Riddlemethat vs Mad Dog
 

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okay...My schools jus about to finish. I'll post wen I get home in about half an hour or 45 minutes. Check ya in a bit.

This is the first battle i be ski-daddle rappin in/
Start shit simple throwin punches like javalins/
Eatin up ya lyrics thats pre-written like a vicodin/
Ta ease the pain i got you feelin, but oops you dropped the mic again/
Spit shit that you can't defend and use words you can't comprehend/
You procrasinate to give yourself more time to delete and re-send/
This shits fresher than your latest update at the gay lounge round the bend/
Up ass crack corner where you an ur bro are bound to be caught in incest again/
I drive past you in my merc and make you pump the gas in my little friend/
I don't even tip your ass cos it ain't worth the loss of the dime in the end/
I ain't got no reason to pretend to you cos you ain't no setter of trends/
You the broke ass nigga on the curb who keeps claimin u come from the ends/
I'm born and bred from the bottle to beer can crazy drunk an your soul I'll mend/
If I fed of your shit i know i'd most definately lose cos your shit is whitewashed/
You say it keystyle but you be checkin at least 15 websites to feed ya shit off/
You need help to type like a nigga with downs syndrome and a chesty cough/
You ain't no Kuniva or Kon-Artist when people see u they chuckle an laugh/
If personality came in bottles u'd need a life time supply to get by/
Cos you a small fry rapper, hit you up to the sky and from the ground watch u die/
My ambition to destroy is my ploy to the world that this guy sure did try/
To battle the riddle master so I got one for ya to try to solve/
This nigga think he bad, cos his name got two words/
Ones his mama an the others his attempt at a resolve/
Take a crack at who it is oh fuck it, the answer's you/

Aight 35 line spit 1 time chance only gotta keep on top well lets do this...

(Verse)
Riddle me this...Riddlemethat/
Who afraid of this fag wack cat/
thinkin he's hard walkin round wit that plastic bat/
Watch me merk this wanksta wit both hand tied behind my back/
Readin ur verse comin out all arms swingin hopin i'd disperse/
Now for that homie u'll only be leavin v.i.a a hearse/
And the gay jokes are for newbies who choke/
Coz they couldnt purchase better lyrics only coz they be broke/
Damn i know they say be real but y u admittin u a wanksta my friend/
Oh sorry i didnt catch that...
Hang on heres a riddle for you lets see if u can solve it/
I got six bullets in the chamber...do i need to revolve it??/
U think u can win wit lines more stretched than stretch armstrong/
Hold up stop u a flop not hott barely pop u should hurt the guy who led u along/
Oh sorry my bad it was me my bad for lettin u rap this long/
Didnt u read the sign this is RB not pop sing along/
U well known in the hood as every1's favourite bike/
Lets take this Housewife style and beat u wit the iron like Mike/
U prolly a girl tryin to fool me but i aint gullable syke/
I know some real fine lesbo hoes...but u the UGLIEST DYKE/

Ima stop at 20 aint got all day merked u lets get these votes up in here!!!

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You can`t -up- for other people you moron.

This was a good battle, both of the verses was hot, but the one verse that cought my eye the most was, riddlemethat. He had nice vocab, so did mad dog, but what cought my attention was riddlemethat!!!!!

Vote:riddlemethat

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I'd vote. But I have under 20 Posts. Nice battle though.

alright its like this riddlemethat you had good flow and structure..... but i liked maddogs punches better... maddog you need to work on ur structure a little bit but all in all my vote goes to maddog

okay

tyhis was an okya battle but nothing to special

riddle........your seriously need to work on your structure because it threw off you flow alot by having your structure that fucked up.........another thing is you need to work on rewording your punches so that they hit harder..................you had some okay wordplay other then that nothing goin

mad dog.........you aswell need to work on your structure but it wasnt as bad as riddles and your flow was a little easier to read.........your punches was good but you could re word them a little bit to make them hit harder......pc and keep elevating

v/mad

riddle-your seriously need to work on your structure because it threw off you flow alot by having your structure that fucked up another thing is you need to work on rewording your punches so that they hit harder you had some okay wordplay other then that nothing goin

mad dog-you aswell need to work on your structure but it wasnt as bad as riddles and your flow was a little easier to read your punches was good but you could re word them a little bit to make them hit harder pc and keep elevating

yeah but i vote mad

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Ohhhhhhhh shit this man mad dog killed it oh fuck man do what you do killin dis man

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Mad dog killed it cause he had way better punches man they was like killin you stay up mad

Mad Dog Ya Flow Was On Point Wit some nice punches,Riddle You Was Ight Too But Ya Punches Were Softer, And Overall I Just Enjoyed Readin Madd's Better. Good Battle Yall

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OMG..SHAMIRA shud be slapped for voting...

