't whore me
i keep tellin this kid its -text-, but he remains to give it to ya'll -orally-
regular battle, but when i'm writing a topic this kid is still findin it
and meanwhile my punches bust hinges and rip you out da closet you hidin in
your jokes, well a know i kill most, so your -crew will get played now-...
shit you know what i'm talkin bout thats why you got the name -grayed out-
this kids verse is -ass- thats why he's mainly a -fernuter rapper-
type ya verse, but it remains to get infected like i'ma computer hacker
personally greatin emcees, that why you known for I.M.ing site members
post don't matter, because my heavywieght style crushes this light contender
continue the beating and expose his ass that i'm handin him
were opposites, and if he's the apitimy of awful, then i'm da antynim
yo i'll use your own quote to permenattly diminish ya
but your best couldn't even swing a punch at my finisher

done...

finally a non-weak battle

l.i. - you cam e alot better last week, still had some nice lines, some lines fell short of hitting hard

accomplishment: one of the better verses i've read in the league this week, had some nice punches, you came witty, flowed better than l.i. did

this was a good battle, but i have to give it to accomplishment
props to both battlers

vote = accomplishment

^fuck outa here herb.....i came hella weak last week.....dickrider....good spit accomp......lets get some REAL damn votes up in here.....

dickrider?

i don't even know either of you

jesus christ...must every single person on this site bitch and whine


grow the fuck up

v/ accomplishment.

Not bad from either.. both came with personals thruout.. dropped consistant.. jus felt LI had more played lines an the links weren`t v.effective.. plus the opener an closer were ya worst lines.. opener was played an closer was weak.. why use a link when he made the comment literally two posts before?? accomplishment flowed nicely.. made it easier to follow.. multis were put to good use.. personals were generally a lil more effective makin` more of the punches harder.

Decent battle, nice personals throughout. I like the fact this was personal. I felt accomplisments personals while LI's were more generic. Both of yall could have better finishers. Best line in the battle was Accomplishment " i keep telling this kid its text, but he remain to give it to yall orally", Accomplisment punches hit harder. Nice battle

v- accomplisment

troublesome....u give a one line explanation....that aint a true vote get the fuck outa here.....thanks for the explanation casual....i can care less if i win or lose....i have no respect for people who dont explain votes.....so stfu and get outa here troublesome....

you're a little bitch

i summed the battle up in 7 lines, at least i fucking vote on battles...i voted on almost every single one, and apparently i'm not the only one who felt you lost this one

stop acting like a little homo and take your loss like a man

let your nuts hang youngin

A'yo this was a tite battle fo sho...

L.I...I thought you came hard dawg...you had some mad punches...opener was played but closer was tite...flow was near perfect, structure was a lil' bit off in places...overall tite verse dawg.

8/10

Accomplishment...same thing as L.I...dope punches...and your opener was also a lil played...but closer was also ill. Your punches was tite...your flow was dope...everythin' about your verse shined...nice dawg...

9/10

Vote- Accomplishment

No hate. Hit up this battle...Me Vs. Killah Bwoy

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127044

Hmmm ok

L.I- Not very good for u but still not bad had some Pretty good punches and ur Flow was personals were Decent..

Accomp-Pretty nice u had some good Punches and ur Flow was good Personals were aslo pretty good..

L.I=7.344/10
Accomp=8.431/10

Vote Accomp nice battle.

k this is my vote:

breakdown for l.i.:

flow:was working well for me nice job 7/10

volcab:pretty basic nothing i saw too cool 5/10

punches:best line,"With all them damn losses………it’s no wonder your known for KO’s!!…" i thought most of your lines worked well and were well directed at accomplishment good job 7/10


overall:19/30

breakdown for accomplishment:

flow:working nothing great though 6/10

volcab:basic nothing to say 5/10

punches:alright but not great no real stand out lines in my eyes 5/10

overall:17/30

vote--L.I.

This one was easy.....

LI had some OK punches but none were that great.
Flow was OK, blah, blah, blah......

Accomp just came harder with better punches.
His personals were crippling and his flow was there too...

Vote - Accomp

just realized accomplishment went over the limit sorry but i'm a have to dq him

L.I. wins