LMAO @ "what caught my attention was riddle"

mhuhhaaaaaa


herb

This is the first battle i be ski-daddle rappin in/
Start shit simple throwin punches like javalins/
Eatin up ya lyrics thats pre-written like a vicodin/
Ta ease the pain i got you feelin, but oops you dropped the mic again/

^^^ way too simple...and if u ever use a phrase like SKi Daddle again in rap, ur career will be OVER before it starts

To battle the riddle master so I got one for ya to try to solve/
This nigga think he bad, cos his name got two words/
Ones his mama an the others his attempt at a resolve/
Take a crack at who it is oh fuck it, the answer's you/

^^ thats absolute wackness...WTF..."name got two words? ?? That has to be the worst fucking line EVER in the HISTORY of rap


Riddle me this...Riddlemethat/
Who afraid of this fag wack cat/
thinkin he's hard walkin round wit that plastic bat/
Watch me merk this wanksta wit both hand tied behind my back/

^^ Creative..but u shudda kept a normal structure for this

U well known in the hood as every1's favourite bike/
Lets take this Housewife style and beat u wit the iron like Mike/
U prolly a girl tryin to fool me but i aint gullable syke/
I know some real fine lesbo hoes...but u the UGLIEST DYKE/

^^^ Decent...im not feeling the rhyming


UGH..this battle was disgusting

Vote: MAD DOG

Riddle...u should be shot for posting that wack ass shit...UGH

<--------------- Thinking about shooting SELF after reading that

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^^ and im black listed from this battle...but dat shit don't take away from the fact that MAD DOG won it

PERIOD.


AudI

riddlemethat U came with the first bar pretty hard in my opinion then U kept rhymin the same suffix (endless suffixes E.S) about half of your rhyme which was about average in skill. The rest was good. Ya flow was abit above average, structure was average, your complexity was alittle...alittle bit above average. Mad Dog u followed up aight with your first line came out kinda hard. Your flow was average, structure was a bit uneven around 75% of the time: abit below average, your complexity was average. Yo riddle ur verse had a significant advantage due to your complexity and your flow, Mad Dog I felt your verse should have been abit more complex and have a more versatile flow. I gave both of U mutual compliments so to sustain the morale and rules of judging... I did not show any one of you particular favor so I conclude to vote for riddlemethat.

vote=riddlemethat

20 posts...shit... i'm not even at 10 right now damn no count riddlemethat... :p

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dis wuz a decent dey flows were about even but riddle punches were harder so overall i would say tha my vote iz...........

vote=riddle

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BREAKDOWN

riddlemethat
yo dawg for a first time u did aight i guess. u had some ok flow but it needs a lot of improvement and ure structure was wack man, ure lines were stretched like fuck. u had some ok punches and a couple of personals but other than that ure spit was pretty basic. u need ot beef up ure punches and work on more personals to get wins playa. OVERALL 6/10

mad dog
dawg, u came gud in ure verse, ure flow was a little choppy in places but it managed to stay consistently ok throughout the verse. ure structure to cud use some work cuz sum of ure lines were a little stretched. ure punches were gud, some were really strong whilst some were pretty weak tho, i liked ure opener, pure sickness, as soon as i saw the cat's name i knew u were gonna drop sumthin like that. u need to put more thought into ure punches tho, beef them up some more and fix ure structure.
OVERALL - 7.5/10


V/ - Mad Dog

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Yeah lets get this thread closed... drop a vote for my man here.

dis battle wuz str8 and all but i feel dat riddle came a lil harder in da punches and flow but mad got him in da personals but vote go's 2 riddle

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riddle me that won this because he had a very nice flow and punches and diserves to win this, mad dog you did ok but not the best becuase your verse and punches were kind of weak no offence. They both could of elevated and use more wordplay and multies.

vote riddle

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